Assassin's Creed Wiki:Apprentices/Assassinist/PigeonCoop

The following page is an apprentice assignment page, which acts as a connection between the apprentice, Assassinist, and their Master, GuardDog. It exists as an external talk page, aimed at dealing with all aspects of the apprenticeship. Only the above mentioned users and the staff have permission to converse here. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the wiki.

Past Ranks

Rank 1 Assignments

Assassify Assignment Main article: Circo Massimo Conversion of the page into a good quality location page, as well an "assassified" one (without references to the games). References For assassified page - Sixth Apple For location page - La Volpe Addormentata Comments Reaper, you may start on your own, but when I meet you on the IRC, I'll give you a tutorial on how to complete this assignment. Pose any questions to me here, or on the IRC. =GuardDog 11:30, April 27, 2011 (UTC) Location Assignment Main article: Colosseo Similarly to the previous assignment (though a bit longer), this article also needs assassifying, with the Core Memory/Side Memory section translated into a History section. Note that some wording also needs to be edited, and some redundant links removed. References For info on dates and other details - Colosseum Passion Play For location page with a History section - Monteriggioni Comments This is quite a long one, so take your time with it. Please remember to remove the assassify template when you've been able to clear up all the game references. =GuardDog 11:49, April 28, 2011 (UTC) Unfortunately I'm a bit busy so I can't go online today, but of course, feel free to start already if you like. I'll be online tomorrow if you need anything. =GuardDog 11:49, April 28, 2011 (UTC) City Assignment Main article: Florence Final location assignment. Many sections (particularly the Landmarks and Assassin's Creed: Brotherhood) need to be assassified. History section must be divided into subsections, and the Oltrarno district moved to the Landmarks section. Reminders Any sentences that are necessary but are written in in-game references (such as those in the ACB section) can instead be moved to the Trivia section. Please remember not to change anything but links under the Database entry section. Comments Apprentice (which I will refer to you as until I can settle on a nick), I will be online at the usual time, but I think you're quite capable of this yourself. =GuardDog 09:56, April 30, 2011 (UTC) First Civilization Assignment Main article: Juno Assassifying and cleaning up of a character page. First paragraph requires assassifying, and division into several sections under a Biography header. Dialogue section needs reformatting. References For a proper Biography section - Egidio Troche For a proper Dialogue section - Minerva Comments As usual Apprentice, you're free to start this when you like. I'll be online tomorrow night. =GuardDog 14:18, May 3, 2011 (UTC) On hold for the moment. Apprentice, you may do this if you wish, but please prioritize the Achievement Assignment. =GuardDog 12:10, May 4, 2011 (UTC) Achievement Assignment Main articles: Assassin's Creed Achievement Guide - Assassin's Creed II Achievement Guide - Assassin's Creed: Brotherhood Achievement Guide Pair assignment with Apprentice Il Lupo. Creation of informative guide pages for the achievements of the main games of the Assassin's Creed series. References Achievements List Comments Play nice, Apprentice :p =GuardDog 12:10, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Rank 2 Assignments

Source Assignment Main article: Manfredo Soderini Expansion and sourcing of a character page. Aim is to create a proper Biography section, and add enough information to the page (both from Brotherhood the game and the novel) to promote it out of stub status. References For sourcing - Silvestro Sabbatini Comments Apprentice, you may refer to the above page to see how to source, but I'd recommend you wait for my lesson on the topic instead. I should be able to meet you for it later this week. For now, please create the Bio section, and expand the page with any info you can give from the novel. =GuardDog 13:23, May 16, 2011 (UTC) Artist Assignment Main article: Leonardo da Vinci Again, a sourcing assignment. No need to edit content, just make sure each paragraph (minus Legacy section, since that's real life) has the appropriate sources. Comments Will be on the IRC for any needed coaching :p =GuardDog 01:41, June 6, 2011 (UTC) Faction Assignment Main article: Mercenaries Assassifying and sourcing needed. Comments Online again if needed. =GuardDog 03:09, June 6, 2011 (UTC) Assassin Assignment Main article: Rebecca Crane Assassifying, sourcing and division of paragraphs needed. Comments Online as needed. =GuardDog 03:53, June 6, 2011 (UTC) Historian Assignment Main article: Shaun Hastings Partner assignment to the previous. Again, assassifying, sourcing and division of paragraphs needed. Comments Online as needed. =GuardDog 04:59, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Rank 3 Assignments

