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[[File:Pigeoncoopapp.png|center|300px]] '''The following page is an apprentice assignment page, which acts as a connection between the Apprentice, [[User:Gabriel Auditore|Gabriel Auditore]] , and their Mentor, [[User: | [[File:Pigeoncoopapp.png|center|300px]] '''The following page is an apprentice assignment page, which acts as a connection between the Apprentice, [[User:Gabriel Auditore|Gabriel Auditore]] , and their Mentor, [[User:Kaloneous|Kaloneous]]. It exists as an external talk page, aimed at dealing with all aspects of the apprenticeship. Only the above mentioned users and the [[Assassin's_Creed_Wiki:Staff|staff]] have permission to converse here. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the Wiki.''' | ||
==Assignment 1 - Revamp: [[Bugs/Assassin's Creed II]]== | ==Assignment 1 - Revamp: [[Bugs/Assassin's Creed II]]== | ||
Back in ''mmyyyyyy'' day, the Bugs page was the first thing I revamped. | Back in ''mmyyyyyy'' day, the Bugs page was the first thing I revamped. It was a massive heap of text which resembled a Forum more than a Wiki page. Since then it has been cleaned up multiple times and during his Apprenticeship, [[User:DarkFeather|Dark]] even gave it a massive revamp into sub-pages. But like a bad STD or [[User:Toppers|Toppers]], it just keeps coming back. I only gave the ''ACII'' section of it because it's big enough as a test, and because my music stutters hardcore when I scroll, so couldn't be fucked to check out the other sub-pages. The main problems appear to the headings which either break MoS or sound rather informal, and the OOU (Out of Universe - from the player's perspective) writing, e.g. ''"when the player..."'' or ''"once you..."''. I know the page is OOU itself, so OOU writing should seem okay, but it just doesn't look right, especially as it's not difficult to fix. Good luck, hope you don't get killed. -- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 10:25, September 24, 2012 (UTC) | ||
:Interesting choice. Thanks for the advice; I'll be using [[Template:Apprentice Revamp]] on the article and a Sandbox in case I need multiple edits, right? Will get to work on it asap. {{User:Gabriel Auditore/sig}} 10:49, September 24, 2012 (UTC) | :Interesting choice. Thanks for the advice; I'll be using [[Template:Apprentice Revamp]] on the article and a Sandbox in case I need multiple edits, right? Will get to work on it asap. {{User:Gabriel Auditore/sig}} 10:49, September 24, 2012 (UTC) | ||
I've spent the day preparing a first draft. You can find it at [[User:Gabriel Auditore/Sandbox1|Delta]].<br/> | I've spent the day preparing a first draft. You can find it at [[User:Gabriel Auditore/Sandbox1|Delta]].<br /> | ||
Summary of changes: | Summary of changes: | ||
*Intro redone according to MoS. | *Intro redone according to MoS. | ||
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==Assignment 3 - Revamp/Expansion: [[Assassin's Creed Achievement Guide/List of Templar Locations]]== | ==Assignment 3 - Revamp/Expansion: [[Assassin's Creed Achievement Guide/List of Templar Locations]]== | ||
Initially, this task seemed simple - reorganize the information and update from the game guide. That was far from the reality, as the game guide didn't have anything on the locations, so the task had to be done the old-fashioned way. Regardless, the page was in terrible shape, and I'd like to think it's actually presentable now.<br/> Task complete. {{User:Gabriel Auditore/sig}} 14:27, November 11, 2012 (UTC) | Initially, this task seemed simple - reorganize the information and update from the game guide. That was far from the reality, as the game guide didn't have anything on the locations, so the task had to be done the old-fashioned way. Regardless, the page was in terrible shape, and I'd like to think it's actually presentable now.<br />Task complete. {{User:Gabriel Auditore/sig}} 14:27, November 11, 2012 (UTC) | ||
==Assignment 4 - Revamp: [[Crafting]]== | ==Assignment 4 - Revamp: [[Crafting]]== | ||
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:An anon jumped the gun on this one, so I finished up quickly. Gave it a once-over and I think it's alright. Didn't include an "''Assassin's Creed'' works" section because Sima doesn't like it when we repeat this info multiple times, especially since it's just one role in one game. Working on the other two now. {{User:Gabriel Auditore/sig}} 12:05, January 3, 2013 (UTC) | :An anon jumped the gun on this one, so I finished up quickly. Gave it a once-over and I think it's alright. Didn't include an "''Assassin's Creed'' works" section because Sima doesn't like it when we repeat this info multiple times, especially since it's just one role in one game. Working on the other two now. {{User:Gabriel Auditore/sig}} 12:05, January 3, 2013 (UTC) | ||
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Revision as of 18:57, 29 January 2013
Assignment 1 - Revamp: Bugs/Assassin's Creed II
Back in mmyyyyyy day, the Bugs page was the first thing I revamped. It was a massive heap of text which resembled a Forum more than a Wiki page. Since then it has been cleaned up multiple times and during his Apprenticeship, Dark even gave it a massive revamp into sub-pages. But like a bad STD or Toppers, it just keeps coming back. I only gave the ACII section of it because it's big enough as a test, and because my music stutters hardcore when I scroll, so couldn't be fucked to check out the other sub-pages. The main problems appear to the headings which either break MoS or sound rather informal, and the OOU (Out of Universe - from the player's perspective) writing, e.g. "when the player..." or "once you...". I know the page is OOU itself, so OOU writing should seem okay, but it just doesn't look right, especially as it's not difficult to fix. Good luck, hope you don't get killed. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig Funk Man's Funky House of Funk 10:25, September 24, 2012 (UTC)
- Interesting choice. Thanks for the advice; I'll be using Template:Apprentice Revamp on the article and a Sandbox in case I need multiple edits, right? Will get to work on it asap. ~ GI Auditore Comms Channel 10:49, September 24, 2012 (UTC)
I've spent the day preparing a first draft. You can find it at Delta.
