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| '''The following page is an apprentice assignment page, which acts as a connection between the apprentice, [[User:Assassinist|Assassinist]], and their Master, [[User:GuardDog|GuardDog]]. It exists as an external talk page, aimed at dealing with all aspects of the apprenticeship. Only the above mentioned users and the [[Assassin's_Creed_Wiki:Staff|staff]] have permission to converse here. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the wiki.''' | | '''The following page is an apprentice assignment page, which acts as a connection between the apprentice, [[User:Assassinist|Assassinist]], and their Master, [[User:Amnestyyy|Amnestyyy]]. It exists as an external talk page, aimed at dealing with all aspects of the apprenticeship. Only the above mentioned users and the [[Assassin's_Creed_Wiki:Staff|staff]] have permission to converse here. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the wiki.''' |
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| =Past Ranks= | | ==Assignment 1 - TBA== |
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| ! Rank 1 Assignments
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| ==<strike>Assassify Assignment</strike>==
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| {{main|Circo Massimo}}
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| Conversion of the page into a good quality location page, as well an "assassified" one (without references to the games).
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| ===References===
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| *For assassified page - '''Sixth Apple'''
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| *For location page - [[La Volpe Addormentata]]
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| *Reaper, you may start on your own, but when I meet you on the IRC, I'll give you a tutorial on how to complete this assignment. Pose any questions to me here, or on the IRC. =[[User:GuardDog|GuardDog]] 11:30, April 27, 2011 (UTC)
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| ==<strike>Location Assignment</strike>==
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| {{main|Colosseo}}
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| Similarly to the previous assignment (though a bit longer), this article also needs assassifying, with the Core Memory/Side Memory section translated into a History section. Note that some wording also needs to be edited, and some redundant links removed.
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| ===References===
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| *For info on dates and other details - [[Colosseum Passion Play]]
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| *For location page with a History section - [[Monteriggioni]]
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| ===Comments===
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| *This is quite a long one, so take your time with it. Please remember to remove the assassify template when you've been able to clear up all the game references. =[[User:GuardDog|GuardDog]] 11:49, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
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| *Unfortunately I'm a bit busy so I can't go online today, but of course, feel free to start already if you like. I'll be online tomorrow if you need anything. =[[User:GuardDog|GuardDog]] 11:49, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
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| ==<strike>City Assignment</strike>==
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| {{main|Florence}}
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| Final location assignment. Many sections (particularly the Landmarks and ''Assassin's Creed: Brotherhood'') need to be assassified. History section must be divided into subsections, and the Oltrarno district moved to the Landmarks section.
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| ===Reminders===
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| *Any sentences that are necessary but are written in in-game references (such as those in the ACB section) can instead be moved to the Trivia section.
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| *Please remember not to change anything but links under the Database entry section.
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| *Apprentice (which I will refer to you as until I can settle on a nick), I will be online at the usual time, but I think you're quite capable of this yourself. =[[User:GuardDog|GuardDog]] 09:56, April 30, 2011 (UTC)
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| ==<strike>First Civilization Assignment</strike>==
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| {{main|Juno}}
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| Assassifying and cleaning up of a character page. First paragraph requires assassifying, and division into several sections under a Biography header. Dialogue section needs reformatting.
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| ===References===
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| *For a proper Biography section - [[Egidio Troche]]
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| *For a proper Dialogue section - [[Minerva]]
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| ===Comments===
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| *As usual Apprentice, you're free to start this when you like. I'll be online tomorrow night. =[[User:GuardDog|GuardDog]] 14:18, May 3, 2011 (UTC)
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| *On hold for the moment. Apprentice, you may do this if you wish, but please prioritize the Achievement Assignment. =[[User:GuardDog|GuardDog]] 12:10, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
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| ==<strike>Achievement Assignment</strike>==
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| : ''Main articles: '' [[Assassin's Creed Achievement Guide]] - [[Assassin's Creed II Achievement Guide]] - [[Assassin's Creed: Brotherhood Achievement Guide]]
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| Pair assignment with Apprentice [[User:Il Lupo|Il Lupo]]. Creation of informative guide pages for the achievements of the main games of the ''Assassin's Creed'' series.
