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<p style="color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">[[File:Pigeoncoopapp.png|center|300px]] '''The following page is an apprentice assignment page, which acts as a connection between the Apprentice, [[User:Stormbeast|Stormbeast]], and their Master, [[User:TheSt0ryTeller|TheSt0ryTeller]]. It exists as an external talk page, aimed at dealing with all aspects of the apprenticeship. Only the above mentioned users and the [[Assassin's_Creed_Wiki:Staff|staff]] have permission to converse here. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the wiki.'''</p>
 
<p style="color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">[[File:Pigeoncoopapp.png|center|300px]] '''The following page is an apprentice assignment page, which acts as a connection between the Apprentice, [[User:Stormbeast|Stormbeast]], and their Mentor'''''', [[User:TheSt0ryTeller|TheSt0ryTeller]]. It exists as an external talk page, aimed at dealing with all aspects of the apprenticeship. Only the above mentioned users and the [[Assassin's_Creed_Wiki:Staff|staff]] have permission to converse here. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the wiki.'''</p>


==Previous Assignment(s)==
==Previous Assignment(s)==
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==Current Assignments==
 
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!Suspected Plagiarism - 8/10
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===Template Task 1 - ''Suspected Plagiarism'' - Completed===
For the Fanon section, we need the Suspect Plagiarism template, just saying that it's there on the grounds of Suspected Plagiarism. All you need to do is find a good image, and work on the sourcing, if you need help, I can easily give you step-by-step instructions on how to create one. There's no need for a to-do list here since it's a "small" task.
 
====Master's Notes====
*Good Luck. :)
*A great job considering that he had never created a Template. --[[User:TheSt0ryTeller|<span style="font-family:Century Schoolbook;font-size:19px;color:green;">'''Teller'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:TheSt0ryTeller|<sup><span style="font-family:Gill Sans MS;color:yellow;">Words, On my Screen :O</span></sup>]] 07:14, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
 
====Comments====
*If you would write down the step-by-step process, that would be great. [[User:Stormbeast|<span style="font-family:Euphemia UCAS;font-size:18px;color:#008000;">'''Stormbeast'''</span>]] 18:30, March 24, 2012 (UTC)
**I'm still working on it. It should be done soon. --[[User:TheSt0ryTeller|<span style="font-family:Century Schoolbook;font-size:19px;color:green;">'''Teller'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:TheSt0ryTeller|<sup><span style="font-family:Gill Sans MS;color:yellow;">Words, On my Screen :O</span></sup>]] 10:18, March 27, 2012 (UTC)
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!Pazzi Conspiracy - 8.5/10
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===Revamp Task 1 - ''[[Pazzi Conspiracy]]''===
===Revamp Task 1 - ''[[Pazzi Conspiracy]]''===
====Summary====
====Summary====
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====To-Do====
====To-Do====
*Tense Error Correction (''Put an "x" in here once done'')
*Tense Error Correction (x)
*Image Replacement ( )
*Image Replacement (x)
**Some images aren't Vatsa quality images, easily fixable.
**Some images aren't Vatsa quality images, easily fixable.
*Rewording ( )
*Rewording (x)
*Section Titles Renaming ( )
*Section Titles Renaming (x)


