Assassin's Creed Wiki:Good Article Nominations/Archive 3

This page lists all the previous nominations for Good status. Every article nominations listed here have been concluded, and transferred here for reviewing purposes only.

Good Status Nominations

Talal - Yay

6 days and 5 Staff votes.. --Vatsa (talk • Gentek) 03:07, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

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I seem to be rushing these articles through, but seeing as they all seem to do quite well in the voting process, I see no reason to stop my work yet. I fixed the final words section, sourced the images, removed the unneeded video, replaced some images and did some general rewording. I think this one is good enough for GA as well. Nesty Contact me! 08:43, November 24, 2011 (UTC) Yay As nominator/revamper. Nesty Contact me! 08:43, November 24, 2011 (UTC) Nice article. Nostalgia AC Let's talk 15:15, November 24, 2011 (UTC) Bam. -- Master Sima Yi 21:46, November 24, 2011 (UTC) Yay. --Jack WallsSupermen 16:48, November 25, 2011 (UTC) Got no complaints here. --Teller Words, On my Screen :O 22:40, November 26, 2011 (UTC) Nice. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig Enter... THE SCARY DOOR 07:01, November 27, 2011 (UTC) Yep, looks good. =GuardDog 02:39, November 29, 2011 (UTC) Nay Comments

Abu'l Nuqoud - Yay

Another one, again? --Vatsa (talk • Gentek) 13:00, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

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Another nomination from me. I have fixed the articles sourcing, sourced images, added new images (Thanks to Vatsa), cleaned up the trivia, fixed the formatting in the final words section, fixed some info in the infobox and did the general rewording. I believe it to be ready, if you do not, tell me why and I'll see to it that it's fixed. Nesty Contact me! 22:07, November 26, 2011 (UTC) Yay As nominator/revamper Nesty Contact me! 22:07, November 26, 2011 (UTC) Looks good. --Teller Words, On my Screen :O 22:40, November 26, 2011 (UTC) Alright. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig Enter... THE SCARY DOOR 07:01, November 27, 2011 (UTC) Did minor wording edits, but still a yay from me. =GuardDog 02:39, November 29, 2011 (UTC) I did some minor grammar work, good article though. Nostalgia Let's talk. 03:24, November 30, 2011 (UTC) Nay Comments

Emilio Barbarigo - Yay

Enough votes. -- D. Cello 00:14, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

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I revamped and expanded on this article, adding personality and early life sections, as well as cleaning up the rest of the article. I've spoken with Guard, and he agrees after a few suggestions. Nostalgia Let's talk. 15:10, November 28, 2011 (UTC) Yay As nominator. Nostalgia Let's talk. 15:10, November 28, 2011 (UTC) Did some rewording/MoS related stuff, and it seems fine now. Nesty Contact me! 19:22, November 28, 2011 (UTC) Well done. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig Enter... THE SCARY DOOR 02:26, November 29, 2011 (UTC) All my comments have been covered. =GuardDog 02:39, November 29, 2011 (UTC) Read it straight after you put it up for voting. Just been busy. :P Teller Words, On my Screen :O 02:53, December 3, 2011 (UTC) Creepy infobox image. But still, good work. --Jack WallsSupermen 02:54, December 3, 2011 (UTC) Nay Comments On a side note: I've provided a new infobox render (On Sima's request). Nesty Contact me! 12:12, December 4, 2011 (UTC) I'd vote twice for that new infobox image, but a comment will have to do. --Jack WallsSupermen 11:39, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

William of Montferrat - Yay

Sometimes I get a good feeling about this article. Elchzard ^{(Talking is fun)} 21:03, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