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| ===References===
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| *[[Achievements|Achievements List]]
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| *Play nice, Apprentice :p =[[User:GuardDog|GuardDog]] 12:10, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
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| ! Rank 2 Assignments
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| ==<strike>Source Assignment</strike>==
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| {{main|Manfredo Soderini}}
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| Expansion and sourcing of a character page. Aim is to create a proper Biography section, and add enough information to the page (both from ''Brotherhood'' the game and the novel) to promote it out of stub status.
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| *For sourcing - [[Silvestro Sabbatini]]
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| *Apprentice, you may refer to the above page to see how to source, but I'd recommend you wait for my lesson on the topic instead. I should be able to meet you for it later this week. For now, please create the Bio section, and expand the page with any info you can give from the novel. =[[User:GuardDog|GuardDog]] 13:23, May 16, 2011 (UTC) | | *Cleared Coop since previous apprenticeship under [[User:GuardDog|GuardDog]] |
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| ==<strike>Artist Assignment</strike>==
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| {{main|Leonardo da Vinci}}
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| Again, a sourcing assignment. No need to edit content, just make sure each paragraph (minus Legacy section, since that's real life) has the appropriate sources.
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| ===Comments===
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| *Will be on the IRC for any needed coaching :p =[[User:GuardDog|GuardDog]] 01:41, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
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| ==<strike>Faction Assignment</strike>==
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| {{main|Mercenaries}}
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| Assassifying and sourcing needed.
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| ===Comments===
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| *Online again if needed. =[[User:GuardDog|GuardDog]] 03:09, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
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| ==<strike>Assassin Assignment</strike>==
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| {{main|Rebecca Crane}}
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| Assassifying, sourcing and division of paragraphs needed.
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| ===Comments===
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| *Online as needed. =[[User:GuardDog|GuardDog]] 03:53, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
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| ==<strike>Historian Assignment</strike>==
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| {{main|Shaun Hastings}}
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| Partner assignment to the previous. Again, assassifying, sourcing and division of paragraphs needed.
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| ===Comments===
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| *Online as needed. =[[User:GuardDog|GuardDog]] 04:59, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
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| ==<strike>Format Assignment</strike>==
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| {{main|Carlo Grimaldi}}
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| Needs paragraph division, sectioning and re-arrangement of images.
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| ===Comments===
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| *Online as needed. =[[User:GuardDog|GuardDog]] 05:34, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
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| ==<strike>Wolf Assignment</strike>==
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| {{main|Followers of Romulus}}
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| Requires a minor revamp - rewording into past tense, and completion of sourcing.
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| ===Comments===
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| *Will be online a little later, apprentice. Was under the impression you'd be busy today, so I have something else I need to finish as well. =[[User:GuardDog|GuardDog]] 06:54, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
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| *Finished. =[[User:Assassinist|<font color="red"><font face="chiller"><font size="4">The Reaper</font></font></font>]] 07:22, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
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| ==<strike>Bonfire Assignment</strike>==
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| {{main|Bonfire of the Vanities}}
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| Requires major revamp to format and wording.
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| ===Comments===
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| *Take your time on this one, apprentice. Try not to ask too many questions (if any at all), and I'll see how you do. =[[User:GuardDog|GuardDog]] 08:16, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
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| ==<strike>Forlì Assignment</strike>==
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| {{main|Battle of Forlì}}
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| Requires revamp to paragraphing, wording and images. Must possess at least 1 image per section.
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| *[[A Warm Welcome]] + the five subsequent memories - for images
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| ==<strike>Spain Assignment</strike>==
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| {{main|Discovery in Spain}}
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| Requires revamp to format and paragraphing. There are several missing links as well.
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| ===Corrections===
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| #<strike>Three present tense sentences (in 3, 5 & 6) in ''Finding the Spanish Guild'' </strike>
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| #<strike>Three present tense sentences (in 1, 3 & 8) in ''Assassination of Gaspar'' </strike>
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| #<strike>Missing link for [[Tomas Torquemada]] </strike>
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| #<strike>Paragraphing in ''Assassination of Pedro'' </strike>
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| *Also apprentice, please send me any updates on your assignment (if you've finished, if you have questions) here. I'll be checking this page, and will post the next assignment when this one closes. Thanks. =[[User:GuardDog|GuardDog]] 03:13, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
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| * Assignment Complete, I have corrected everything you have stated [[User:Assassinist|<font color="red"><font face="Chiller"><font size="4">The Reaper</font></font></font>]] 03:22, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
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| *Very good. Assignment closed. =[[User:GuardDog|GuardDog]] 01:26, July 4, 2011 (UTC)
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| ==<strike>Investigation Assignment</strike>==
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| {{main|Investigation}}
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| Requires major revamp; assassifying and rewording. At least 1 or 2 images also required.
