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User blog comment:AssassinRome/Assassin's Creed: A brotherhood of heretics/@comment-1872981-20101226151211
There were a few mistakes here and there (mostly typos) and also needs better punctuation. GD already mentioned it, it needs some spacing. All in all, it's good. The first name of the protagonist is very nice too :P