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Oh dear, another one? Yes. Another one. Let's see.... I did pretty much the same as I did to the other articles. Go ahead and vote. If you don't think it is good enough, tell me why and I'll make sure to fix it. Nesty Contact me! 19:41, November 29, 2011 (UTC) Yay As revamper/nominator Nesty Contact me! 19:41, November 29, 2011 (UTC) My comments have been covered. Nostalgia Let's talk. 21:20, November 30, 2011 (UTC) Alrighty. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig Enter... THE SCARY DOOR 04:54, December 3, 2011 (UTC) Wording is good, good images. I believe it to be worthy. --Teller Words, On my Screen :O 20:04, December 6, 2011 (UTC) Niiceee.. --Vatsa (talk • Gentek) 02:05, December 7, 2011 (UTC) Nay Comments In my opinion the biography section needs to be subdivided, and the opening quote for that section needs to either be shortened (or replaced if it loses its meaning when shortened). It could also use some more images from when William is inside the citadel for the gallery. Lastly, I believe that the image from the final words section should be made smaller, and a medium sized image inserted into the personality section, if it makes sense there. Those are just my thoughts on the article, but do those, and I'll vote Yay. Nostalgia Let's talk. 03:21, November 30, 2011 (UTC) I did as you asked, mostly. Biography has been subdivided, quote has been replaced by a shorter one, though it gives less explanation. Final death image has been made smaller as well. An image in the personality section would both be senseless and would ruin the articles lay-out unnecessarily. I'll request more images from Vatsa when I meet him on the IRC. Nesty Contact me! 08:38, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Majd Addin - Yay

Oooooooh. The criteria met here are giving me a good feeling. Elchzard ^(T) _{21:21, December 10, 2011 (UTC)}

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Same story as the ones above. did everything I did to them, and if you are not content, tell me why so that I can fix it. Nesty Contact me! 09:19, December 1, 2011 (UTC) Yay As revamper/nominator --Nesty Contact me! 09:19, December 1, 2011 (UTC) Went through and did some rewording on it myself. Now it's much better. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig Enter... THE SCARY DOOR 04:08, December 6, 2011 (UTC) Good wording (for a tyrant at least), but seriously, good job Nesty (and the others who helped with these pages). These pages are worthy. --Teller Words, On my Screen :O 20:08, December 6, 2011 (UTC) Hmm, didn't serve the Templar cause and yet kept around to instill fear. --Vatsa (talk • Gentek) 02:05, December 7, 2011 (UTC) Looks good now, with some rewording done by Nesty and some HQ images provided by Vatsa. Nostalgia Let's talk. 02:10, December 7, 2011 (UTC) Yay, a good read and great images. -- ► Kaloneous ◄ ♣HelpDesk♣ 05:40, December 7, 2011 (UTC) Nay Most of the wording on the page is quite awkward to read, it doesn't seem to flow very well. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig Enter... THE SCARY DOOR 04:54, December 3, 2011 (UTC As War and Blaidd have said, the gallery needs some new, higher quality images that provide a better visual for the article. Also, the wording does seem awkward to read and just appears "difficult" to read, if that makes sense. Honestly, I wish I could be more descriptive, but it's difficult even for myself to pinpoint exactly where the wording needs improvement, so I apologize for that. Nostalgia Let's talk. 04:59, December 3, 2011 (UTC) Comments I've done some work, but it could use some new images. The ones there are a bit low quality, and could also use some more for the gallery. If what I've requested are met, I'll vote Yay. --Jack WallsSupermen 03:33, December 3, 2011 (UTC) I did a lot of rewording on the page, so I hope that objections is fixed now. I have requested new images from Vatsa (we all know they'll be good quality), and I will put them on the page as soon as he has uploaded them. Once I have, I'll leave another comment here. --Nesty Contact me! 10:34, December 3, 2011 (UTC) Vatsa has added the images, as requested. Please check the page again and reconsider your votes. Nesty Contact me! 19:06, December 6, 2011 (UTC) The page looks good now, except the image for the "Personality" section now appears low-quality in comparison to the images from the rest of the article, at least to me (No offense Cello :P.). If you add a Vatsa image of Majd's death, or are able to acquire a higher-quality image of the death of Majd, I'd gladly vote Yay on this article. Nostalgia Let's talk. 22:33, December 6, 2011 (UTC) Replaced one of the images from gallery and moved the assassination image. That's what happens when a jpg format is displayed along pngs.. XD --Vatsa (talk • Gentek) 02:05, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Jubair al Hakim - Yay

