Assassin's Creed Wiki:Apprentices/TheSt0ryTeller/PigeonCoop

The following page is an apprentice assignment page, which acts as a connection between the apprentice, TheSt0ryTeller, and their Master, AssassinRome. It exists as an external talk page, aimed at dealing with all aspects of the apprenticeship. Only the above mentioned users and the staff have permission to converse here. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the wiki.

First Project: Al Mualim - Completed

Well, here it is, Teller. Your first project. Despite being the main antagonist of the first game and being a major character overall, the article lacks in several ways: it lacks detail regarding his life, the formating is bad, and there should be more sections such as his duel with Altaïr or the attack on Masyaf. Not to mention a lack of pictures and quotes.

Difficulty Rating: 6.7

Requirements

• Create a section regarding his early life. Several articles and help you with this. I refer to the following: Siege of Masyaf, Umar Ibn-La'Ahad.
• Completely revamp the "Later life" section, and create other sections with the 4th Heading format for "Attack on Masyaf", and "Hunt for the Nine" section, etc. Remember to add necessary pictures to each of these sections and quotes that fit well with both the character and the situation.
• Now, when you go to a character article you expect a decent image. Well, I afraid the Al Mualim one lacks. So be sure to get a better image, a full body one if possible, excluding the full body concept art in the gallery. If you can't get the image yourself, request one of our other users to take it for you. That way it shows you're improvising.
• Finally, there is no time limit. Take your time to perfect this artcle.

Master's notes:

• Good luck. I look forward to seeing the ending result. Assassino de Roma 16:12, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
• Final result: Very good. Assassino de Roma 15:15, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Apprentice To-Do List:

• Siege of Masyaf- COMPLETED

• Siege of Masyaf (Corrections)- COMPLETED

• Image Addition- COMPLETED

• Hunt for the Nine details- COMPLETED

• Hunt for the Nine (Corrections)- COMPLETED
• Duel between Altair and Al Mualim (Corrections)- COMPLETED
• Last Minute Correction- COMPLETED

Second Project: Antonio de Magianis - Completed

This article in poor condition, barely any pictures and lacking information and decent quotes. Could use a big revamp. Remember, this is like the other task, you are allowed to improvise and request other users better at images to take some for you.

Difficulty rating: 7.4

Requirements

• Revamp the whole biography section, and add other titles in the biography in the 3rd heading format.
• Add quotes for his biography and other sections. Try and make sure these quotes fit well with the character and the current situation.
• Images, HQ if possible. Remember, you can request these images from other users.
• Remember, his biography is to include sections from Assassin's Creed II and Assassin's Creed II: Discovery. If you didn't play Discovery, use other articles covering that for more information, or walkthroughs on the internet.
• There is no time limit either.

Master's notes:

• Once again look forward to seeing the ending result and promoting you. Assassino de Roma 14:21, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Mini Task

A Mini Task that is completely optional, but may gain you a extra reward providing how well you do. Create personal userboxes for the following:

• Jack White: Requests a userbox simply with "This user likes cake". If you are unsure of what colours to use of anything else, ask this user on the IRC. Picture of cake.
• Donnie Darko: Requests a userbox with "This user owns a hidden blade". Not sure of what colours to use, once again, ask this user on the IRC. Picture of Hidden Blade. Make sure it fits well in the userbox.
• Agent Washington: User requests a personal userbox with nothing to do with Assassin's Creed. Userbox with "This user makes Agent Washington's Freelancer skills look noobish." Userbox is to have the colours of yellow and grey. Ask Agent Washington about how to obtain a decent picture of the character that fits the userbox on the IRC if confused.

Once done, leave the code on the talkpages of these users.

Third Project: Assassin's Creed: Altaïr's Chronicles - Completed

Third Project, something you seemed willing to do. In a okay shape, but could be far better. Once again, if you are in need of images, request it from users who can provide quickly.

Difficulty rating: 8.5

Requirements

• Revamp whole article, story, gameplay, etc.
• Write anything in the plot with past tense.
• Decent images fitting well with the information.
• No time limit either.

Master's notes

Once again, good luck ; ) Assassino de Roma 15:19, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Fourth Project: Hunt in Cyprus - Completed

Article needs a bit of a revamp. Aside from the writing, most of it is good.

Difficulty rating: 7.3

Requirements

• Correct everything in present tense to past.
• Some of the writting is good, but not formal enough such as "After taking quite a beating, Demetris cracked." Not that it is very poorly wirtten, but not very formal.
• There are some minor spelling errors that must be fixed too.
• Some pictures are placed next to information that doesn't fit with it. Please correct this.

Master's notes

• As I will unfortunately be absent for 11 days I expect the main task to at least be done. Assassino de Roma 17:49, August 4, 2011 (UTC)
• Both are event article, if you do a great job on both of them, you might be rewarded with a merit. Assassino de Roma 17:49, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Apprentice To-Do List

• Put into PAST tense.- Completed
• Rearange pictures. - Completed
• Check spelling mistakes. -Completed
• Read over it. -Completed
• Take off Revamp tags. - Completed
• Present. (To be evaluated.)

Mini task

Your mini task is to do a minor revamp on the The Apple's Journey|Apple's Journey article. Some areas are good, such as the Renaissance sections, others are not. Revamp area that are poorly written, lack quotes and pictures. Remember, write this more about the Apple itself, not the person that is wielding it.

Fifth Project: Adolf Hitler - Completed

Needs some revamping among other things,

Difficulty Rating: 4.5

Requirements:

• Minor revamp on information, add the Personality section.

