Requires subsectioning and images. Seeing as you've already reworked [[Abstergo Industries]], I suggest you take some images and info from that page.
Requires subsectioning and images. Seeing as you've already reworked [[Abstergo Industries]], I suggest you take some images and info from that page.
===Evaluation===
*Past tense needed for introduction, and choice other sections
*First header must be changed
*Desmond image not really necessary
*Chosen dialogue is quite appropriate, but first line can start at ''"The world's a mess!"''
*Final sentence slightly out of place, and can be incorporated into 2nd paragraph of Modern Times
===Comments===
*Update me here please, apprentice. =[[User:GuardDog|GuardDog]] 13:53, July 16, 2011 (UTC)
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The following page is an apprentice assignment page, which acts as a connection between the apprentice, Assassinist, and their Master, GuardDog. It exists as an external talk page, aimed at dealing with all aspects of the apprenticeship. Only the above mentioned users and the staff have permission to converse here. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the wiki.
Reaper, you may start on your own, but when I meet you on the IRC, I'll give you a tutorial on how to complete this assignment. Pose any questions to me here, or on the IRC. =GuardDog 11:30, April 27, 2011 (UTC)
Similarly to the previous assignment (though a bit longer), this article also needs assassifying, with the Core Memory/Side Memory section translated into a History section. Note that some wording also needs to be edited, and some redundant links removed.
For location page with a History section - Monteriggioni
Comments
This is quite a long one, so take your time with it. Please remember to remove the assassify template when you've been able to clear up all the game references. =GuardDog 11:49, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
Unfortunately I'm a bit busy so I can't go online today, but of course, feel free to start already if you like. I'll be online tomorrow if you need anything. =GuardDog 11:49, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
Final location assignment. Many sections (particularly the Landmarks and Assassin's Creed: Brotherhood) need to be assassified. History section must be divided into subsections, and the Oltrarno district moved to the Landmarks section.
Reminders
Any sentences that are necessary but are written in in-game references (such as those in the ACB section) can instead be moved to the Trivia section.
Please remember not to change anything but links under the Database entry section.
Comments
Apprentice (which I will refer to you as until I can settle on a nick), I will be online at the usual time, but I think you're quite capable of this yourself. =GuardDog 09:56, April 30, 2011 (UTC)
Assassifying and cleaning up of a character page. First paragraph requires assassifying, and division into several sections under a Biography header. Dialogue section needs reformatting.
Expansion and sourcing of a character page. Aim is to create a proper Biography section, and add enough information to the page (both from Brotherhood the game and the novel) to promote it out of stub status.
Apprentice, you may refer to the above page to see how to source, but I'd recommend you wait for my lesson on the topic instead. I should be able to meet you for it later this week. For now, please create the Bio section, and expand the page with any info you can give from the novel. =GuardDog 13:23, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
Again, a sourcing assignment. No need to edit content, just make sure each paragraph (minus Legacy section, since that's real life) has the appropriate sources.
Comments
Will be on the IRC for any needed coaching :p =GuardDog 01:41, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
Requires a minor revamp - rewording into past tense, and completion of sourcing.
Comments
Will be online a little later, apprentice. Was under the impression you'd be busy today, so I have something else I need to finish as well. =GuardDog 06:54, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
Take your time on this one, apprentice. Try not to ask too many questions (if any at all), and I'll see how you do. =GuardDog 08:16, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
Also apprentice, please send me any updates on your assignment (if you've finished, if you have questions) here. I'll be checking this page, and will post the next assignment when this one closes. Thanks. =GuardDog 03:13, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
Assignment Complete, I have corrected everything you have stated The Reaper 03:22, July 3, 2011 (UTC)
Very good. Assignment closed. =GuardDog 01:26, July 4, 2011 (UTC)