7 days, enough votes. I like turtles. Elchzard ^{(Talking is fun)} 14:22, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

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I guess I'm driving everyone here insane with my nominations, but here's another one. Chief Scholar of Damascus has been revamped as well. Did the same to him as to the others. Opinions, please! Nesty Contact me! 13:28, December 4, 2011 (UTC) Yay As revamper/nominator Nesty Contact me! 13:28, December 4, 2011 (UTC) My favourite of the nine, you did good work on his page. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig Enter... THE SCARY DOOR 04:08, December 6, 2011 (UTC) Looks good. No complaints on my part. --Teller Words, On my Screen :O 19:53, December 6, 2011 (UTC) Did some minor work, but it looks good. Nostalgia Let's talk. 22:33, December 6, 2011 (UTC) --Vatsa (talk • Gentek) 02:05, December 7, 2011 (UTC) Yay! Same reasons as R BlaiddDraig. Great job on this articles. -- ► Kaloneous ◄ ♣HelpDesk♣ 05:42, December 7, 2011 (UTC) Nay Comments

Pilgrimage to Masyaf - Closed

Closing vote as per nominator's request.. --Vatsa (talk • Gentek) 14:57, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

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Good article. Good formatting, quotes, high quality pictures and written well. Credit goes to Toppers. Assassin-Rome (Talk if you will) 20:50, December 7, 2011 (UTC) Yay Yay. Assassin-Rome (Talk if you will) 20:50, December 7, 2011 (UTC) I slightly expanded the aftermath section. You have my vote. Nesty Contact me! 10:38, December 12, 2011 (UTC) Nay Comments Aftermath section could use some expansion. I do agree it is written well, but yeah, expand the Aftermath abit and then I'll vote "Yay" Teller Words, On my Screen :O 10:39, December 8, 2011 (UTC) As Teller said, the article does look good, but the Aftermath section needs expansion. Add to that section, and you'll get my vote. Nostalgia AC Let's talk. 15:06, December 11, 2011 (UTC) Aftermath section has had a slight expansion, please have a look and reconsider your vote. Nesty Contact me! 10:38, December 12, 2011 (UTC) I believe this article can be shortened (I see a lot of unnecessary stuff there). Could use better quotes. Also better wording. If those are met, I might just vote. --Jack WallsSupermen 11:22, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Sibrand - Yay

What I do, I do for... --Vatsa (talk • Gentek) 15:33, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

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The last of the nine AC1 targets to reach GA. I have, once again, did everything I could, hoping it is good enough for you guys. If not, let me know and I'll fix it. Nesty Contact me! 14:15, December 11, 2011 (UTC) Yay As revamper/nominator Nesty Contact me! 14:15, December 11, 2011 (UTC) Congratulations on getting all these to GA. I assume the Templars from ACII are next? =P -- 'R BlaiddDdraig Enter... THE SCARY DOOR 04:14, December 12, 2011 (UTC) Seems to be right on target, nice job Nesty. SubtlePen Up to chat? 17:43, December 12, 2011 (UTC) Great work and, as Blaidd said, congratulations. Half the Templars from ACII are already done for you. XD --Teller Words, On my Screen :O 18:49, December 12, 2011 (UTC) As both Teller and Blaidd have said, congratulations Nesty. These targets are now all well-written and complete articles with some great images. Nostalgia AC Let's talk. 21:09, December 12, 2011 (UTC) Sure, good images, complete info. =GuardDog 03:30, December 13, 2011 (UTC) Nay Comments

Malfatto - Yay

He does look like a turtle.. --Vatsa (talk • Gentek) 15:33, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

