Board Thread:Series general discussion/@comment-18014300-20170331201308/@comment-18014300-20170331231521

The Wikia Editor wrote: I'm really liking this. I would suggest breaking up some of the longer paragraphs into smaller ones, to void staring at a wall of text, as well as putting the names of the titles into italics (i.e. Assassin's Creed: Brotherhood instead of Assassin's Creed: Brotherhood).

I've also mentioned this on your talk page, but I think Ezio's whereabouts are better explained by saying that he didn't get to Granada until after (or, at best, during) Aguilar's escape.

Thanks for the feedback. :)

Yeah, I originally wrote this in Microsoft Word, and all the titles are italicized, but I forgot to re-italicize them when I transferred them over here. The larger paragraphs are actually broken up into smaller paragraphs by indentations, but this didn't carry over when I pasted it here either.

I'm not sure what you mean about Ezio arriving after Aguilar's escape. I think earlier we talked about how Ezio's rescue of Granadan civilians and assassination of Juan de Marillo might be placed after the ransom meeting, but Ezio most certainly would've already been in Granada for a while given that he was there in November 1491 to put an end to the war.

EDIT: Actually, now that I look over it, I remember now that I hoped that my wording actually meant it was a bit ambiguous. I meant to say that he was preoccupied with rescuing civilians and assassinating Juan de Marillo (sometime) during that day (i.e. be it after the ransom meeting or during it). I thought the more important matter is that there's a way to explain what he was doing around the time.