User talk:Carazon1944 - Revision history

imported>Darman36: /* Uploaded images */

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	Hey, sorry it took 11 months to get this far, And I will look at memory pages for images from now on. – [[User:Carazon1944\|Carazon1944]]		Hey, sorry it took 11 months to get this far, And I will look at memory pages for images from now on. – [[User:Carazon1944\|Carazon1944]]
	:No worries! It's a big site, so I don't blame you for missing where images are, I've done it a few times myself. Great job so far on the page. – [[User:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Old English Text MT;font-size:15px;color:#">Darman</span>]] ([[User talk:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Viner Hand ITC;color:#">talk</span>]]) 15:29, 10 October 2023 (UTC)		:No worries! It's a big site, so I don't blame you for missing where images are, I've done it a few times myself. Great job so far on the page, a year's dedication is no minor thing. – [[User:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Old English Text MT;font-size:15px;color:#">Darman</span>]] ([[User talk:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Viner Hand ITC;color:#">talk</span>]]) 15:30, 10 October 2023 (UTC)

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imported>Darman36: /* Uploaded images */

2023-10-10T15:29:20Z

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	Hello again, Carazon!<br>Been watching you gradually add more information to your project page "Hunt for the Snake"; great job! Just want to quickly remind you per my earlier note below to try to keep to the past tense when writing. As well, when adding pictures showing certain events from memories, I'd recommend that you first look on the memory page and its gallery subpage if applicable before uploading images, since some of your files are unintentionally duplicated by what is already here. Keep up the work! – [[User:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Old English Text MT;font-size:15px;color:#">Darman</span>]] ([[User talk:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Viner Hand ITC;color:#">talk</span>]]) 12:20, 10 October 2023 (UTC)		Hello again, Carazon!<br>Been watching you gradually add more information to your project page "Hunt for the Snake"; great job! Just want to quickly remind you per my earlier note below to try to keep to the past tense when writing. As well, when adding pictures showing certain events from memories, I'd recommend that you first look on the memory page and its gallery subpage if applicable before uploading images, since some of your files are unintentionally duplicated by what is already here. Keep up the work! – [[User:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Old English Text MT;font-size:15px;color:#">Darman</span>]] ([[User talk:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Viner Hand ITC;color:#">talk</span>]]) 12:20, 10 October 2023 (UTC)

	Hey, sorry it took 11 months to get this far, And i will look at memory pages for images from now on. – [[User:Carazon1944\|Carazon1944]]		Hey, sorry it took 11 months to get this far, And I will look at memory pages for images from now on. – [[User:Carazon1944\|Carazon1944]]
			:No worries! It's a big site, so I don't blame you for missing where images are, I've done it a few times myself. Great job so far on the page. – [[User:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Old English Text MT;font-size:15px;color:#">Darman</span>]] ([[User talk:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Viner Hand ITC;color:#">talk</span>]]) 15:29, 10 October 2023 (UTC)

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imported>Carazon1944: /* Uploaded images */

2023-10-10T15:17:26Z

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	:Haha sorry, “lorem ipsum” is used as placeholder text. It’s just there to judge a general size of the page and where to place the images. [[User:Lacrossedeamon\|Lacrossedeamon]] ([[User talk:Lacrossedeamon\|talk]]) 10:03, 13 December 2022 (UTC)		:Haha sorry, “lorem ipsum” is used as placeholder text. It’s just there to judge a general size of the page and where to place the images. [[User:Lacrossedeamon\|Lacrossedeamon]] ([[User talk:Lacrossedeamon\|talk]]) 10:03, 13 December 2022 (UTC)
	Hello again, Carazon!<br>Been watching you gradually add more information to your project page "Hunt for the Snake"; great job! Just want to quickly remind you per my earlier note below to try to keep to the past tense when writing. As well, when adding pictures showing certain events from memories, I'd recommend that you first look on the memory page and its gallery subpage if applicable before uploading images, since some of your files are unintentionally duplicated by what is already here. Keep up the work! – [[User:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Old English Text MT;font-size:15px;color:#">Darman</span>]] ([[User talk:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Viner Hand ITC;color:#">talk</span>]]) 12:20, 10 October 2023 (UTC)		Hello again, Carazon!<br>Been watching you gradually add more information to your project page "Hunt for the Snake"; great job! Just want to quickly remind you per my earlier note below to try to keep to the past tense when writing. As well, when adding pictures showing certain events from memories, I'd recommend that you first look on the memory page and its gallery subpage if applicable before uploading images, since some of your files are unintentionally duplicated by what is already here. Keep up the work! – [[User:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Old English Text MT;font-size:15px;color:#">Darman</span>]] ([[User talk:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Viner Hand ITC;color:#">talk</span>]]) 12:20, 10 October 2023 (UTC)

