Assassin's Creed Wiki:Apprentices/Gabriel Auditore/PigeonCoop

The following page is an apprentice assignment page, which acts as a connection between the Apprentice, Gabriel Auditore , and their Mentor, 'R BlaiddDdraig . It exists as an external talk page, aimed at dealing with all aspects of the apprenticeship. Only the above mentioned users and the staff have permission to converse here. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the Wiki.

Assignment 1 - Revamp: Bugs/Assassin's Creed II

Back in mmyyyyyy day, the Bugs page was the first thing I revamped. It was a massive heap of text which resembled a Forum more than a Wiki page. Since then it has been cleaned up multiple times and during his Apprenticeship, Dark even gave it a massive revamp into sub-pages. But like a bad STD or Toppers, it just keeps coming back. I only gave the ACII section of it because it's big enough as a test, and because my music stutters hardcore when I scroll, so couldn't be fucked to check out the other sub-pages. The main problems appear to the headings which either break MoS or sound rather informal, and the OOU (Out of Universe - from the player's perspective) writing, e.g. "when the player..." or "once you...". I know the page is OOU itself, so OOU writing should seem okay, but it just doesn't look right, especially as it's not difficult to fix. Good luck, hope you don't get killed. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig ^{Funk Man's Funky House of Funk} 10:25, September 24, 2012 (UTC)

Interesting choice. Thanks for the advice; I'll be using Template:Apprentice Revamp on the article and a Sandbox in case I need multiple edits, right? Will get to work on it asap. ~ GI Auditore ^{Comms Channel} 10:49, September 24, 2012 (UTC)

I've spent the day preparing a first draft. You can find it at Delta.
Summary of changes:

• Intro redone according to MoS.
• Rewording OOU aka pretty much the entire article.
• Split into minor, major, and memory-specific.
• Renamed memory-specific glitches to the name of the memory and listed all related glitches.
• Linked to articles on the wiki.
• Fixed a few images, though they're still crappy quality.
• Changed thumb sizes for consistency.

Let me know if there's any other way I can improve the article. Thanks =) ~ GI Auditore ^{Comms Channel} 20:57, September 24, 2012 (UTC)