User talk:Sarasti the Serpent

Welcome to the Order, Sarasti the Serpent!

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Feel free to contact me on my talkpage if you need anything. Sol Pacificus (talk) 19:51, September 18, 2020 (UTC)

Hetepi

Hello Sarasti,
While your zeal for edits is appreciated, your formatting leaves much to be desired. True, Hetepi's page is marked for revamp, but your style is too long-winded, particularly the second introductory paragraph. As an online encyclpedia of Assassin's Creed, the wiki strives for clear brevity where possible. Your use of brackets midparagraphs and informal speach (eg. "perhap he simply...") throughout your work do not match the standards set out by the Manual of Style linked above in the "Welcome" banner. I ask that you please read it, and maybe visit other pages for a sense of how to write, before you continue changing pages for Egyptian Order of the Ancients members. Thank you. – Darman (talk) 17:20, 7 January 2022 (UTC)