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The following text is a continuous log of DarkFeather's apprenticeship. It exists for staff eyes only. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the wiki.


Current Assignment (Major)[edit source]

Current Assignment (Minor)[edit source]

Previous Assignments (Major)[edit source]

Previous Assignments (Minor)[edit source]

  • Keep me updated on the Fanon project

Evaluation[edit source]

Informants, Twitter Assassination Experience, and Unlock the Animus Challenge[edit source]

So the overall work was done pretty well, with only a few minor errors. Mostly capitalisation, links, and contractions, but that can all be learned and fixed easily. Writing seemed at an acceptable standard but we'll need a massive revamp involving a lot of rewording to properly find out. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig Enter... THE SCARY DOOR 03:28, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Fanon Project[edit source]

I believe the Fan Section is up and running now so there's no need for this anymore. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig Enter... THE SCARY DOOR 03:28, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lucy Stillman[edit source]

This assignment was a test to see how quickly Dark could finish a set task, as I had my doubts about his activity level. However it was completed with the utmost haste and I honestly wasn't expecting anything quicker than a week. So after shattering my only real concern I believe Dark is very nearly ready for Staff and the future of his Apprenticeship will hopefully be a swift one. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig Funk Man's Funky House of Funk 04:05, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Five For Fighting[edit source]

Well 4 of the 5 pages were mostly pretty good. Check my revisions and you'll notice the main issue was a lack of links and sectioning errors. I did also spot a contraction. You should also be aware of a new template for linking to Wikipedia, it's {{Wiki|Pagename|Article appearance}}. So Accipiter, Russian Revolution, Sef Ibn-La'Ahad, and World War II were generally done well. However Manuel Palaiologos had a few mistakes which should be noted. You didn't remove those lengthy links, they should've been obvious. The Templar Connection section should've been removed and fitted in elsewhere, though even if it were to stay, we use minimal caps in titles here, so no capital C. But most importantly... you left in a link to Manuel in his own page, I didn't even know that was possible. So after reviewing all these assignments, my conclusion is that although you are a great coder and competent editor, the little stupid errors are killing you. When you asked me what was the one thing you didn't want me to see you do, I said it was these small mistakes, and it's these mistakes that I found an abundance of, and you don't appear to be correcting that fault at any speed. Still, they are small, and I have to believe that you should one day fix this habit. So, I will give you rank 14: {{AppRank|14|Maestro}}, and I will talk with the other Staff about where we go from here. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig Funk Man's Funky House of Funk 03:37, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Staff Comments[edit source]

  • Apprentice has proved useful in minor revamps and rather social. Perhaps a community man too. ; ) Assassino de Roma 15:08, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
  • Apprentice surprises me every time, he does not back down from assignments and does his best to get them right the first time, and succeeds. Very accomplished editor, I'm proud to call him my student. -- Rayne Message 21:40, July 17, 2011 (UTC)
  • Now under Blaidd's instruction, Dark seems highly motivated and eager for work. He seems to be working quickly and efficiently, though from what I've seen, he does seem to overload articles with images, particularly on the right side. Also, Dark needs to edit more on the wiki in general. He should possibly get involved in GA and FA voting and nominating articles, but overall his activity outside of assignments is lacking. Nostalgia Let’s talk. 00:27, February 25, 2012 (UTC)