Thread:The Supreme Diamond-Hooded Eagle/@comment-4268634-20120124170237

I've noticed that the're a lot of grammar mistakes. No offense, but you and EzioLover's writing style isn't exactly "serious", the sentences seem off and kinda feels like a child is writing it. A weird example is "The book begins by telling about an traveler, who is traveling to, at that moment unknown." The writing just isn't right, and isn't in the in-universal format. Also, the plot should be put below the Description section. You guys should check out the styles used by the wiki and improve the article. If you need any help, I'm a capable editor and writer (I'm sorta re-writing the ACR story and novel) Just giving a hand.<ac_metadata title="Your revamp.."> </ac_metadata>