Masters Notes:

• Good luck, Teller. I'll be checking up on this soon. Assassino de Roma 09:57, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Apprentice To-Do List:

• Add Template- Completed
• Spell Check it (C)
• Add an Early Life Section (C)
• Add a Characteristics and Personality Section (C)
• Add an Appearance section (C)
• Present (To be evaluated)

Mini Task (To Be Completed):

Yes, I assigned myself one, hope you don't mind, it's a community one and will take time and effore to do. The Advance Guide one, will explain more about the Universe of IRC, Templates such as Revamps and Stubs. It will take up time and will be completed.

Sixth Project: Assassin's Creed: Brotherhood novel - Completed

Article needs a bit of work. Well, all it really needs is a plot summary.

Diffuculty Rating: 7.0

Requirements:

• Similar to how Assassin's Creed: The Secret Crusade is done, you need a plot summary. So like the Secret Crusade article, do a small paragraph to summarize each chapter.
• Remember to add plenty of links
• You don't have to go into alot of specific details, only to note down important parts from a chapter or anything else you feel necessary.
• And finally use the spoiler templates.

Master's Notes:

• Look forward to seeing this. Good luck. Assassino de Roma 11:40, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Seventh Project: Duel on Lord Basilisk's Ship - Completed

Article needs to be created, templates and info from the events after Quest for the Chalice and before Search for the Apple articles.

Difficulty Rating: 8.1

Requirements

• Right down the information.
• Make sure there are no spelling errors.
• Right it all in past tense
• Add plent of pictures and quotes.
• Go into detail, but do not make it drag on.
• You have three days to complete it.

Master's Notes:

• Good luck. Assassino de Roma 10:47, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Apprentice To-Do List

• Add Templates (C)
• Add Infobox (C)
• Add Categories (C)
• Add Starting Info.. (C)
• Add Traitor Info.. (Harash)

Eight Project: Rise and Fall of Altaïr|Rise and Fall of Altaïr  - Completed

This may take you a while. This is a campaign article. To understand best the layout of this, I refer to Liberation of Rome. Assassino de Roma 11:36, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Difficulty rating: 9.5

Requirements:

• Summaries on this article for Search for the Apple, Attack on Masyaf, Hunt for the Nine, Battle of Arsuf, and the Retaking of Masyaf.
• Go into detail, but not too much. Mainly the important parts of each event need to be noted down.
• Have an infobox with a picture that fits the overral series of events.
• Add HQ pictures that fit with the information it is placed next to.
• Add necessary quotes that work well with the situation, or the character.
• Write it all in past tense.
• Make sure to have plenty of links.
• Remember to have a small link at the top of each section with the main event. For example, you do the Hunt for the Nine section, have a link to the main article before the information.
• Once again, check the Liberation of Rome to know how to lay it out.

Master's Notes:

• This should take you a while, so take your time to perfect this article. Do a good job, which I'm sure you will, you might get more than one award. Assassino de Roma 11:36, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Apprentice To-Do List

• Create the Infobox (C)
• Work on Search for the Apple (C)
• Work on Hunt for the Nine part of the article (C)
• Work on Battle of Arsuf section (C)
• Work on Retaking of Masyaf Article (C)
• Work on Aftermath (C)
• Spell check (C)
• Add Images (C)
• Add Quotes (C)
• Add Links (C)
• Read over (C)
• Present. (C)

Ninth Project: GA Promotion

Group Assignment with: Il Lupo From the Blood of a Templar project, you and Lupo will each choose 3 Templars and will work to make together to make them worthy of GA Status. No time limit but I advise you 2 don't take too long. D. Cello

Marco Barbarigo - Completed

Bernardo Baroncelli - Completed

Carlo Grimaldi - Completed

Lupo's Selections To-Do

Stefano da Bagnone - Completed

Francesco Salviati - Completed

Silvio Barbarigo - Completed

Tenth Project: Auditore Execution - Completed

This article I expect to be promoted to GA (or for an extra reward, FA status) status within 3 days.

Difficulty rating:: 9.0

Requirements

• Revamp the article completely.
• Think up new section titles, and do not, do not give the title extra capital letters. An example: instead of "Last Man Standing", do "Last man standing" only. Section may only have extra capitals when a name of someone or city is in it.
• All the current pictures are all right. Though I'd prefer some of a "Vatsa standard" (Very HQ images). Search the wiki for better HQ images, or get them yourself, or request them from another user.
• Make sure to add quotes and dialogue to sections, though do not make them drag on.
• Provide well written information.
• Add a small section Ezio collecting the bodies of his father and brothers and giving them their rites.
• Complete within 3 days to at least a GA a standard.

Master's notes

• Good luck. Romeh ^{Speak now} 16:28, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Apprentice To-Do List

Eleventh Project: The Nine - Completed

Your next task is to revamp the articles for the eight of Altaïr's targets in the first Assassin's Creed game. Robert de Sable seems fine to me so it will not be apart of your task.

Difficulty rating: 9.0

Requirements

• Revamp the following articles:
  • Tamir
  • Garnier de Naplouse
  • Talal
  • Abu'l Nuqoud
  • William of Montferrat
  • Majd Addin
  • Sibrand
  • Jubair al Hakim
• In some of your revamps such Bernardo Baroncelli, you did not use a very formal language. Do not make this mistake here.
• There is no time limit.

Master's notes

Good luck. Romeh ^{Speak now} 20:06, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Apprentice To-Do List