Thread:Kaloneous/@comment-81.151.7.10-20111110234921

I cleaned up the article under the heading "Personality and characteristics" and you wrote "the other edit read better". Right... Apart from the fact the original article looks like it was written by a 5year old, the grammar and specifically the "tenses" are all over the place and wrong. Fine, if you want to keep the old version then do it, but then this Wikia is taking a step backwards, not forwards. Also, the article is incorrect in what happens in the game i.e. Tamir does not kill an "innocent civilian" and the Templar's were never a "secret orginaztion". Just saying...<ac_metadata title="Tamir edit"> </ac_metadata>