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===Master's notes:=== | ===Master's notes:=== | ||
*Good luck. I look forward to seeing the ending result. [[User:AssassinRome|<span style="font-family:trajan pro;font-size:14px;color:#CCFF00;">'''Assassino de Roma'''</span>]] 16:12, July 3, 2011 (UTC) | *Good luck. I look forward to seeing the ending result. [[User:AssassinRome|<span style="font-family:trajan pro;font-size:14px;color:#CCFF00;">'''Assassino de Roma'''</span>]] 16:12, July 3, 2011 (UTC) | ||
===Apprentice notes:=== | |||
*I didn't read the assignment text at the top properly, I forgot about adding more detail into his duel with Altair. I forgot to dot the 'i's aswell. | |||
===Apprentice To-Do List:=== | ===Apprentice To-Do List:=== | ||
'''Siege of Masyaf- COMPLETED''' | *'''Siege of Masyaf- COMPLETED''' | ||
'''Siege of Masyaf (Corrections)-''' '''COMPLETED''' | *'''Siege of Masyaf (Corrections)-''' '''COMPLETED''' | ||
'''Image Addition- COMPLETED (I couldn't find a full body so I used the best I saw)''' | *'''Image Addition- COMPLETED (I couldn't find a full body so I used the best I saw)''' | ||
'''Hunt for the Nine details | *'''Hunt for the Nine details- COMPLETED''' | ||
*'''Hunt for the Nine (Corrections)- COMPLETED''' | |||
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'''Last Minute Correction- COMPLETED''' | '''Last Minute Correction- COMPLETED''' | ||
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Revision as of 02:28, 5 July 2011
The following page is an apprentice assignment page, which acts as a connection between the apprentice, TheSt0ryTeller, and their Master, AssassinRome. It exists as an external talk page, aimed at dealing with all aspects of the apprenticeship. Only the above mentioned users and the staff have permission to converse here. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the wiki.
First Project:Al Mualim
Well, here it is, Teller. Your first project. Despite being the main antagonist of the first game and being a major character overall, the article lacks in several ways: it lacks detail regarding his life, the formating is bad, and there should be more sections such as his duel with Altaïr or the attack on Masyaf. Not to mention a lack of pictures and quotes.
Difficulty Rating: 6.7
Requirements
- Create a section regarding his early life. Several articles and help you with this. I refer to the following: Siege of Masyaf, Umar Ibn-La'Ahad.
- Completely revamp the "Later life" section, and create other sections with the 4th Heading format for "Attack on Masyaf", and "Hunt for the Nine" section, etc. Remember to add necessary pictures to each of these sections and quotes that fit well with both the character and the situation.
- Now, when you go to a character article you expect a decent image. Well, I afraid the Al Mualim one lacks. So be sure to get a better image, a full body one if possible, excluding the full body concept art in the gallery. If you can't get the image yourself, request one of our other users to take it for you. That way it shows you're improvising.
- Finally, there is no time limit. Take your time to perfect this artcle.
Master's notes:
- Good luck. I look forward to seeing the ending result. Assassino de Roma 16:12, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
Apprentice notes:
- I didn't read the assignment text at the top properly, I forgot about adding more detail into his duel with Altair. I forgot to dot the 'i's aswell.
Apprentice To-Do List:
- Siege of Masyaf- COMPLETED
- Siege of Masyaf (Corrections)- COMPLETED
- Image Addition- COMPLETED (I couldn't find a full body so I used the best I saw)
- Hunt for the Nine details- COMPLETED
- Hunt for the Nine (Corrections)- COMPLETED
Last Minute Correction- COMPLETED