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<p style="text-align: center;">'''The following text is a continuous log of [[User:The Forgotten Fragment|The Forgotten Fragment]]'s apprenticeship. It exists for [[Assassin's_Creed_Wiki:Staff|staff]] eyes only. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the wiki.'''<br /></p>
<p style="text-align: center;">'''The following text is a continuous log of [[User:The Forgotten Fragment|The Forgotten Fragment]]'s apprenticeship. It exists for [[Assassin's Creed Wiki:Staff|staff]] eyes only. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the wiki.'''<br /></p>


==Current assignment(s)==
== Current assignment(s) ==
*[[Edward Braddock]] rewording and removal of extreme detail
* [[Edward Braddock]] rewording and removal of extreme detail
*[[Boston Tea Party]] expansion
* [[Boston Tea Party]] expansion


==Previous assignment(s)==
== Previous assignment(s) ==
*[[Paul Revere]] revamp. Assignment completed on March 30, 2013
* [[Paul Revere]] revamp. Assignment completed on March 30, 2013


==Mentor's notes==
== Mentor's notes ==
*After reading over his work on Paul Revere, he's displayed good work with expansion. He added 3 new sections, expanded previous sections, and expanded the intro and galleries as well. The mistakes he made were mostly with changing the narrative (sometimes used "Paul" other times used "Revere) and linking, but I've given him direction regarding those issues so hopefully he can correct them. He still needs work on his grammar and prose, but his writing is typically concise and informative. Solid work thus far from him, deserving of a promotion. --[[User:Nostalgia AC|<span style="font-family:futura;font-size:19px;color:#566D7E;">'''NOSTALGIA'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:Nostalgia AC|<sup><span style="font-family:futura;color:#FFFFFF;">TALK</span></sup>]] 16:53, March 30, 2013 (UTC)
* After reading over his work on Paul Revere, he's displayed good work with expansion. He added 3 new sections, expanded previous sections, and expanded the intro and galleries as well. The mistakes he made were mostly with changing the narrative (sometimes used "Paul" other times used "Revere) and linking, but I've given him direction regarding those issues so hopefully he can correct them. He still needs work on his grammar and prose, but his writing is typically concise and informative. Solid work thus far from him, deserving of a promotion. --[[User:Nostalgia AC|<span style="font-family:futura;font-size:19px;color:#566D7E;">'''NOSTALGIA'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:Nostalgia AC|<sup><span style="font-family:futura;color:#FFFFFF;">TALK</span></sup>]] 16:53, March 30, 2013 (UTC)


==Staff comments==
== Staff comments ==
*I've already told him this on the IRC, but his main priority should be proofreading, seeing as he still leaves a rather large amount of typos. [[User:Amnestyyy|<span style="font-family:Blackadder ITC;font-size:19px;color:#FF033E;">'''Nesty'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:Amnestyyy|<sup><span style="font-family:FlamencoD;color:#9966CC;">Contact me!</span></sup>]] 16:54, March 30, 2013 (UTC)
* I've already told him this on the IRC, but his main priority should be proofreading, seeing as he still leaves a rather large amount of typos. [[User:Amnestyyy|<span style="font-family:Blackadder ITC;font-size:19px;color:#FF033E;">'''Nesty'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:Amnestyyy|<sup><span style="font-family:FlamencoD;color:#9966CC;">Contact me!</span></sup>]] 16:54, March 30, 2013 (UTC)


==Ranking==
== Ranking ==
*Accepted into Apprentice initiative on March 22, 2013
* Accepted into Apprentice initiative on March 22, 2013
#Established '''Rank 1 (Recluta)''' on March 22, 2013
# Established '''Rank 1 (Recluta)''' on March 22, 2013
#Promoted '''Rank 2 (Assistente)''' on March 30, 2013
# Promoted '''Rank 2 (Assistente)''' on March 30, 2013
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Latest revision as of 07:52, 21 April 2013

The following text is a continuous log of The Forgotten Fragment's apprenticeship. It exists for staff eyes only. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the wiki.

Current assignment(s)[edit source]

Previous assignment(s)[edit source]

  • Paul Revere revamp. Assignment completed on March 30, 2013

Mentor's notes[edit source]

  • After reading over his work on Paul Revere, he's displayed good work with expansion. He added 3 new sections, expanded previous sections, and expanded the intro and galleries as well. The mistakes he made were mostly with changing the narrative (sometimes used "Paul" other times used "Revere) and linking, but I've given him direction regarding those issues so hopefully he can correct them. He still needs work on his grammar and prose, but his writing is typically concise and informative. Solid work thus far from him, deserving of a promotion. --NOSTALGIA TALK 16:53, March 30, 2013 (UTC)

Staff comments[edit source]

  • I've already told him this on the IRC, but his main priority should be proofreading, seeing as he still leaves a rather large amount of typos. Nesty Contact me! 16:54, March 30, 2013 (UTC)

Ranking[edit source]

  • Accepted into Apprentice initiative on March 22, 2013
  1. Established Rank 1 (Recluta) on March 22, 2013
  2. Promoted Rank 2 (Assistente) on March 30, 2013