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12 November 2011
- 17:3417:34, 12 November 2011 diff hist 0 Majd Addin →Personality and characteristics: Forgot to correct "robed" with "robes". sorry!!!!
- 17:3317:33, 12 November 2011 diff hist −31 Majd Addin →Personality and characteristics: Corrected some general errors which do not read right in English + some incorrect words i.e. "aswell"
- 17:2517:25, 12 November 2011 diff hist +707 N Thread:86.148.135.128/@comment-3967215-20111112150531/@comment-86.148.135.128-20111112152546 Created page with "I am editing as I am reading. There are too many mistakes to correct all in one go and no one is paying me. So... How about this? If you (speaking in general here) are not good a..." current
- 17:1117:11, 12 November 2011 diff hist −1 Abu'l Nuqoud →Personality and characteristics: Basic English grammar: never put a comma before the word "and". Corrected.
- 17:0517:05, 12 November 2011 diff hist −1 Abu'l Nuqoud →Personality and characteristics: A God "that" agrees is incorrect since a God is considered an "it" hence "who" should be used. Corrected.
- 17:0417:04, 12 November 2011 diff hist +6 Abu'l Nuqoud →Personality and characteristics: "..he could not service in a war" does not make sense since "service is used as a verb, which it is not". Corrected.
- 17:0117:01, 12 November 2011 diff hist +8 Abu'l Nuqoud →Assassination: "..took advantage of the panic" is incorrect English. It should be either "ensuing panic" or "panic caused". Corrected.
- 16:5816:58, 12 November 2011 diff hist +1 Abu'l Nuqoud →Assassination: In proper and correct English, you cannot propose a toast "to" the generosity of others, but instead "for" the generosity shown by others. An education is useful. ;)
- 15:0315:03, 12 November 2011 diff hist −1 Abu'l Nuqoud →Assassination: Simple English grammar: you don't use a comma before the word "and". They teach you that when you are 5 years old in Britain.