			Hey, sorry it took 11 months to get this far, And i will look at memory pages for images from now on. – [[User:Carazon1944\|Carazon1944]]

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imported>Darman36: /Uploaded images/ Just a quick note

2023-10-10T12:20:14Z

Uploaded images: Just a quick note

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	Ah, Very interesting It will be one hell of the page once its completed, I will be back every now and then expanding its though some of its has a very strange text written in Latin talking about Patient and Suffering. {{Unsigned\|Carazon1944}} 09:52, 13 December 2022 (UTC)		Ah, Very interesting It will be one hell of the page once its completed, I will be back every now and then expanding its though some of its has a very strange text written in Latin talking about Patient and Suffering. {{Unsigned\|Carazon1944}} 09:52, 13 December 2022 (UTC)
	:Haha sorry, “lorem ipsum” is used as placeholder text. It’s just there to judge a general size of the page and where to place the images. [[User:Lacrossedeamon\|Lacrossedeamon]] ([[User talk:Lacrossedeamon\|talk]]) 10:03, 13 December 2022 (UTC)		:Haha sorry, “lorem ipsum” is used as placeholder text. It’s just there to judge a general size of the page and where to place the images. [[User:Lacrossedeamon\|Lacrossedeamon]] ([[User talk:Lacrossedeamon\|talk]]) 10:03, 13 December 2022 (UTC)
			Hello again, Carazon!<br>Been watching you gradually add more information to your project page "Hunt for the Snake"; great job! Just want to quickly remind you per my earlier note below to try to keep to the past tense when writing. As well, when adding pictures showing certain events from memories, I'd recommend that you first look on the memory page and its gallery subpage if applicable before uploading images, since some of your files are unintentionally duplicated by what is already here. Keep up the work! – [[User:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Old English Text MT;font-size:15px;color:#">Darman</span>]] ([[User talk:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Viner Hand ITC;color:#">talk</span>]]) 12:20, 10 October 2023 (UTC)

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imported>Darman36: /* Writing */

2022-12-18T00:50:18Z

Writing

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	While the wiki appreciates your efforts thus far on the page about Bayek and Aya's hunt for the Egyptian Order of the Ancients, I ''strongly'' recommend that you please read the Manual of Style linked in the above Welcome template's "Policies" section before you continue with additions to the page. From our talks so far and what I've seen of your work, I'm not sure if English and its rules are your first language, or if it is, how familiar you are with the site's standards of writing.<br><br>You keep using the present tense without appropriate grammar and tend to describe almost everything characters do in a scene when a brief summary is sufficient. Other formatting issues, like images, captions, and sources are still a must here but are a bit less critical at the moment and can be fixed later since my focus is on text. I know the page is still ''very much'' a work in progress, as it was only just created, but all the standards in the Manual will make it easier for readers to understand what is written as well as minimize the amount of future cleaning other editors have to do. Thank you. – [[User:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Old English Text MT;font-size:15px;color:#">Darman</span>]] ([[User talk:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Viner Hand ITC;color:#">talk</span>]]) 20:45, 14 December 2022 (UTC)		While the wiki appreciates your efforts thus far on the page about Bayek and Aya's hunt for the Egyptian Order of the Ancients, I ''strongly'' recommend that you please read the Manual of Style linked in the above Welcome template's "Policies" section before you continue with additions to the page. From our talks so far and what I've seen of your work, I'm not sure if English and its rules are your first language, or if it is, how familiar you are with the site's standards of writing.<br><br>You keep using the present tense without appropriate grammar and tend to describe almost everything characters do in a scene when a brief summary is sufficient. Other formatting issues, like images, captions, and sources are still a must here but are a bit less critical at the moment and can be fixed later since my focus is on text. I know the page is still ''very much'' a work in progress, as it was only just created, but all the standards in the Manual will make it easier for readers to understand what is written as well as minimize the amount of future cleaning other editors have to do. Thank you. – [[User:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Old English Text MT;font-size:15px;color:#">Darman</span>]] ([[User talk:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Viner Hand ITC;color:#">talk</span>]]) 20:45, 14 December 2022 (UTC)
	:I acknowledge that my writing skill could not live up to standard of this wiki and it make me regret that I should have focus more when I was in English class back in my school's days. But I will try to improve it by reading a manual and learns from another more experienced editors which I guarantee you, it will take some times. {{Unsigned\|Carazon1944}} 13:06, 16 December 2022 (UTC)		:I acknowledge that my writing skill could not live up to standard of this wiki and it make me regret that I should have focus more when I was in English class back in my school's days. But I will try to improve it by reading a manual and learns from another more experienced editors which I guarantee you, it will take some times. {{Unsigned\|Carazon1944}} 13:06, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
	::Thank you. I know there can be a learning curve for how wikis operate, as every one has its own format. Take your time, there's no rush to get it right immediately. Since wikis are also community efforts, editors can cover others' weak spots, play to our own strengths, and sometimes learn how to do other things and expand our skillset. For example, you can sign talk pages by typing "<nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>" :) – [[User:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Old English Text MT;font-size:15px;color:#">Darman</span>]] ([[User talk:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Viner Hand ITC;color:#">talk</span>]]) 15:20, 16 December 2022 (UTC)		::Thank you. I know there can be a learning curve for how wikis operate, as every one has its own format. Take your time, there's no rush to get it right immediately. Since wikis are also community efforts, editors can cover others' weak spots, play to our own strengths, and sometimes learn how to do other things and expand our skillset. For example, you can sign talk pages by typing "<nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>" :) – [[User:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Old English Text MT;font-size:15px;color:#">Darman</span>]] ([[User talk:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Viner Hand ITC;color:#">talk</span>]]) 15:20, 16 December 2022 (UTC)<br><br>Just quick tips for future reference, it's strongly suggested to have as concise an edit as possible in one session to avoid having to constantly change things upon proofreading. Some of your recent edits to the Hunt for the Snake were also minor tweaks (punctuation, a few words added/removed, etc) and they can be tagged as such by making sure you check the "This is a minor edit" box on the lower left side of the editor view panel. Great additions thus far, though! – [[User:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Old English Text MT;font-size:15px;color:#">Darman</span>]] ([[User talk:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Viner Hand ITC;color:#">talk</span>]]) 00:50, 18 December 2022 (UTC)

