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==Previous Assignment(s)== | ==Previous Assignment(s)== | ||
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====To-Do==== | ====To-Do==== | ||
*Tense Error Correction (x) | *Tense Error Correction (x) | ||
*Image Replacement ( ) | *Image Replacement (x) | ||
**Some images aren't Vatsa quality images, easily fixable. | **Some images aren't Vatsa quality images, easily fixable. | ||
*Rewording (x) | *Rewording (x) | ||
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!Clay Kaczmarek - 9.5/10 | |||
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===Revamp Task 2 - ''[[Clay Kaczmarek]]''=== | ===Revamp Task 2 - ''[[Clay Kaczmarek]]''=== | ||
You chose it, I'd expect you to bring it up to either GA Status or FA Status. | You chose it, I'd expect you to bring it up to either GA Status or FA Status. | ||
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''I want you to list down everything you believe you need to get down.'' | ''I want you to list down everything you believe you need to get down.'' | ||
*Expand introduction ( ) | *Expand introduction (x) | ||
*Add quotes ( ) | *Add quotes (x) | ||
*Add/replace with quality images ( ) | *Add/replace with quality images (x) | ||
*Reword ( | *Reword (x) | ||
====Master's Notes==== | ====Master's Notes==== | ||
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====Comments==== | ====Comments==== | ||
* | *Status report: Just various minor edits to fix some mistakes (typos,coding, links) in the article. I jotted down some ''to-dos'', but if you have anything to add, please. I plan on replaying ''[[The Lost Archive|TLA]]'' to see if I can find any good pictures. [[User:Stormbeast|<span style="font-family:Euphemia UCAS;font-size:18px;color:#008000;">'''Stormbeast'''</span>]] [[User Talk:Stormbeast|<sup><font color="white">The Helpful Place</font></sup>]] 05:05, May 16, 2012 (UTC) | ||
*Almost finished with this one, I think. If you wanna look it over, that'd be great. No such luck finding any worthwhile images in ''TLA''. I had Dark proof-read it earlier and I still have to work on The Truth and "make sure all paragraph breaks are in logical places." [[User:Stormbeast|<span style="font-family:Euphemia UCAS;font-size:18px;color:#008000;">'''Stormbeast'''</span>]] [[User Talk:Stormbeast|<sup><font color="white">The Helpful Place</font></sup>]] 05:16, May 30, 2012 (UTC) | |||
*I think I'm finished with this one Teller. Let me know if there's anything I missed. [[User:Stormbeast|<span style="font-family:Euphemia UCAS;font-size:18px;color:#008000;">'''Stormbeast'''</span>]] [[User Talk:Stormbeast|<sup><font color="white">The Helpful Place</font></sup>]] 07:49, June 6, 2012 (UTC) | |||
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!Battle of Agnadello - 8/10 | |||
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===Revamp Task 3 - ''[[Battle of Agnadello]]''=== | |||
Needs quotes, sources, organizing. Work it up to a higher standard | |||
'''Difficulty''' (Normal Revamp) - 8 | |||
'''Difficulty''' (Good Article Status Revamp) - 9.5 | |||
====To-Do==== | |||
*Expand (o) | |||
*Add Quotes (x) | |||
*Reword (x) | |||
*Add Aftermath (x) | |||
====Master's Notes==== | |||
*Good Luck. --[[User:TheSt0ryTeller|<span style="font-family:Century Schoolbook;font-size:19px;color:green;">'''Teller'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:TheSt0ryTeller|<sup><span style="font-family:Gill Sans MS;color:yellow;">Words, On my Screen :O</span></sup>]] 03:41, April 10, 2012 (UTC) | |||
====Comments==== | |||
*Status report: Again, minor edits. Added ''Aftermath'', and will review Sima's comments on the IRC for it. I've reviewed [[Chapter 1 - Bartolomeo d'Alviano|Chapter 1]] of Project Legacy and may have found some good quotes. [[User:Stormbeast|<span style="font-family:Euphemia UCAS;font-size:18px;color:#008000;">'''Stormbeast'''</span>]] [[User Talk:Stormbeast|<sup><font color="white">The Helpful Place</font></sup>]] 05:05, May 16, 2012 (UTC) | |||
*Added Aftermath and quotes. Completely forgot what Sima said though :( [[User:Stormbeast|<span style="font-family:Magneto;font-size:18px;color:#008000;">'''Stormbeast'''</span>]] [[User Talk:Stormbeast|<sup><font color="white">The Helpful Place</font></sup>]] 05:25, June 19, 2012 (UTC) | |||
*I'm at a loss. I've done what I can and I'll post it tomorrow after work. If you have any suggestions between now and then, let me know. {{User:Stormbeast/sig}} 07:46, July 1, 2012 (UTC) | |||
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!Userpage Development - 9.5/10 | |||
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===Community Task 1 - Userpage Development (Optional)=== | ===Community Task 1 - Userpage Development (Optional)=== | ||
I've loved decorating my userpage, a userpage needs to be welcoming, share a little more about yourself. This will only get you 25% closer and is entirely optional. If you want something specifically on there which you don't know how to do, then don't hesitate to ask any members of the ''community''. | I've loved decorating my userpage, a userpage needs to be welcoming, share a little more about yourself. This will only get you 25% closer and is entirely optional. If you want something specifically on there which you don't know how to do, then don't hesitate to ask any members of the ''community''. | ||
