New contract. [[Assassination Contracts]] needs some expansion. The concept of contracts is somewhat integral to the Assassin modus operandi, for one. These contracts also appeared in multiple games and had their own storylines, but the article doesn't cover these details well. This article should be better fleshed out, sourced, and decorated with images. Since this page requires expansion, revamp, and imaging, it will be your sole task for this assignment, but I encourage you to take your time on it and work on including as many details as possible. You do not need to detail the individual contracts as much as would be on a memory page, but there should be a good summary of the storylines and their connection to the Assassins' goals. r.msg me with questions. ~DarkFeather
As we discussed, you are now tasked with advancing [[Aveline de Grandpré]] and [[Elise Lafleur]] to [[Category:Featured Articles|Featured Article]] status. I've seen you've been working on [[Josiah Burgess]] as well, so you can get bonus points for getting it to [[Category:Good Articles|Good Article]] status. I'd encourage you to stick to professional writing, but you are an editor in your own right and can make that decision. I will hold you to high standards for sourcing, imaging, content, etc. for all of these articles. However, I have little cause for concern with this -- I have confidence that you will meet this challenge head on and defeat it. Good hunting, Apprentice.
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==Ranking==
* Passed to rank 4 on February 26, 2014
* Passed to rank 3 on September 30, 2013
* Passed to rank 3 on September 30, 2013
* Passed to rank 2 on September 13, 2013.
* Passed to rank 2 on September 13, 2013.
* Accepted into Apprentice initiative on September 4, 2013.
* Accepted into Apprentice Initiative on September 4, 2013.
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The following text is a continuous log of Crookandcharlatan's apprenticeship. It exists for staff eyes only. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the wiki.
As we discussed, you are now tasked with advancing Aveline de Grandpré and Elise Lafleur to status. I've seen you've been working on Josiah Burgess as well, so you can get bonus points for getting it to status. I'd encourage you to stick to professional writing, but you are an editor in your own right and can make that decision. I will hold you to high standards for sourcing, imaging, content, etc. for all of these articles. However, I have little cause for concern with this -- I have confidence that you will meet this challenge head on and defeat it. Good hunting, Apprentice.
New contract. Assassination Contracts needs some expansion. The concept of contracts is somewhat integral to the Assassin modus operandi, for one. These contracts also appeared in multiple games and had their own storylines, but the article doesn't cover these details well. This article should be better fleshed out, sourced, and decorated with images. Since this page requires expansion, revamp, and imaging, it will be your sole task for this assignment, but I encourage you to take your time on it and work on including as many details as possible. You do not need to detail the individual contracts as much as would be on a memory page, but there should be a good summary of the storylines and their connection to the Assassins' goals. r.msg me with questions. ~DarkFeather
Passed
Alright, Assassin, you know the basics. Now, why don't you show us what you really know! First of all, Grand Bazaar is short of images. This is a brilliantly designed, integral, and beautiful in Assassin's Creed: Revelations. See what you can do about remedying that situation, either through finding existing images and adding them to the article of uploading your own. Secondly, being Staff is not all fun and games, so between finding images, why don't you revamp the First Civilization to MoS standards? We all know Juno needs to be fixed anyway. So, good luck, good hunting, and let me know if you have questions. ~DarkFeather
Passed
Welcome to the Initiative, Crookandcharlatan. Your first assignment is to revamp Aveline de Grandpré. The article is mostly in good shape -- the areas that need work are the sources, paragraphing, and minor grammar errors. It is a long article, but the edits required should be many of the same thing. If you have questions, feel free to find me on IRC, send me a message through TheRaven on IRC with "r.msg <insert message here>", or talkpage me -- I will respond as fast as I can. Welcome again, and good hunting. ~DarkFeather
Passed.
Ranking
Passed to rank 4 on February 26, 2014
Passed to rank 3 on September 30, 2013
Passed to rank 2 on September 13, 2013.
Accepted into Apprentice Initiative on September 4, 2013.
