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  • curprev 10:0910:09, 9 January 2022imported>Sol Pacificus 7,505 bytes +2 Forgot to mention that the whole part about Hetepi's unknown motives needed to be removed entirely, not revised. Its main problem wasn't verbose wording. It was that it was speculation. cin gbere le
  • curprev 10:0610:06, 9 January 2022imported>Sol Pacificus 7,503 bytes −38 The correct word is 'machinations' not 'mechanations'. I don't mind creative, even moderately poetic, wording in wiki writing, but I'm not too sure "paranormal miasma of tragedy" is semantically correct. The entire personality section should be rewritten imo, but I will have to come back to it tomorrow. Otherwise, I took parts of both Darman and Sarasti's edits because I think your edits were both good and problematic in different places. cin gbere le

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  • curprev 19:2019:20, 7 January 2022imported>Darman36 7,041 bytes −822 The wiki strives for concise yet understandable brevity. Please stop adding filler words. See your talk page for msg so we don't draw out an edit war. cin gbere le
  • curprev 18:4218:42, 7 January 2022imported>Sarasti the Serpentm 7,863 bytes +4 A miasma is a negative atmosphere. It doesn’t not have only one definition. There is no verbosity. Please do not vandalize pages with poor grammar. The page had a sign that it needed a major revamp. cin gbere le
  • curprev 18:3418:34, 7 January 2022imported>Sarasti the Serpent 7,859 bytes +815 Undo revision 981560 by Darman36 (talk) cin gbere le
  • curprev 09:3009:30, 7 January 2022imported>Darman36 7,044 bytes −818 Again, we need not such verbosity. Hetepi turned Memphis to a place of despair, not just miasma/foul stink. High Priest is title, like Cardinal, Pope, etc. cin gbere le
  • curprev 05:3005:30, 7 January 2022imported>Sarasti the Serpent 7,862 bytes +6 No edit summary cin gbere le
  • curprev 05:2705:27, 7 January 2022imported>Sarasti the Serpentm 7,856 bytes +41 added Etymology for the suffix -j (Hotep meaning to be satisfied/at peace, -j meaning a masculine individual cin gbere le
  • curprev 05:2305:23, 7 January 2022imported>Sarasti the Serpent 7,815 bytes +773 Massive clean up. Whoever edited after me doesn’t seem to speak English as a first language, as many sentences were changed to include words that do not belong (replacing miasma with “place”). Added etymological link for the word “Hotep”. Fixed various grammatical errors. Cleaned up bad sentences. cin gbere le
  • curprev 02:3002:30, 7 January 2022imported>Darman36 7,042 bytes −1,868 Clean up. Far too verbose, present tense and/or non-objective POV (eg. "perhaps he was simply..."), brackets mid-paragraphs. Please read Manual of Style. cin gbere le
  • curprev 01:5501:55, 7 January 2022imported>Sarasti the Serpentm 8,910 bytes +4 No edit summary cin gbere le

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