====Master's Notes====
====Master's Notes====
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====Comments====
====Comments====
*If there's anything about this assignment you need, contact me here. --[[User:TheSt0ryTeller|<span style="font-family:Century Schoolbook;font-size:19px;color:green;">'''Teller'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:TheSt0ryTeller|<sup><span style="font-family:Gill Sans MS;color:yellow;">Words, On my Screen :O</span></sup>]] 22:19, March 23, 2012 (UTC)
*If there's anything about this assignment you need, contact me here. --[[User:TheSt0ryTeller|<span style="font-family:Century Schoolbook;font-size:19px;color:green;">'''Teller'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:TheSt0ryTeller|<sup><span style="font-family:Gill Sans MS;color:yellow;">Words, On my Screen :O</span></sup>]] 22:19, March 23, 2012 (UTC)
**Sorry for not doing anything since starting the Apprenticeship. I don't know if you got my message on the IRC, but my old charger broke and my computer lost power. I'll set to work on this right after I get off work tonight. [[User:Stormbeast|<span style="font-family:Euphemia UCAS;font-size:18px;color:#008000;">'''Stormbeast'''</span>]] 17:08, March 31, 2012 (UTC)
***It's fine mate. I got your message. Fill me in once you've started. :) --[[User:TheSt0ryTeller|<span style="font-family:Century Schoolbook;font-size:19px;color:green;">'''Teller'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:TheSt0ryTeller|<sup><span style="font-family:Gill Sans MS;color:yellow;">Words, On my Screen :O</span></sup>]] 22:10, March 31, 2012 (UTC)
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===Revamp Task 2 - ''Apprentice Choice''===
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I've given you the chance to locate a task and show me it and tell me what you aim to do. I'll add it here. This is to make sure you can find big revamp tasks on your own. I'm sure you can handle it.
!Clay Kaczmarek - 9.5/10
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===Revamp Task 2 - ''[[Clay Kaczmarek]]''===
You chose it, I'd expect you to bring it up to either GA Status or FA Status.
 
'''Difficulty''': 6.7 (Since Nesty had previously revamped it)
 
====To-Do====
''I want you to list down everything you believe you need to get down.''
 
*Expand introduction (x)
*Add quotes (x)
*Add/replace with quality images (x)
*Reword (x)
 
====Master's Notes====
*Good Luck, I look forward to see your work.
 
====Comments====
*Status report: Just various minor edits to fix some mistakes (typos,coding, links) in the article. I jotted down some ''to-dos'', but if you have anything to add, please. I plan on replaying ''[[The Lost Archive|TLA]]'' to see if I can find any good pictures. [[User:Stormbeast|<span style="font-family:Euphemia UCAS;font-size:18px;color:#008000;">'''Stormbeast'''</span>]] [[User Talk:Stormbeast|<sup><font color="white">The Helpful Place</font></sup>]] 05:05, May 16, 2012 (UTC)
*Almost finished with this one, I think. If you wanna look it over, that'd be great. No such luck finding any worthwhile images in ''TLA''. I had Dark proof-read it earlier and I still have to work on The Truth and "make sure all paragraph breaks are in logical places." [[User:Stormbeast|<span style="font-family:Euphemia UCAS;font-size:18px;color:#008000;">'''Stormbeast'''</span>]] [[User Talk:Stormbeast|<sup><font color="white">The Helpful Place</font></sup>]] 05:16, May 30, 2012 (UTC)
*I think I'm finished with this one Teller. Let me know if there's anything I missed. [[User:Stormbeast|<span style="font-family:Euphemia UCAS;font-size:18px;color:#008000;">'''Stormbeast'''</span>]] [[User Talk:Stormbeast|<sup><font color="white">The Helpful Place</font></sup>]] 07:49, June 6, 2012 (UTC)
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!Battle of Agnadello - 8/10
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===Revamp Task 3 - ''[[Battle of Agnadello]]''===
Needs quotes, sources, organizing. Work it up to a higher standard
 
'''Difficulty''' (Normal Revamp) - 8
 
'''Difficulty''' (Good Article Status Revamp) - 9.5
 
====To-Do====
*Expand (o)
*Add Quotes (x)
*Reword (x)
*Add Aftermath (x)
 
====Master's Notes====
*Good Luck. --[[User:TheSt0ryTeller|<span style="font-family:Century Schoolbook;font-size:19px;color:green;">'''Teller'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:TheSt0ryTeller|<sup><span style="font-family:Gill Sans MS;color:yellow;">Words, On my Screen :O</span></sup>]] 03:41, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
 
