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Wrong pronouns used for the above. How it's written now is that he instructed her to have himself take an artifact with him to hide because he was too busy? I've reworded it to correctly say that he instructed her to take the artifact and hide it as he's too busy with the war.[[User:LancelotLoire|LancelotLoire]] ([[User talk:LancelotLoire|talk]]) 15:02, October 25, 2012 (UTC) | Wrong pronouns used for the above. How it's written now is that he instructed her to have himself take an artifact with him to hide because he was too busy? I've reworded it to correctly say that he instructed her to take the artifact and hide it as he's too busy with the war.[[User:LancelotLoire|LancelotLoire]] ([[User talk:LancelotLoire|talk]]) 15:02, October 25, 2012 (UTC) | ||
:Good, sounds better now. You don't have to mention edits you made on talk pages though. -- {{User:Master Sima Yi/sig}} 15:04, October 25, 2012 (UTC) | |||
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Incorrect Pronouns
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"However, she explained that she did not remember how to use the Ankh, and Accipiter requested her to take the artifact with him and hide the artifact somewhere, as he was too busy with coordinating the Alamanni's war against the Roman army"
Wrong pronouns used for the above. How it's written now is that he instructed her to have himself take an artifact with him to hide because he was too busy? I've reworded it to correctly say that he instructed her to take the artifact and hide it as he's too busy with the war.LancelotLoire (talk) 15:02, October 25, 2012 (UTC)
- Good, sounds better now. You don't have to mention edits you made on talk pages though. -- Master Sima Yi Talk 15:04, October 25, 2012 (UTC)