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Paul Revere revamp. Assignment completed on March 30, 2013
Mentor's notes
After reading over his work on Paul Revere, he's displayed good work with expansion. He added 3 new sections, expanded previous sections, and expanded the intro and galleries as well. The mistakes he made were mostly with changing the narrative (sometimes used "Paul" other times used "Revere) and linking, but I've given him direction regarding those issues so hopefully he can correct them. He still needs work on his grammar and prose, but his writing is typically concise and informative. Solid work thus far from him, deserving of a promotion. --NOSTALGIATALK 16:53, March 30, 2013 (UTC)
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Accepted into Apprentice initiative on March 22, 2013
