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==Assignment 1 - Revamp: [[Bugs/Assassin's Creed II]]== | ==Assignment 1 - Revamp: [[Bugs/Assassin's Creed II]]== | ||
Back in ''mmyyyyyy'' day, the Bugs page was the first thing I revamped. It was a massive heap of text which resembled a Forum more than a Wiki page. Since then it has been cleaned up multiple times and during his Apprenticeship, [[User:DarkFeather|Dark]] even gave it a massive revamp into sub-pages. But like a bad STD or [[User:Toppers|Toppers]], it just keeps coming back. I only gave the ''ACII'' section of it because it's big enough as a test, and because my music stutters hardcore when I scroll, so couldn't be fucked to check out the other sub-pages. The main problems appear to the headings which either break MoS or sound rather informal, and the OOU (Out of Universe - from the player's perspective) writing, e.g. ''"when the player..."'' or ''"once you..."''. I know the page is OOU itself, so OOU writing should seem okay, but it just doesn't look right, especially as it's not difficult to fix. Good luck, hope you don't get killed. -- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 10:25, September 24, 2012 (UTC) | Back in ''mmyyyyyy'' day, the Bugs page was the first thing I revamped. It was a massive heap of text which resembled a Forum more than a Wiki page. Since then it has been cleaned up multiple times and during his Apprenticeship, [[User:DarkFeather|Dark]] even gave it a massive revamp into sub-pages. But like a bad STD or [[User:Toppers|Toppers]], it just keeps coming back. I only gave the ''ACII'' section of it because it's big enough as a test, and because my music stutters hardcore when I scroll, so couldn't be fucked to check out the other sub-pages. The main problems appear to the headings which either break MoS or sound rather informal, and the OOU (Out of Universe - from the player's perspective) writing, e.g. ''"when the player..."'' or ''"once you..."''. I know the page is OOU itself, so OOU writing should seem okay, but it just doesn't look right, especially as it's not difficult to fix. Good luck, hope you don't get killed. -- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 10:25, September 24, 2012 (UTC) | ||
:Interesting choice. Thanks for the advice; I'll be using [[Template:Apprentice Revamp]] on the article and a Sandbox in case I need multiple edits, right? Will get to work on it asap. {{User:Gabriel Auditore/sig}} 10:49, September 24, 2012 (UTC) | |||
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Assignment 1 - Revamp: Bugs/Assassin's Creed II
Back in mmyyyyyy day, the Bugs page was the first thing I revamped. It was a massive heap of text which resembled a Forum more than a Wiki page. Since then it has been cleaned up multiple times and during his Apprenticeship, Dark even gave it a massive revamp into sub-pages. But like a bad STD or Toppers, it just keeps coming back. I only gave the ACII section of it because it's big enough as a test, and because my music stutters hardcore when I scroll, so couldn't be fucked to check out the other sub-pages. The main problems appear to the headings which either break MoS or sound rather informal, and the OOU (Out of Universe - from the player's perspective) writing, e.g. "when the player..." or "once you...". I know the page is OOU itself, so OOU writing should seem okay, but it just doesn't look right, especially as it's not difficult to fix. Good luck, hope you don't get killed. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig Funk Man's Funky House of Funk 10:25, September 24, 2012 (UTC)
- Interesting choice. Thanks for the advice; I'll be using Template:Apprentice Revamp on the article and a Sandbox in case I need multiple edits, right? Will get to work on it asap. ~ GI Auditore Comms Channel 10:49, September 24, 2012 (UTC)