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== Previous Assignment(s) (Major) == | == Previous Assignment(s) (Major) == | ||
* Revamp on | * Revamp on Bugs/Assassin's Creed II | ||
* Sourcing on [[Francisco Randez]] | * Sourcing on [[Francisco Randez]] | ||
* Revamp on | * Revamp on [Assassin's Creed Achievement Guide/List of Templar Locations|Templar Locations] | ||
* Revamp on [[Crafting]] | * Revamp on [[Crafting]] | ||
* Creation of [[Assassin's Creed III (mobile game)]] | * Creation of [[Assassin's Creed III (mobile game)]] | ||
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== Evaluation == | == Evaluation == | ||
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I read the first quarter or so of the page and skimmed the rest, and it all looked mostly good. Only thing was that in academic/encyclopaedic writing, contraction's aren't used, so when one is spotted it should be fixed - "didn't" --> "did not". -- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 06:20, October 4, 2012 (UTC) | I read the first quarter or so of the page and skimmed the rest, and it all looked mostly good. Only thing was that in academic/encyclopaedic writing, contraction's aren't used, so when one is spotted it should be fixed - "didn't" --> "did not". -- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 06:20, October 4, 2012 (UTC) | ||
==== Sourcing on [[Francisco Randez]] ==== | ==== Sourcing on [[Francisco Randez]] ==== | ||
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-- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 07:19, October 19, 2012 (UTC) | -- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 07:19, October 19, 2012 (UTC) | ||
==== Revamp on | ==== Revamp on Assassin's Creed Achievement Guide/List of Templar Locations|Templar Locations ==== | ||
All-round good job, the page was certainly a mess. Not really a complaint, more just something I want to comment on, otherwise I'll have nothing to comment on: the use of ''"There was"'' and ''"Another"'' got a bit repetitive, but because the page only serves as a guide, that's not anything worth fixing. -- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 12:41, November 18, 2012 (UTC) | All-round good job, the page was certainly a mess. Not really a complaint, more just something I want to comment on, otherwise I'll have nothing to comment on: the use of ''"There was"'' and ''"Another"'' got a bit repetitive, but because the page only serves as a guide, that's not anything worth fixing. -- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 12:41, November 18, 2012 (UTC) | ||
==== Revamp on [[Crafting]] ==== | ==== Revamp on [[Crafting]] ==== | ||
I imagine you spent most of the night pressing the backspace/delete button and the enter key. Been there, albeit on a much smaller scale, so I know the pain. Here, have a rank 4.<br /> | I imagine you spent most of the night pressing the backspace/delete button and the enter key. Been there, albeit on a much smaller scale, so I know the pain. Here, have a rank 4.<br /> | ||
Latest revision as of 14:34, 25 January 2022


The following text is a continuous log of Gabriel Auditore's apprenticeship. It exists for staff eyes only. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the wiki.
Current Assignment(s) (Major)[edit source]
Current Assignment(s) (Minor)[edit source]
Previous Assignment(s) (Major)[edit source]
- Revamp on Bugs/Assassin's Creed II
- Sourcing on Francisco Randez
- Revamp on [Assassin's Creed Achievement Guide/List of Templar Locations|Templar Locations]
- Revamp on Crafting
- Creation of Assassin's Creed III (mobile game)
Previous Assignment(s) (Minor)[edit source]
Evaluation[edit source]
Revamp on Bugs/Assassin's Creed II[edit source]
I read the first quarter or so of the page and skimmed the rest, and it all looked mostly good. Only thing was that in academic/encyclopaedic writing, contraction's aren't used, so when one is spotted it should be fixed - "didn't" --> "did not". -- 'R BlaiddDdraig Funk Man's Funky House of Funk 06:20, October 4, 2012 (UTC)
Sourcing on Francisco Randez[edit source]
Kinda hard to screw up sourcing assuming you know the coding, so no problems here. Solid effort in locating these; I checked them out to make sure they were accurate, only to find that they were scribed in some kind of long lost ancient language from the inhabitants of Earth prior to humans. Simply amazing that you were able to decipher it all, so top marks! Take a promotion out of petty cash.
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-- 'R BlaiddDdraig Funk Man's Funky House of Funk 07:19, October 19, 2012 (UTC)
Revamp on Assassin's Creed Achievement Guide/List of Templar Locations|Templar Locations[edit source]
All-round good job, the page was certainly a mess. Not really a complaint, more just something I want to comment on, otherwise I'll have nothing to comment on: the use of "There was" and "Another" got a bit repetitive, but because the page only serves as a guide, that's not anything worth fixing. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig Funk Man's Funky House of Funk 12:41, November 18, 2012 (UTC)
Revamp on Crafting[edit source]
I imagine you spent most of the night pressing the backspace/delete button and the enter key. Been there, albeit on a much smaller scale, so I know the pain. Here, have a rank 4.
<Code removed.>
-- 'R BlaiddDdraig Funk Man's Funky House of Funk 12:41, November 18, 2012 (UTC)
Creation of Assassin's Creed III (mobile game)[edit source]
Well written article, but I checked some of the other mobile game pages to see how they're laid out, and noticed they also had a plot/storyline section. Might be worth adding one, unless it's incredibly similar to the main game. Other than that, top marks. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig Funk Man's Funky House of Funk 00:58, December 18, 2012 (UTC)
Staff Comments[edit source]
- Just a quick note - GI deserves some compliments. Besides his work as an apprentice, he volunteered to help with a large project Sima wanted done (interactive conversation listing for ACIII) and is always willing to help others out when something needs to be done. Just felt like bringing it to your attention. Nesty Contact me! 15:50, January 5, 2013 (UTC)
- As Nesty stated earlier, GI is doing well as an apprentice. I haven't read all of his assignments, though the ones I've seen have been thorough and finished in a timely manner. In addition, he is active on the IRC and throughout the wiki, and often volunteers to help others with avatars and other graphics. He's proven himself to be a good community member and editor, and is headed in the right direction. --NOSTALGIA TALK 01:32, January 31, 2013 (UTC)
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