====Comments====
*Status report: Again, minor edits. Added ''Aftermath'', and will review Sima's comments on the IRC for it. I've reviewed [[Chapter 1 - Bartolomeo d'Alviano|Chapter 1]] of Project Legacy and may have found some good quotes. [[User:Stormbeast|<span style="font-family:Euphemia UCAS;font-size:18px;color:#008000;">'''Stormbeast'''</span>]] [[User Talk:Stormbeast|<sup><font color="white">The Helpful Place</font></sup>]] 05:05, May 16, 2012 (UTC)
*Added Aftermath and quotes. Completely forgot what Sima said though :( [[User:Stormbeast|<span style="font-family:Magneto;font-size:18px;color:#008000;">'''Stormbeast'''</span>]] [[User Talk:Stormbeast|<sup><font color="white">The Helpful Place</font></sup>]] 05:25, June 19, 2012 (UTC)
*I'm at a loss. I've done what I can and I'll post it tomorrow after work. If you have any suggestions between now and then, let me know. {{User:Stormbeast/sig}} 07:46, July 1, 2012 (UTC)
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!Userpage Development - 9.5/10
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===Community Task 1 - Userpage Development (Optional)===
I've loved decorating my userpage, a userpage needs to be welcoming, share a little more about yourself. This will only get you 25% closer and is entirely optional. If you want something specifically on there which you don't know how to do, then don't hesitate to ask any members of the ''community''.


===Template Task 1 - ''Suspected Plagiarism''===
'''Difficulty''': N/A
For the Fanon section, we need the Suspect Plagiarism template, just saying that it's there on the grounds of Suspected Plagiarism. All you need to do is find a good image, and work on the sourcing, if you need help, I can easily give you step-by-step instructions on how to create one. There's no need for a to-do list here since it's a "small" task.


====Master's Notes====
====Master's Notes====
*Good Luck. :)
*Good Luck. ^^ --[[User:TheSt0ryTeller|<span style="font-family:Century Schoolbook;font-size:19px;color:green;">'''Teller'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:TheSt0ryTeller|<sup><span style="font-family:Gill Sans MS;color:yellow;">Words, On my Screen :O</span></sup>]] 03:41, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
 


====Comments====
====Comments====
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==Current Assignments==
===Revamp Task 4 - [[Memory Corridor]] (User Task)===
This page looks terrible, it's pictures and stuff are great but how it's layed out needs alot of touchup. You chose this task, so you know what to do.
'''Difficulty (Normal Revamp)''': 9/10
'''Difficulty (Good Article Revamp)''': 10/10
====What you've improved====
I'd like you to list down what you've improved on the article.
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#
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====Masters Notes====
*Good luck! --[[User:TheSt0ryTeller|<span style="font-family:Century Schoolbook;font-size:19px;color:green;">'''Teller'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:TheSt0ryTeller|<sup><span style="font-family:Gill Sans MS;color:yellow;">Words, On my Screen :O</span></sup>]] 21:52, September 19, 2012 (UTC)
====Comments====
*I wanted to see how well you pick the articles in desperate need of revamping, your choice was well thought out, after all, as I said, this article looks terrible. --[[User:TheSt0ryTeller|<span style="font-family:Century Schoolbook;font-size:19px;color:green;">'''Teller'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:TheSt0ryTeller|<sup><span style="font-family:Gill Sans MS;color:yellow;">Words, On my Screen :O</span></sup>]] 21:52, September 19, 2012 (UTC)
===Template Task 2 - Assassin's Creed 3 Cleared Userbox===
We have all the other cleared ones, but we should prepare for the near future when ACIII comes out (Hell yeah!) so we're going to need this. Make one for us by using the coding on the former ones and such. If you need any help, feel free to knock on my door A.K.A My talkpage.
'''Difficulty''': 4/10
====Master's Notes====
*Good Luck Ace! --[[User:TheSt0ryTeller|<span style="font-family:Century Schoolbook;font-size:19px;color:green;">'''Teller'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:TheSt0ryTeller|<sup><span style="font-family:Gill Sans MS;color:yellow;">Words, On my Screen :O</span></sup>]] 21:52, September 19, 2012 (UTC)
====Comments====
*Actually, leave any inquiries down here, much easier to locate. --[[User:TheSt0ryTeller|<span style="font-family:Century Schoolbook;font-size:19px;color:green;">'''Teller'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:TheSt0ryTeller|<sup><span style="font-family:Gill Sans MS;color:yellow;">Words, On my Screen :O</span></sup>]] 21:52, September 19, 2012 (UTC)
===Revamp Task 5 - [[Auguste Oberlin]]===
This page is good, it's writing is well but there are some issues, the picture is squishing the text between itself and the infobox, lacks quotes and could be expanded partially. You wanted an MP task, this is where you start.
'''Difficulty:''' 5.5/10
====To-Do====
List everything you feel you need to do with this article including the things I mentioned.
#
#
#
====Master's Notes====
*Good luck! --[[User:TheSt0ryTeller|<span style="font-family:Century Schoolbook;font-size:19px;color:green;">'''Teller'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:TheSt0ryTeller|<sup><span style="font-family:Gill Sans MS;color:yellow;">Words, On my Screen :O</span></sup>]] 21:52, September 19, 2012 (UTC)
====Comments====
*You know what to do down here, leave any questions and so on. --[[User:TheSt0ryTeller|<span style="font-family:Century Schoolbook;font-size:19px;color:green;">'''Teller'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:TheSt0ryTeller|<sup><span style="font-family:Gill Sans MS;color:yellow;">Words, On my Screen :O</span></sup>]] 21:52, September 19, 2012 (UTC)