Format Assignment Main article: Carlo Grimaldi Needs paragraph division, sectioning and re-arrangement of images. Comments Online as needed. =GuardDog 05:34, June 6, 2011 (UTC) Wolf Assignment Main article: Followers of Romulus Requires a minor revamp - rewording into past tense, and completion of sourcing. Comments Will be online a little later, apprentice. Was under the impression you'd be busy today, so I have something else I need to finish as well. =GuardDog 06:54, June 7, 2011 (UTC) Finished. =The Reaper 07:22, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Rank 4 Assignments

Bonfire Assignment Main article: Bonfire of the Vanities Requires major revamp to format and wording. Comments Take your time on this one, apprentice. Try not to ask too many questions (if any at all), and I'll see how you do. =GuardDog 08:16, June 7, 2011 (UTC) Forlì Assignment Main article: Battle of Forlì Requires revamp to paragraphing, wording and images. Must possess at least 1 image per section. References A Warm Welcome + the five subsequent memories - for images Spain Assignment Main article: Discovery in Spain Requires revamp to format and paragraphing. There are several missing links as well. Corrections Three present tense sentences (in 3, 5 & 6) in Finding the Spanish Guild Three present tense sentences (in 1, 3 & 8) in Assassination of Gaspar Missing link for Tomas Torquemada Paragraphing in Assassination of Pedro Comments Also apprentice, please send me any updates on your assignment (if you've finished, if you have questions) here. I'll be checking this page, and will post the next assignment when this one closes. Thanks. =GuardDog 03:13, July 3, 2011 (UTC) Assignment Complete, I have corrected everything you have stated The Reaper 03:22, July 3, 2011 (UTC) Very good. Assignment closed. =GuardDog 01:26, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Current Rank

Investigation Assignment

Main article: Investigation

Requires major revamp; assassifying and rewording. At least 1 or 2 images also required.

Rome Assignment

Main article: Rome

Pair assignment with Apprentice Erudito.

Order Assignment

Main article: New World Order

Requires subsectioning and images. Seeing as you've already reworked Abstergo Industries, I suggest you take some images and info from that page.

Evaluation

• Past tense needed for introduction, and choice other sections
• First header must be changed
• Desmond image not really necessary
• Chosen dialogue is quite appropriate, but first line can start at "The world's a mess!"
• Final sentence slightly out of place, and can be incorporated into 2nd paragraph of Modern Times

Comments

• Update me here please, apprentice. =GuardDog 13:53, July 16, 2011 (UTC)
• Done The Reaper 14:54, July 16, 2011 (UTC)
• Very good. One last thing - didn't mention it since it's rather trivial - have you been editing in Source mode? The spacing's a bit off. I'll edit that part this time, but please be more vigilant with it in the future. =GuardDog 13:56, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Citizen Assignment

Main article: Save Citizen

Requires revamp. I'm confident you can do this one without guidance.

Comments

• Again, progress here please, apprentice. Unfortunately wasn't able to meet you over the weekend, so let's just see about the 6pm weekday meet. =GuardDog 14:09, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Port Assignment

Main article: Acre

Requires revamp; an incorporating of images, and a reformat of the entire page.

Evaluation

• Assassify opening section
• Incorporate at least 2 or 3 images from the gallery into the article
• Target images are fine, though perhaps just use one of the three, and place it in the Target section
• Remove real-world map from gallery

Comments

• Must also be completed in conjunction with the Rome assignment, and will be evaluated jointly. =GuardDog 09:43, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
• Done with the page, though I am a bit unsure about it, Fixed the whole image of acre and used the Wide image template for it and I sectioned it too. Please tell me what you think about it Wolf's Bane ^{Pack Leader} 13:02, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
• Looks good apprentice; the history section is much neater now. Most corrections are image related, please refer above. =GuardDog 02:14, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
• DoneWolf's Bane ^{Pack Leader} 10:50, August 5, 2011 (UTC)