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This is probably me but I had a really hard time reading in one shot. It was like large clumps. It didn't feel natural. I don't know maybe I am tired but if anyone else realizes maybe I should fix it up? <span style="font-family:Trajan;"><span style="color:#008000;">[[User:Kajalamorth|Le Kaja]]<sup>[[User talk:Kajalamorth|'''Talk''']]</sup></span></span> 00:36, July 21, 2011 (UTC) | This is probably me but I had a really hard time reading in one shot. It was like large clumps. It didn't feel natural. I don't know maybe I am tired but if anyone else realizes maybe I should fix it up? <span style="font-family:Trajan;"><span style="color:#008000;">[[User:Kajalamorth|Le Kaja]]<sup>[[User talk:Kajalamorth|'''Talk''']]</sup></span></span> 00:36, July 21, 2011 (UTC) | ||
Okay I corrected parts of it but this page needs more, it used older english, thus, it is a good word but it is older and unnatracitve to some, the page overused However and even put notably and however, No point to write notably because it is the readers choice if it is Notable or not. I hope I did a good job. <span style="font-family:Trajan;"><span style="color:#008000;">[[User:Kajalamorth|Le Kaja]]<sup>[[User talk:Kajalamorth|'''Talk''']]</sup></span></span> 15:33, July 21, 2011 (UTC) | |||
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Playable Shaun
Anyone else agree that would be awesome? Or is it just me? lol
- Yes, I agree, that would be cool. He could smash a compter over some guys head or insult an enemy to the point of suicide. lol. 'R BlaiddDdraig 02:47, December 21, 2010 (UTC)
Shaun's Recruitment
In the trivia it is given that " ...Shaun's recruitment into the Order is rather unconventional because assassins are naturally born into it." Then what about the whole game of Brotherhood which actually deals with civilians being recruited to become assassins?
Sign your posts please :P The Assassins were made from a mixture of TWCB blood and human blood, making them a hybrid race. The true Assassins are from long lines of these hybrids, making any accepted Assassins without the blood rare. Il Lupo 14:53, April 25, 2011 (UTC)Il Lupo
Not fluid enough
This is probably me but I had a really hard time reading in one shot. It was like large clumps. It didn't feel natural. I don't know maybe I am tired but if anyone else realizes maybe I should fix it up? Le KajaTalk 00:36, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
Okay I corrected parts of it but this page needs more, it used older english, thus, it is a good word but it is older and unnatracitve to some, the page overused However and even put notably and however, No point to write notably because it is the readers choice if it is Notable or not. I hope I did a good job. Le KajaTalk 15:33, July 21, 2011 (UTC)