==Ranking==
==Ranking==
*''Rank 1 - Obtained 24th March''
*''Rank 1 - Obtained 24th March''
*''Rank 2 - 0% Closer''
*''Rank 2 - Obtained 9th April''
**Rank Comments: Only had to get a couple more images from V which can easily be done. A good first task. Though it won't be ''that'' easy from now on. ;)
*''Rank 3 - 75% Closer''
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Latest revision as of 23:52, 19 September 2012

The following page is an apprentice assignment page, which acts as a connection between the Apprentice, Stormbeast, and their Mentor', TheSt0ryTeller. It exists as an external talk page, aimed at dealing with all aspects of the apprenticeship. Only the above mentioned users and the staff have permission to converse here. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the wiki.'

Previous Assignment(s)[edit source]

Current Assignments[edit source]

Revamp Task 4 - Memory Corridor (User Task)[edit source]

This page looks terrible, it's pictures and stuff are great but how it's layed out needs alot of touchup. You chose this task, so you know what to do.

Difficulty (Normal Revamp): 9/10

Difficulty (Good Article Revamp): 10/10

What you've improved[edit source]

I'd like you to list down what you've improved on the article.

Masters Notes[edit source]

Comments[edit source]

  • I wanted to see how well you pick the articles in desperate need of revamping, your choice was well thought out, after all, as I said, this article looks terrible. --Teller Words, On my Screen :O 21:52, September 19, 2012 (UTC)

Template Task 2 - Assassin's Creed 3 Cleared Userbox[edit source]

We have all the other cleared ones, but we should prepare for the near future when ACIII comes out (Hell yeah!) so we're going to need this. Make one for us by using the coding on the former ones and such. If you need any help, feel free to knock on my door A.K.A My talkpage.

Difficulty: 4/10

Master's Notes[edit source]

Comments[edit source]

Revamp Task 5 - Auguste Oberlin[edit source]

This page is good, it's writing is well but there are some issues, the picture is squishing the text between itself and the infobox, lacks quotes and could be expanded partially. You wanted an MP task, this is where you start.

Difficulty: 5.5/10

To-Do[edit source]

List everything you feel you need to do with this article including the things I mentioned.

Master's Notes[edit source]

Comments[edit source]

Ranking[edit source]

  • Rank 1 - Obtained 24th March
  • Rank 2 - Obtained 9th April
    • Rank Comments: Only had to get a couple more images from V which can easily be done. A good first task. Though it won't be that easy from now on. ;)
  • Rank 3 - 75% Closer