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Nesty did not vote Nay so her vote is not accounted for. Overall, good article and worth FA Status. --TellerWords, On my Screen :O 01:40, January 30, 2012 (UTC)
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Although it is a rather brief article, I believe it is written to an FA standard and has some cool images to accompany it. I've attempted to do as much expansion as possible, though this event is just terse overall. Thanks for voting. Nostalgia ACLet's talk. 06:04, January 22, 2012 (UTC)
Yay. Good work. Though I personally do not like the infobox picture or the Greek Fire one. Assassin-Rome(Talk if you will) 15:19, January 23, 2012 (UTC)
Damn, I'm good at my procrastination but I had to vote eventually so why not now? :P --TellerWords, On my Screen :O 02:24, January 24, 2012 (UTC)
Yep, everything's been cleared for me. =GuardDog 12:27, January 25, 2012 (UTC)
Nay
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There was a lot of unnecessary information. The description of the Great Chain wasn't needed, that's what the link to its separate article is for. And the Aftermath section was far too detailed, I deleted most of that. Otherwise the rest of it is good, just one minor thing. In the Meeting with Yusuf Tazim section, it mentions Ezio and Yusuf discussing the bomb, yet the quote for that part is in the next section, making it a bit out of place. So a new quote is needed for the Destruction and escape section. Once that's done I'll vote Yay. -- 'R BlaiddDdraigEnter... THE SCARY DOOR 13:39, January 23, 2012 (UTC)
Alright, thanks for that Blaidd. I just added the only quote from AC:R that is relevant to the Destruction and escape section. It's not great, but it's better than anything the novel could provide. Nostalgia ACLet's talk. 21:38, January 23, 2012 (UTC)
I don't like it... But I won't vote nay unless I can figure out why I don't like it... NestyContact me! 22:15, January 23, 2012 (UTC)
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I've reworded and restructured most of the page, and added in some cool, HQ images to accompany it. I've also added, replaced, and revised some quotes. I believe the article is worthy of FA currently. Thanks for voting everybody. Nostalgia ACLet's talk. 21:15, January 25, 2012 (UTC)
I like it, I won't vote nay until I figure out what I don't like about it. XD --TellerWords, On my Screen :O 21:39, January 27, 2012 (UTC)
There were still quite a few things I needed to fix on it. Luckily I managed to pull myself away from Skyrim for this page. You should be very grateful. =P -- 'R BlaiddDdraigEnter... THE SCARY DOOR 14:48, January 30, 2012 (UTC)
Nay
The article doesn't seem right to me, I think it needs to be more detailed and specific in some areas. -- 'R BlaiddDdraigEnter... THE SCARY DOOR 16:51, January 27, 2012 (UTC)
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Well, it could be expanded in some areas such as the Confrontation with Manuel and the Destruction of Byzantine Weaponry could use a minor expansion along with the Aftermath which is only a minor expansion, don't go into too much detail with that. If this is done, I'll vote Yay. --TellerWords, On my Screen :O 19:30, January 27, 2012 (UTC)
In response to Blaidd and TST's comments, I have revised, expanded, and detailed the article. Please reconsider your votes guys. Thanks. Nostalgia ACLet's talk. 21:34, January 27, 2012 (UTC)
And that is a wrap! --JackWallsSupermen 12:25, February 4, 2012 (UTC)
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I've written out most of his details since finishing Revelations. The article's not very long, but information seems complete, and it has a sufficient number of quotes and Vatsa's quality images. =GuardDog 09:44, January 30, 2012 (UTC)
Yay
As nominator. =GuardDog 09:44, January 30, 2012 (UTC)
Nay, oh wait... this is the Yay section. What am I doing here? Oo TellerWords, On my Screen :O 18:31, January 30, 2012 (UTC)
Where is his hookblade? --JackWallsSupermen 14:35, January 31, 2012 (UTC)
...Yeah, nothing clever to add. In fact, nothing at all to add. Except this one, which technically makes it "something to add." --JackWallsSupermen 12:25, February 4, 2012 (UTC)
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Done a lot of stuff on this page. Made sure all's in there, more stuff, yadi yadi yada. Not much to add, really. And...that's all. --JackWallsSupermen 14:34, January 31, 2012 (UTC)
Guess i'm not the only person on this wiki's staff with a typo issue.. --Vatsa (talk • Gentek) 03:18, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
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Revanped the page, especially rewording the Revelations/Embers info, which was a mess. I think it's good enough for FA now.. if you disagree, just let me know and I'll have another go at it.