Summary of changes:
- Intro redone according to MoS.
- Rewording OOU aka pretty much the entire article.
- Split into minor, major, and memory-specific.
- Renamed memory-specific glitches to the name of the memory and listed all related glitches.
- Linked to articles on the wiki.
- Fixed a few images, though they're still crappy quality.
- Changed thumb sizes for consistency.
Let me know if there's any other way I can improve the article. Thanks =) ~ GI Auditore Comms Channel 20:57, September 24, 2012 (UTC)
Update: Task complete. ~ GI Auditore Comms Channel 10:43, September 27, 2012 (UTC)
Check the Progress Log for the evaluation. Time to pick your own now; add it here yourself when you're ready. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig Funk Man's Funky House of Funk 06:26, October 4, 2012 (UTC)
Assignment 2 - Mini Revamp: Francisco Randez
Sourceless information irks me. Count this as a minor task if you will, but I aim to source and update all information on this article and see if I can tweak the formatting a bit to make the article better. I feel we owe him at least that much. May take a while since I'm a little busy with classes and stuff. ~ GI Auditore Comms Channel 09:19, October 4, 2012 (UTC)
- Aaand we're done. ~ GI Auditore Comms Channel 12:37, October 9, 2012 (UTC)
Assignment 3 - Revamp/Expansion: Assassin's Creed Achievement Guide/List of Templar Locations
Initially, this task seemed simple - reorganize the information and update from the game guide. That was far from the reality, as the game guide didn't have anything on the locations, so the task had to be done the old-fashioned way. Regardless, the page was in terrible shape, and I'd like to think it's actually presentable now.
Task complete. ~ GI Auditore Comms Channel 14:27, November 11, 2012 (UTC)
Assignment 4 - Revamp: Crafting
Two pages with a whole ton of junk code, typos and mistakes. Took most of the day, but I merged them, removed all the junk code, fixed all the errors, and now we've got the ultimate crafting guide for Assassin's Creed III. ~ GI Auditore Comms Channel 10:19, November 17, 2012 (UTC)
Assignment 5 - Article Creation: Assassin's Creed III (mobile game)
I just got my hands on this, so I'll follow the format set by the other mobile game articles and write out the article with as much information as possible, and a reasonable number of images. ~ GI Auditore Comms Channel 11:00, November 16, 2012 (UTC)
- I'll add the plot section as suggested soon. ~ GI Auditore Comms Channel 19:24, December 23, 2012 (UTC)
Assignment 6 - Documentation: Almanac Pages
I think this counts as a worthy task, based on the sheer volume of text that needs to be processed ~ GI Auditore Comms Channel 19:24, December 23, 2012 (UTC)
Assignment 7 - Article Creation: Kaniehtiio Horn
I like to create VA articles, and I should be able to get this one done with a proper biography section as well. ~ GI Auditore Comms Channel 19:24, December 23, 2012 (UTC)
- An anon jumped the gun on this one, so I finished up quickly. Gave it a once-over and I think it's alright. Didn't include an "Assassin's Creed works" section because Sima doesn't like it when we repeat this info multiple times, especially since it's just one role in one game. Working on the other two now. ~ GI Auditore Comms Channel 12:05, January 3, 2013 (UTC)