User blog:Jizzytatsu/I would like your feedback please.

Hello fellow AC-fans,

Since I had absolutely nothing to do past Christmas Break (sick... ggggrrrreeeaaatttt) I decided to put together a concept for an Assassin's Creed with a French Revolution setting. I've included a short synopsis, character descriptions and a list of gameplay notes & alterations in it. I'm working on the full story in a different version, but that isn't done yet. 

You can read it here: https://www.dropbox.com/s/o0y5i3p19gr41zj/NS%20ACR%20concept.pdf

It's presumed that the reader has played all main Assassin's Creeds to date.

Now, I would like your feedback on this story and changelog. What did you like, what didn't you like, what could be better? All feedback is very welcome, as long as it's constructive.

Thanks in advance, Duc