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====Master's Notes==== | ====Master's Notes==== | ||
*Good Luck. ^^ --[[User:TheSt0ryTeller|<span style="font-family:Century Schoolbook;font-size:19px;color:green;">'''Teller'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:TheSt0ryTeller|<sup><span style="font-family:Gill Sans MS;color:yellow;">Words, On my Screen :O</span></sup>]] 03:41, April 10, 2012 (UTC) | *Good Luck. ^^ --[[User:TheSt0ryTeller|<span style="font-family:Century Schoolbook;font-size:19px;color:green;">'''Teller'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:TheSt0ryTeller|<sup><span style="font-family:Gill Sans MS;color:yellow;">Words, On my Screen :O</span></sup>]] 03:41, April 10, 2012 (UTC) | ||
====Comments==== | ====Comments==== | ||
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==Current Assignments== | |||
===Revamp Task 4 - [[Memory Corridor]] (User Task)=== | |||
This page looks terrible, it's pictures and stuff are great but how it's layed out needs alot of touchup. You chose this task, so you know what to do. | |||
'''Difficulty (Normal Revamp)''': 9/10 | |||
'''Difficulty (Good Article Revamp)''': 10/10 | |||
====What you've improved==== | |||
I'd like you to list down what you've improved on the article. | |||
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====Masters Notes==== | |||
*Good luck! --[[User:TheSt0ryTeller|<span style="font-family:Century Schoolbook;font-size:19px;color:green;">'''Teller'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:TheSt0ryTeller|<sup><span style="font-family:Gill Sans MS;color:yellow;">Words, On my Screen :O</span></sup>]] 21:52, September 19, 2012 (UTC) | |||
====Comments==== | |||
*I wanted to see how well you pick the articles in desperate need of revamping, your choice was well thought out, after all, as I said, this article looks terrible. --[[User:TheSt0ryTeller|<span style="font-family:Century Schoolbook;font-size:19px;color:green;">'''Teller'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:TheSt0ryTeller|<sup><span style="font-family:Gill Sans MS;color:yellow;">Words, On my Screen :O</span></sup>]] 21:52, September 19, 2012 (UTC) | |||
===Template Task 2 - Assassin's Creed 3 Cleared Userbox=== | |||
We have all the other cleared ones, but we should prepare for the near future when ACIII comes out (Hell yeah!) so we're going to need this. Make one for us by using the coding on the former ones and such. If you need any help, feel free to knock on my door A.K.A My talkpage. | |||
'''Difficulty''': 4/10 | |||
====Master's Notes==== | |||
*Good Luck Ace! --[[User:TheSt0ryTeller|<span style="font-family:Century Schoolbook;font-size:19px;color:green;">'''Teller'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:TheSt0ryTeller|<sup><span style="font-family:Gill Sans MS;color:yellow;">Words, On my Screen :O</span></sup>]] 21:52, September 19, 2012 (UTC) | |||
=== | ====Comments==== | ||
*Actually, leave any inquiries down here, much easier to locate. --[[User:TheSt0ryTeller|<span style="font-family:Century Schoolbook;font-size:19px;color:green;">'''Teller'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:TheSt0ryTeller|<sup><span style="font-family:Gill Sans MS;color:yellow;">Words, On my Screen :O</span></sup>]] 21:52, September 19, 2012 (UTC) | |||
===Revamp Task 5 - [[Auguste Oberlin]]=== | |||
This page is good, it's writing is well but there are some issues, the picture is squishing the text between itself and the infobox, lacks quotes and could be expanded partially. You wanted an MP task, this is where you start. | |||
'''Difficulty''' | '''Difficulty:''' 5.5/10 | ||
====To-Do==== | ====To-Do==== | ||
List everything you feel you need to do with this article including the things I mentioned. | |||
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====Master's Notes==== | ====Master's Notes==== | ||
*Good | *Good luck! --[[User:TheSt0ryTeller|<span style="font-family:Century Schoolbook;font-size:19px;color:green;">'''Teller'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:TheSt0ryTeller|<sup><span style="font-family:Gill Sans MS;color:yellow;">Words, On my Screen :O</span></sup>]] 21:52, September 19, 2012 (UTC) | ||
====Comments==== | ====Comments==== | ||
* | *You know what to do down here, leave any questions and so on. --[[User:TheSt0ryTeller|<span style="font-family:Century Schoolbook;font-size:19px;color:green;">'''Teller'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:TheSt0ryTeller|<sup><span style="font-family:Gill Sans MS;color:yellow;">Words, On my Screen :O</span></sup>]] 21:52, September 19, 2012 (UTC) | ||
==Ranking== | ==Ranking== | ||
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*''Rank 2 - Obtained 9th April'' | *''Rank 2 - Obtained 9th April'' | ||
