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So, a fairly straightforward assignment, what's mainly to be done is source it, revamp it, and basically tidy it up. Any additional info you can add is also welcome. Good luck --TwelveTalk to me 13:13, April 20, 2012 (UTC)
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A self-chosen task. --TwelveTalk to me 13:13, April 20, 2012 (UTC)
I think mine's almost done Twelve. Can you take a look here and tell me whether I should further improve it or publish it. IlMualim 08:52, April 21, 2012 (UTC)
Right, not bad, but could be improved. Mostly double links, Altaïr and the Kingdom for example. The way you cleaned it up was nice, removing OOU content. Um, the King Richard image can be removed and you can replace it with the Crusader image from the article. As for the page, I noticed there was no mention of Haras, maybe you could add that in there. The page is devoid of images really, so if you can think of any images from the game that could be added, contact this guy for images. Keep up the good work. --TwelveTalk to me 14:22, April 22, 2012 (UTC)
