Assassin's Creed Wiki:Apprentices/Gabriel Auditore/PigeonCoop: Difference between revisions
imported>TheSt0ryTeller Created page with "center|400px <div style="border:2px solid white; padding:.5em 1em 1em 1em; border-top:2px solid white; background-color:#336699; color:#FFFFFF"> [[File:P..." |
imported>'R BlaiddDdraig Update |
||
| Line 2: | Line 2: | ||
<div style="border:2px solid white; padding:.5em 1em 1em 1em; border-top:2px solid white; background-color:#336699; color:#FFFFFF"> | <div style="border:2px solid white; padding:.5em 1em 1em 1em; border-top:2px solid white; background-color:#336699; color:#FFFFFF"> | ||
[[File:Pigeoncoopapp.png|center|300px]] '''The following page is an apprentice assignment page, which acts as a connection between the Apprentice, [[User:Gabriel Auditore|Gabriel Auditore]] , and their Mentor, [[User:'R BlaiddDdraig|'R BlaiddDdraig]] . It exists as an external talk page, aimed at dealing with all aspects of the apprenticeship. Only the above mentioned users and the [[Assassin's_Creed_Wiki:Staff|staff]] have permission to converse here. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the | [[File:Pigeoncoopapp.png|center|300px]] '''The following page is an apprentice assignment page, which acts as a connection between the Apprentice, [[User:Gabriel Auditore|Gabriel Auditore]] , and their Mentor, [[User:'R BlaiddDdraig|'R BlaiddDdraig]] . It exists as an external talk page, aimed at dealing with all aspects of the apprenticeship. Only the above mentioned users and the [[Assassin's_Creed_Wiki:Staff|staff]] have permission to converse here. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the Wiki.''' | ||
== | ==Assignment 1 - Revamp: [[Bugs/Assassin's Creed II]]== | ||
Back in ''mmyyyyyy'' day, the Bugs page was the first thing I revamped. It was a massive heap of text which resembled a Forum more than a Wiki page. Since then it has been cleaned up multiple times and during his Apprenticeship, [[User:DarkFeather|Dark]] even gave it a massive revamp into sub-pages. But like a bad STD or [[User:Toppers|Toppers]], it just keeps coming back. I only gave the ''ACII'' section of it because it's big enough as a test, and because my music stutters hardcore when I scroll, so couldn't be fucked to check out the other sub-pages. The main problems appear to the headings which either break MoS or sound rather informal, and the OOU (Out of Universe - from the player's perspective) writing, e.g. ''"when the player..."'' or ''"once you..."''. I know the page is OOU itself, so OOU writing should seem okay, but it just doesn't look right, especially as it's not difficult to fix. Good luck, hope you don't get killed. -- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 10:25, September 24, 2012 (UTC) | |||
</div> | </div> | ||
Revision as of 12:25, 24 September 2012
Assignment 1 - Revamp: Bugs/Assassin's Creed II
Back in mmyyyyyy day, the Bugs page was the first thing I revamped. It was a massive heap of text which resembled a Forum more than a Wiki page. Since then it has been cleaned up multiple times and during his Apprenticeship, Dark even gave it a massive revamp into sub-pages. But like a bad STD or Toppers, it just keeps coming back. I only gave the ACII section of it because it's big enough as a test, and because my music stutters hardcore when I scroll, so couldn't be fucked to check out the other sub-pages. The main problems appear to the headings which either break MoS or sound rather informal, and the OOU (Out of Universe - from the player's perspective) writing, e.g. "when the player..." or "once you...". I know the page is OOU itself, so OOU writing should seem okay, but it just doesn't look right, especially as it's not difficult to fix. Good luck, hope you don't get killed. -- 'R BlaiddDdraig Funk Man's Funky House of Funk 10:25, September 24, 2012 (UTC)