Talk:Yanmei

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I know this is a new article, so pardon me if I'm adding unnecessary pressure, but it's obvious that this article needs a lot of work. Events leading to Yanmei's death must be explained for clarity. Context must be given. This applies not just to her death though, but as to why Natalya Aliyev knocked her out, and the significance behind Yanmei explaining the Creed to the party. As well, the article needs to clarify who the teenagers are when introducing them, and who any character introduced, such as Natalya, Isaiah, and Griffin are. I explained the latter two, but as I haven't read the source, I don't know too well how to best describe who Natalya is. Finally, the article needs to be sourced. I'm assuming it's Last Descendants, but rather than acting on this assumption, I added the appropriate template calling for a source instead. Sol Pacificus^(Cyfiero) 09:27, March 17, 2017 (UTC)