Assassin's Creed Wiki:Apprentices/Amnestyyy/PigeonCoop

The following page is an apprentice assignment page, which acts as a connection between the apprentice, Amnestyyy, and their Master, Elchzard. It exists as an external talk page, aimed at dealing with all aspects of the apprenticeship. Only the above mentioned users and the staff have permission to converse here. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the wiki.

Main Assignments

Project 1: Savonarola's lieutenants - "Elch can't think of a creative name"

Assignment details for Main Project 1.

Afternoon, Apprentice. I'm dropping two tasks in here for you while I'm out next week, and here is the first. It essentially involves the standardization of the pages for Savonarola's Lieutenants. It shouldn't be too challenging for you. :P So, here's the pages: The Painter The Doctor The Preacher The Farmer The Condottorio The Merchant The Nobleman The Priest The Captain Guard So, your task is to standardize the pages – how you do that is completely up to you. However, I am going to offer my advice on some things you could do – obviously, you should try to think of more ways in which to make these pages standard. Suggested tasks Standardize headings Full body (or similar) image, image of death. Full body image rendered, if possible and it looks nice. And anything else I mentioned earlier. If you can't remember them, trust your judgement, padawan. :P So, yep, this shouldn't be too challenging for you. Have fun, Apprentice. :) Oh, also – No time limit, and commissioning others for work is fine, as long as you really can't do it yourself – i.e, If you don't have the resources to take images from the game, or render any images, asking Vatsy, or someone else awesome is perfectly allowed. AREA OF FOCUS: Formatting, Forward Planning DIFFICULTY RATE:' 3 or 4/10 – Thinking about the best way to do this before you really start will help.

Apprentice's To Do

Apprentice's To Do list for Main Project 1.

Fix links at the project page (yay! Brownie points :3) Standardise text: The Painter The Doctor The Preacher The Farmer The Condottorio The Merchant The Nobleman The Priest The Captain Guard Full body image (rendered?): The Painter The Doctor The Preacher The Farmer The Condottorio The Merchant The Nobleman The Priest The Captain Guard Final moment image: The Painter The Doctor The Preacher The Farmer The Condottorio The Merchant The Nobleman The Priest The Captain Guard Optional: Think of a way to make the pages more accesable : Redirects around the page have been deleted, each page is now called "name", except for the ones that have a double. They're called "Name (Savonarola's lieutenant)" *no "The" is included in any name*

Results

First thing for me to say is "Well done!". So, here - Well done! :)
You did everything I asked of you, and you did it with style. :)
There are some formatting issues in the "Final Words" sections, but it's all cool, I'll take a look later and see what, if anything, can be done. You also missed out the speech marks in some of the speeches, and for the Priest, you forgot to italicize it. That's all the critizism there is to give, if you can even call it critizism. xD
So that, my girl, is a pass, with flying colours. Good job! :D
That really is all I can say. Well done, Recluta.

Elchzard ^{(Talking is fun.)} 20:18, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Minor Tasks

Project 1: La città dei fiori

Details transported via IRC.
Essentially offers something to work on if Main Assignment 1 is finished before I return from my short absence.
Involves general revamp of Damascus page.

Results

Mmm, fairly nice. Still can be better, but you got it mainly matching the MoS, and added a fair amount of information. One thing I'm gonna pick you up on is the lack of Era icons - nothing major, but it does add something to an article like that.
Annnnd, I think that's about it. You could have done more, but you did what I asked - Well done. :)

Elchzard ^{(Talking is fun.)} 00:53, September 1, 2011 (UTC)