Yay
As revamper/nominator NestyContact me! 15:47, February 1, 2012 (UTC)
That's it for me. =GuardDog 16:06, February 2, 2012 (UTC)
I would like to sincerely apologize for the delay in my revoting; I did not even notice Guard's comment about the improvements until now. Nostalgia ACLet's talk. 01:51, February 15, 2012 (UTC)
Nay
The wording needs to be improved, and some sentences and parts need to be trimmed and refined. Also, the spacing needs to be fixed as there are many long paragraphs that could be separated for a cleaner appearance. Lastly, the grammar could use some work. Nostalgia ACLet's talk. 17:32, February 4, 2012 (UTC)
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The later parts are much better now, but now I'm nitpicking the earlier ones :p Will vote after I finish my pass of rewording (...which may take a while). =GuardDog 14:09, February 2, 2012 (UTC)
Nos, could you please be more specific on where the needlessly lengthy paragraphs are? I cut them myself, and each paragraph's ideas seem to be grouped appropriately - though naturally, I could be wrong. =GuardDog 12:27, February 5, 2012 (UTC)
I wouldn't say needlessly lengthy, I just think that some more spacing could make the article easier to read and have a better appearance. For example, in the opening section in the paragraph "During his travels...," I believe that could be spread into two paragraphs at like "He ensured the future...." It might be an odd comment, but it's just my opinion on it, though you obviously know far better than I, Guard, so do what you feel is right; I just believe that the spacing could provide an easier-to-read appearance. Nostalgia ACLet's talk. 22:41, February 8, 2012 (UTC)
Thanks for the input - seriously, it's a really long article, a lot of eyes on it is necessary :p I've gone over the spacing of what you mentioned, so hopefully it's better. =GuardDog 23:10, February 8, 2012 (UTC)
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I've reworded and detailed most of the article. I've also cleaned up the infobox and expanded the opening section. Lastly, I also replaced the images previously there with new, HQ images provided by Vatsa. Thanks for voting. Nostalgia ACLet's talk. 21:27, February 2, 2012 (UTC)
Yes, nothing to complain about. --JackWallsSupermen 17:35, February 4, 2012 (UTC)
Yay from me. =GuardDog 12:27, February 5, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry Nesty but I believe it's fine. Good enough for Featured and good enough for a Yay vote from me! --TellerWords, On my Screen :O 05:45, February 6, 2012 (UTC)
I think I said this before, but the wording could be a lot simpler and easier to understand (keep in mind, English is not everyone's native language and we do want everyone to be able to read our articles). The amount of "difficult" words does not determine the quality of an article. The infobox image could be better, though the rest of the images are good. Some of the quotes don't really work, so you might want to have a look at that too. There were also some punctuation mistakes that will have to be taken care of, but I can do those myself when I have the time. That's all, I believe. Oh, and sorry for being so negative xD NestyContact me! 18:17, February 4, 2012 (UTC)
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Though the article is much, much better, the infobox picture needs to be changed. Assassin-Rome(Talk if you will) 16:29, February 4, 2012 (UTC)
Personally, I think it's fine. Only the image is what needs changing to earn my vote. As Rome said, certainly much better then before. --TellerWords, On my Screen :O 20:58, February 4, 2012 (UTC)
I've replaced the infobox image and have done some other things to the article. Please reconsider your votes, guys. Thanks. Nostalgia ACLet's talk. 22:12, February 5, 2012 (UTC)
Yay from me.. --Vatsa (talk • Gentek) 11:41, March 2, 2012 (UTC)
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Another Project Legacy character with a detailed background, since he's mentioned in 5 different chapters. It was written out a while back, but I'm pretty sure the needed information and images are there. =GuardDog 11:45, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
Yay
As nominator. =GuardDog 11:45, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
Sure there won't be any info in AC3? --Vatsa (talk • Gentek) 11:41, March 2, 2012 (UTC)
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Let's see... it's been a while since I nominated anything. I reworded the entire page, changed the sections, moved quotes to their proper positions. It also has good images and all the info we have on him. Let me know when you need something changed. NestyContact me! 13:41, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
Yay
As revamper/nominator. NestyContact me! 13:41, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
Yay from me. New images in particular look good. =GuardDog 01:40, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
Aaaahh this takes me back. First ever legit revamp. Thing has doubled in size since then, but just as awesome. -- 'R BlaiddDdraigEnter... THE SCARY DOOR 07:49, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
Hopefully, much better, I saw footage of you at Abstergo, you didn't even try to escape. --TellerWords, On my Screen :O 08:13, March 1, 2012 (UTC)
3 votes, but this has been here over a week.. --Vatsa (talk • Gentek) 11:41, March 2, 2012 (UTC)
