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So, a fairly straightforward assignment, what's mainly to be done is source it, revamp it, and basically tidy it up. Any additional info you can add is also welcome. Good luck --TwelveTalk to me 13:13, April 20, 2012 (UTC)
A self-chosen task. --TwelveTalk to me 13:13, April 20, 2012 (UTC)
I think mine's almost done Twelve. Can you take a look here and tell me whether I should further improve it or publish it. IlMualim 08:52, April 21, 2012 (UTC)
Right, not bad, but could be improved. Mostly double links, Altaïr and the Kingdom for example. The way you cleaned it up was nice, removing OOU content. Um, the King Richard image can be removed and you can replace it with the Crusader image from the article. As for the page, I noticed there was no mention of Haras, maybe you could add that in there. The page is devoid of images really, so if you can think of any images from the game that could be added, contact this guy for images. Keep up the good work. --TwelveTalk to me 14:22, April 22, 2012 (UTC)
Hey Twelve should I include a section mentioning all the flags related to the Crusaders? 'Cause if I doo it will be OOU references won't it? IlMualimWanna Chat 10:17, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
Yep, if you want, you can mention it in the trivia though. --TwelveTalk to me 10:20, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
There. Removed all OOU references, double links, added and tidied info, and put the flags under the trivia section. Anything else Twelve? IlMualimWanna Chat 11:34, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
A few things. First just remove the table from the trivia. Change it into a few lines. Also, remove the Teutonic, Templar and Hospitalier crosses from the gallery, they don't really pertain to the subject. Um, The second image of Haras during the seige can be removed, better suited on his own page, the image of the Hospitalier knight can be resized and put in the gallery, it looks a bit odd just standing out there. Double links are still present through the page, Assassins, Haras, King Richard, Robert de Sable and Assault on Masyaf for example. You can remove the links in the image description of the gallery to eliminate most of the double links. Other than that, it looks good. --TwelveTalk to me 12:08, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
Ok done that, just one thing though, I added another pic in the gallery, check if it is worth being there. Nothing else other than what you told. IlMualimWanna Chat 13:19, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
Right, nice touch, you could just maybe add a different caption to his image, like "Robert with his Templar crusaders." Also, there are still a few double links: Assassins, Altair and Robert de sable. Also, the AC1 in the trivia can be changed to Assassin's Creed. Other than that, it looks good. --TwelveTalk to me 13:51, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
K, it's done. Tell me whether or not it is ready to be published 12. IlMualimWanna Chat 16:31, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
Hey 12. The assignment's done, let me know when you have a new one for me, or if I'm supposed to choose one like last time. IlMualimWanna Chat 06:08, May 4, 2012 (UTC)
This page is good, it's writing is well but there are some issues, the picture is squishing the text between itself and the infobox, lacks quotes and could be expanded partially. You wanted an MP task, this is where you start.