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| ==<strike>Rome Assignment</strike>==
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| {{main|Rome}}
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| <strike>Pair assignment with Apprentice [[User:._.-._..-_-.._.._-_---|Erudito]]. Converted to single assignment.</strike>
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| ==<strike>Order Assignment</strike>==
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| {{main|New World Order}}
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| Requires subsectioning and images. Seeing as you've already reworked [[Abstergo Industries]], I suggest you take some images and info from that page.
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| *<strike>Past tense needed for introduction, and choice other sections </strike>
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| *<strike>First header must be changed </strike>
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| *<strike>Desmond image not really necessary </strike>
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| *<strike>Chosen dialogue is quite appropriate, but first line can start at ''"The world's a mess!"'' </strike>
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| *<strike>Final sentence slightly out of place, and can be incorporated into 2nd paragraph of Modern Times </strike>
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| *Update me here please, apprentice. =[[User:GuardDog|GuardDog]] 13:53, July 16, 2011 (UTC)
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| *Done [[User:Assassinist|<font color="red"><font face="Chiller"><font size="4">The Reaper</font></font></font>]] 14:54, July 16, 2011 (UTC)
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| *Very good. One last thing - didn't mention it since it's rather trivial - have you been editing in Source mode? The spacing's a bit off. I'll edit that part this time, but please be more vigilant with it in the future. =[[User:GuardDog|GuardDog]] 13:56, July 17, 2011 (UTC)
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| {{main|Save Citizen}}
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| Requires revamp. I'm confident you can do this one without guidance.
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| *Again, progress here please, apprentice. Unfortunately wasn't able to meet you over the weekend, so let's just see about the 6pm weekday meet. =[[User:GuardDog|GuardDog]] 14:09, July 17, 2011 (UTC)
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| {{main|Acre}}
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| Requires revamp; an incorporating of images, and a reformat of the entire page.
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| *<strike>Assassify opening section</strike>
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| *<strike>Incorporate at least 2 or 3 images from the gallery into the article</strike>
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| *<strike>Target images are fine, though perhaps just use one of the three, and place it in the Target section</strike>
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| *Must also be completed in conjunction with the Rome assignment, and will be evaluated jointly. =[[User:GuardDog|GuardDog]] 09:43, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
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| *Done with the page, though I am a bit unsure about it, Fixed the whole image of acre and used the Wide image template for it and I sectioned it too. Please tell me what you think about it [[User:Assassinist|<font color="gray"><font face="Chiller"><font size="4"><i>Wolf's Bane</i></font></font></font>]] [[User:GuardDog|<font size="2"><font color="red"><font size="4"><i><sup>Pack Leader</sup></i></font></font></font>]] 13:02, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
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| *Looks good apprentice; the history section is much neater now. Most corrections are image related, please refer above. =[[User:GuardDog|GuardDog]] 02:14, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
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| *Done[[User:Assassinist|<font color="gray"><font face="Chiller"><font size="4"><i>Wolf's Bane</i></font></font></font>]] [[User:GuardDog|<font size="2"><font color="red"><font size="4"><i><sup>Pack Leader</sup></i></font></font></font>]] 10:50, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
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| ==Rise Assignment==
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| {{main|Rise and fall of Altaïr}}
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| Requires revamp to wording, images and expansion. Pair assignment with Apprentice [[User:TheSt0ryTeller|TheSt0ryTeller]].
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| ===Comments===
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| *<strike>I suggest you prioritize your Rome assignment, apprentice. This one can carry over to the next rank if need be. =[[User:GuardDog|GuardDog]] 09:20, August 22, 2011 (UTC)</strike>
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| *As said, carried over to next rank. =[[User:GuardDog|GuardDog]] 02:33, September 4, 2011 (UTC)
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