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Don't worry, I won't go on another mass-nomination spree that causes an aversion to voting for all of you... Not this time, at least. This page had its nomination coming for a long time, and just needed some minor things fixed (in my opinion, that is). Let me know what you think. NestyContact me! 10:17, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
Yay
As revamper/nominator. NestyContact me! 10:17, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
I think it's very nice. ^^ Though I hope you add abit more quotes up. --TellerWords, On my Screen :O 08:13, March 1, 2012 (UTC)
It's been a week. Five yays, no nays. NestyContact me! 09:41, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
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Did a lot of work on this one. Reworded, added quotes, replaced images, changed the lay-out, minor changes to the trivia section... Now let's vote! NestyContact me! 10:17, March 5, 2012 (UTC)
Yay
As revamper/nominator NestyContact me! 10:17, March 5, 2012 (UTC)
Warren has already been made FA some time ago. NestyContact me! 07:51, March 6, 2012 (UTC)
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Hey there, I know I'm not really an Apprentice any more, nor a staff member either, but I've recently revamped Warren Vidic and I noticed it was GA, so I figured I might see what you think about it. Also, I'd like a pretty userbox. :P Slate Vesper 03:05, March 6, 2012 (UTC)
Seems everyone is too busy to vote.. --Vatsa (talk • Gentek) 09:43, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
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Did everything I could on this page. Added quotes, expanded the intro, reworded the entire article, provided better images, removed duplicate images, fixed sourcing... I know it's not the longest of our pages, but I think it does contain everything we know about her, and it fits the MoS, so I don't see why it shouldn't be FA. NestyContact me! 11:21, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
Yay
As revamper/nominator. NestyContact me! 11:21, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
Sort of odd angle when I tried to get a screenshot of her burns.. --Vatsa (talk • Gentek) 09:43, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
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And another one. Have to keep myself busy, no? Anyways, I'd appreciate it if you would take the time to vote again. It is, after all, an Istruttore's duty to do so ;) NestyContact me! 12:18, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
Yay
As revamper/nominator. NestyContact me! 12:18, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
No active staff, again.. --VATSA (TALK • GENTEK) 03:54, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
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Lucrezia Borgia. I revamped the page, did everything I could think of and think it is ready now. If you disagree, let me know why and I'll be sure to fix it. Thanks for voting people. NestyContact me! 19:21, May 31, 2012 (UTC)
Yay
As revamper/nominator. NestyContact me! 19:21, May 31, 2012 (UTC)
Adjusted some links, but otherwise it looks clean and complete to me. Also, the last trivia point could use a source, not so sure if it's verified. =GuardDog 01:58, June 1, 2012 (UTC)
So voting's dead?.. --VATSA (TALK • GENTEK) 09:31, June 16, 2012 (UTC)
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My first shot at a Featured Article and my second article assignment. With the help of Sima, Dark and my mentor, Teller, I've expanded the intro and reworded the article. If you have any comments about how to repair it beyond its current condition, let me know. Thanks for voting. StormbeastThe Helpful Place 02:30, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
Made some small changes and cut out some duplicate links, but other than that, I vote yay. Slate Vesper 06:00, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
I already had a go at this sometime ago, but people didn't want it for FA because of the upcoming Lost Archive. Guess now's the time then. NestyContact me! 06:13, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
I guess the rest of the people didn't feel like voting then? NestyContact me! 09:16, June 25, 2012 (UTC)
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Another one from the targets project. Let me know if something needs to be fixed, I'll be around quite a bit in the coming days, so I'll make sure this gets through :) NestyContact me! 08:45, June 12, 2012 (UTC)
Yay
As revamper/nominator. NestyContact me! 08:45, June 12, 2012 (UTC)
Not too fond of having an Animus corridor picture in the biography section, but it will do. -- Master Sima YiTalk 09:50, June 16, 2012 (UTC)
Well, after I gave it a look, I had to fix a fair few bits of it. That aside, I see no reason why it can't be featured. Slate Vesper 12:29, June 16, 2012 (UTC)
Nay
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What... no votes!? :( NestyContact me! 08:49, June 16, 2012 (UTC)
Currently there seems to be an absence of staff and regular users, Nesty.. XD --VATSA (TALK • GENTEK) 09:31, June 16, 2012 (UTC)
And it's also because you nominate way too much articles; it's not interesting anymore to vote. -- Master Sima YiTalk 09:34, June 16, 2012 (UTC)
Voting isn't meant to be "interesting." It's meant to make the wiki better. But fine, this shall then be my last nomination. NestyContact me! 09:41, June 16, 2012 (UTC)
No, but it's probably why people don't vote. Just nominate articles at a slower pace and it'll be fine. -- Master Sima YiTalk 09:49, June 16, 2012 (UTC)