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What? Really? You thought I was done already? Not even close! I think our lovable, murderous doctor is ready for his spot in the GA-gallery. Yay As revamper/nominator Nesty Contact me! 14:07, December 12, 2011 (UTC) I enjoy birds, and this man bears a striking resemblance to one. All in all a very well written article. Subject 12 Talk to me 14:21, December 12, 2011 (UTC) The doctor has been doctored well; a yes from me. SubtlePen Up to chat? 17:41, December 12, 2011 (UTC) Do I remove the mask to close his eyes or do I just leave. Nah, screw it, I'll leave it. --Teller Words, On my Screen :O 18:49, December 12, 2011 (UTC) "State your name, rank, and intention." - "The Doctor, Doctor, fun." -- 'R BlaiddDdraig Enter... THE SCARY DOOR 03:17, December 13, 2011 (UTC) Really one of the more interesting multiplayer characters. Article's neat and complete, worthy of the spot. =GuardDog 03:30, December 13, 2011 (UTC) Nay Comments

Antonio Maffei - Yay

He took a leap of faith a still survived.. --Vatsa (talk • Gentek) 03:41, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

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I've done some major expansion and addition of multiple sections to the article. I've also "touched up" the rest of the article, with a good amount of rewording, removal of bad images, and just general clean up. I believe it's GA worthy, so let's vote. Nostalgia AC Let's talk. 21:39, December 12, 2011 (UTC) Yay As nominator and revamper. Nostalgia AC Let's talk. 21:39, December 12, 2011 (UTC) Sure, its alright. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig Enter... THE SCARY DOOR 03:17, December 13, 2011 (UTC) No complaints from me. =GuardDog 03:30, December 13, 2011 (UTC) Better. Not perfect, but good enough. Nesty Contact me! 04:57, December 13, 2011 (UTC) Took his time to die. Kept jumping off the tower.. o_O --Vatsa (talk • Gentek) 03:41, December 21, 2011 (UTC) Nay Could do with a little more rewording. It's almost there, but not entirely. If you see to this, I might change my vote. Nesty Contact me! 21:59, December 12, 2011 (UTC) Comments

Ristoro - Yay

And it's a hoooome run! --Jack ^Walls_Supermen 19:46, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

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Brother Ristoro, the Minim priest. Not my best job, but I think it is good enough for GA now. I reworded, added a P&C section and did some more general work. Good enough? Vote Yay. Not good enough? Tell me why, and I'll make it so. Nesty Contact me! 17:19, December 14, 2011 (UTC) Yay As revamper/nominator Nesty Contact me! 17:19, December 14, 2011 (UTC) Yay. Assassin-Rome (Talk if you will) 18:03, December 14, 2011 (UTC) What a guy. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig Enter... THE SCARY DOOR 05:42, December 18, 2011 (UTC) Yay. -- ► Kaloneous ◄ ♣HelpDesk♣ 12:04, December 23, 2011 (UTC) You've got my vote. Nostalgia AC Let's talk. 19:31, December 24, 2011 (UTC) I had a nay vote.. but I lost it. --Teller Words, On my Screen :O 03:55, December 30, 2011 (UTC) Nay Comments

Jacopo de' Pazzi - Yay

Been here long enough.. --Vatsa (talk • Gentek) 14:57, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

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I've revamped and reworded most of the page, adding a personality and trivia sections as well. I also got Vatsa to provide me with a nice new high-quality image. That being said, I'll admit that it's not my best work, though I believe it can work as GA. If you think differently, please leave a comment why :P, thanks guys. Nostalgia AC Let's talk. 20:29, December 24, 2011 (UTC) Yay As nominator and revamper. Yep. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig Enter... THE SCARY DOOR 01:52, December 28, 2011 (UTC) We're in the money! --Teller Words, On my Screen :O 03:55, December 30, 2011 (UTC) Yay, overall informative and a good read -- ► Kaloneous ◄ ♣HelpDesk♣ 09:11, December 30, 2011 (UTC) Could use a render. But that's not happening. --Jack WallsSupermen 22:08, December 30, 2011 (UTC) Nay Comments

Lia de Russo - Yay

Been here for too long.. --Vatsa (talk • Gentek) 04:50, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