**Rank Comments: Only had to get a couple more images from V which can easily be done. A good first task. Though it won't be ''that'' easy from now on. ;) | **Rank Comments: Only had to get a couple more images from V which can easily be done. A good first task. Though it won't be ''that'' easy from now on. ;) | ||
*''Rank 3 - | *''Rank 3 - 75% Closer'' | ||
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Latest revision as of 23:52, 19 September 2012


Previous Assignment(s)[edit source]
| Suspected Plagiarism - 8/10 |
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Template Task 1 - Suspected Plagiarism - Completed[edit source]For the Fanon section, we need the Suspect Plagiarism template, just saying that it's there on the grounds of Suspected Plagiarism. All you need to do is find a good image, and work on the sourcing, if you need help, I can easily give you step-by-step instructions on how to create one. There's no need for a to-do list here since it's a "small" task. Master's Notes[edit source]
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| Pazzi Conspiracy - 8.5/10 |
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Revamp Task 1 - Pazzi Conspiracy[edit source]Summary[edit source]I was originally going to do this but I believe it'd be a great first task for you. Basically, the Conspiracy page is filled with tense errors and can be reworded. It'll all be down in the to-do section. Difficulty: 7.5 To-Do[edit source]
Master's Notes[edit source]
Comments[edit source]
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| Clay Kaczmarek - 9.5/10 |
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Revamp Task 2 - Clay Kaczmarek[edit source]You chose it, I'd expect you to bring it up to either GA Status or FA Status. Difficulty: 6.7 (Since Nesty had previously revamped it) To-Do[edit source]I want you to list down everything you believe you need to get down.
Master's Notes[edit source]
Comments[edit source]
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| Battle of Agnadello - 8/10 |
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Revamp Task 3 - Battle of Agnadello[edit source]Needs quotes, sources, organizing. Work it up to a higher standard Difficulty (Normal Revamp) - 8 Difficulty (Good Article Status Revamp) - 9.5 To-Do[edit source]
Master's Notes[edit source]
Comments[edit source]
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| Userpage Development - 9.5/10 |
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Community Task 1 - Userpage Development (Optional)[edit source]I've loved decorating my userpage, a userpage needs to be welcoming, share a little more about yourself. This will only get you 25% closer and is entirely optional. If you want something specifically on there which you don't know how to do, then don't hesitate to ask any members of the community. Difficulty: N/A Master's Notes[edit source]
Comments[edit source] |
Current Assignments[edit source]
Revamp Task 4 - Memory Corridor (User Task)[edit source]
This page looks terrible, it's pictures and stuff are great but how it's layed out needs alot of touchup. You chose this task, so you know what to do.
Difficulty (Normal Revamp): 9/10
Difficulty (Good Article Revamp): 10/10
What you've improved[edit source]
I'd like you to list down what you've improved on the article.
Masters Notes[edit source]
- Good luck! --Teller Words, On my Screen :O 21:52, September 19, 2012 (UTC)
Comments[edit source]
- I wanted to see how well you pick the articles in desperate need of revamping, your choice was well thought out, after all, as I said, this article looks terrible. --Teller Words, On my Screen :O 21:52, September 19, 2012 (UTC)
Template Task 2 - Assassin's Creed 3 Cleared Userbox[edit source]
We have all the other cleared ones, but we should prepare for the near future when ACIII comes out (Hell yeah!) so we're going to need this. Make one for us by using the coding on the former ones and such. If you need any help, feel free to knock on my door A.K.A My talkpage.
Difficulty: 4/10
Master's Notes[edit source]
- Good Luck Ace! --Teller Words, On my Screen :O 21:52, September 19, 2012 (UTC)
Comments[edit source]
- Actually, leave any inquiries down here, much easier to locate. --Teller Words, On my Screen :O 21:52, September 19, 2012 (UTC)
Revamp Task 5 - Auguste Oberlin[edit source]
This page is good, it's writing is well but there are some issues, the picture is squishing the text between itself and the infobox, lacks quotes and could be expanded partially. You wanted an MP task, this is where you start.
Difficulty: 5.5/10
To-Do[edit source]
List everything you feel you need to do with this article including the things I mentioned.
Master's Notes[edit source]
- Good luck! --Teller Words, On my Screen :O 21:52, September 19, 2012 (UTC)
Comments[edit source]
- You know what to do down here, leave any questions and so on. --Teller Words, On my Screen :O 21:52, September 19, 2012 (UTC)
Ranking[edit source]
- Rank 1 - Obtained 24th March
- Rank 2 - Obtained 9th April
- Rank Comments: Only had to get a couple more images from V which can easily be done. A good first task. Though it won't be that easy from now on. ;)
- Rank 3 - 75% Closer