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<Insert my usual speech here>Nesty Contact me! 06:16, December 27, 2011 (UTC) Yay As revamper/nominatorNesty Contact me! 06:16, December 27, 2011 (UTC) <Insert vote> -- 'R BlaiddDdraig Enter... THE SCARY DOOR 01:52, December 28, 2011 (UTC) Nay Comments

Attack on Suleiman I - Yay

--Vatsa (talk • Gentek) 02:58, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

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Built the article from the ground up, think it's decent enough for a GA. Any issues with it, let me know. Cheers. Toppers 23:59, December 28, 2011 (UTC) Yay Yay. Assassin-Rome (Talk if you will) 00:49, December 29, 2011 (UTC) Alright. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig Enter... THE SCARY DOOR 01:27, December 29, 2011 (UTC) Sure, sure. Nesty Contact me! 07:53, December 29, 2011 (UTC) Kicking kittens... is fun... *sadistic smile* --Teller Words, On my Screen :O 03:55, December 30, 2011 (UTC) Why not. There will be blood -- just make sure it's the right person's. 03:59, December 30, 2011 (UTC) Yay, a good read. -- ► Kaloneous ◄ ♣HelpDesk♣ 09:09, December 30, 2011 (UTC) Just as well. /me dances --Jack WallsSupermen 15:45, January 2, 2012 (UTC) Sure, images work particularly well. =GuardDog 03:10, January 3, 2012 (UTC) Nay Comments Could use a longer Aftermath section. --Jack WallsSupermen 19:01, December 29, 2011 (UTC) War, I expanded the aftermath section a little... there just isn't more to it than this... Nesty Contact me! 10:33, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Fiora Cavazza - Yay

--Vatsa (talk • Gentek) 04:50, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

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She was a courtesan, an Assassin, a Templar... all kinds of stuff... Now let's make her a Good article as well. Nesty Contact me! 10:25, December 31, 2011 (UTC) Yay Revamper/nominator Nesty Contact me! 10:25, December 31, 2011 (UTC) Yay. Reads well and is very informative. -- ► Kaloneous ◄ ♣HelpDesk♣ 14:50, December 31, 2011 (UTC) Sexy... -- 'R BlaiddDdraig Enter... THE SCARY DOOR 02:04, January 1, 2012 (UTC) One of the agents with an interesting story. Yay for me. =GuardDog 03:10, January 3, 2012 (UTC) Nay Comments

Auguste Oberlin - Yay

--Vatsa (talk • Gentek) 04:50, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

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Blacksmith-Templar-Artist! Very nice guy, let's make him GA too! --Nesty Contact me! 10:03, January 1, 2012 (UTC) Yay Revamper/nominator --Nesty Contact me! 10:03, January 1, 2012 (UTC) Righto. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig Enter... THE SCARY DOOR 00:55, January 2, 2012 (UTC) Nay Comments

Vieri de' Pazzi - Yay

--Vatsa (talk • Gentek) 04:50, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

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I've revamped and reworded most of the page, and I also did some work with the personality section. In addition, I cleaned up and added images to the gallery, and did some minor things with the trivia section. Any issues with the article? If so, please tell me why, and I'll do some more work with the article. Thanks. Nostalgia AC Let's talk. 13:55, January 7, 2012 (UTC) Yay As nominator and revamper. Nostalgia AC Let's talk. 13:55, January 7, 2012 (UTC) All my comments have been covered, as usual. =GuardDog 11:14, January 8, 2012 (UTC) Fixed the incorrections on the page, so I don't see why not. Nesty Contact me! 04:47, January 11, 2012 (UTC) Good job on the article, it looks great. -- ► Kaloneous ◄ ♣HelpDesk♣ 16:12, January 16, 2012 (UTC) Nay Too many misleading sentences, incorrect sourcing, false information. Nesty Contact me! 04:59, January 10, 2012 (UTC) Comments I've revised the article in a way that I feel it was better; though it was difficult because of your vague comments (no offense). Nostalgia AC Let's talk. 23:20, January 10, 2012 (UTC)