imported>Darman36: /* Writing */

2022-12-16T15:20:11Z

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	While the wiki appreciates your efforts thus far on the page about Bayek and Aya's hunt for the Egyptian Order of the Ancients, I ''strongly'' recommend that you please read the Manual of Style linked in the above Welcome template's "Policies" section before you continue with additions to the page. From our talks so far and what I've seen of your work, I'm not sure if English and its rules are your first language, or if it is, how familiar you are with the site's standards of writing.<br><br>You keep using the present tense without appropriate grammar and tend to describe almost everything characters do in a scene when a brief summary is sufficient. Other formatting issues, like images, captions, and sources are still a must here but are a bit less critical at the moment and can be fixed later since my focus is on text. I know the page is still ''very much'' a work in progress, as it was only just created, but all the standards in the Manual will make it easier for readers to understand what is written as well as minimize the amount of future cleaning other editors have to do. Thank you. – [[User:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Old English Text MT;font-size:15px;color:#">Darman</span>]] ([[User talk:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Viner Hand ITC;color:#">talk</span>]]) 20:45, 14 December 2022 (UTC)		While the wiki appreciates your efforts thus far on the page about Bayek and Aya's hunt for the Egyptian Order of the Ancients, I ''strongly'' recommend that you please read the Manual of Style linked in the above Welcome template's "Policies" section before you continue with additions to the page. From our talks so far and what I've seen of your work, I'm not sure if English and its rules are your first language, or if it is, how familiar you are with the site's standards of writing.<br><br>You keep using the present tense without appropriate grammar and tend to describe almost everything characters do in a scene when a brief summary is sufficient. Other formatting issues, like images, captions, and sources are still a must here but are a bit less critical at the moment and can be fixed later since my focus is on text. I know the page is still ''very much'' a work in progress, as it was only just created, but all the standards in the Manual will make it easier for readers to understand what is written as well as minimize the amount of future cleaning other editors have to do. Thank you. – [[User:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Old English Text MT;font-size:15px;color:#">Darman</span>]] ([[User talk:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Viner Hand ITC;color:#">talk</span>]]) 20:45, 14 December 2022 (UTC)
			:I acknowledge that my writing skill could not live up to standard of this wiki and it make me regret that I should have focus more when I was in English class back in my school's days. But I will try to improve it by reading a manual and learns from another more experienced editors which I guarantee you, it will take some times. {{Unsigned\|Carazon1944}} 13:06, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
			::Thank you. I know there can be a learning curve for how wikis operate, as every one has its own format. Take your time, there's no rush to get it right immediately. Since wikis are also community efforts, editors can cover others' weak spots, play to our own strengths, and sometimes learn how to do other things and expand our skillset. For example, you can sign talk pages by typing "<nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>" :) – [[User:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Old English Text MT;font-size:15px;color:#">Darman</span>]] ([[User talk:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Viner Hand ITC;color:#">talk</span>]]) 15:20, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
	I acknowledge that my writing skill could not live up to standard of this wiki and it make me regret that i should have focus more when i was in ~~english~~ class back in my school's days, But i will try to improve it by reading a manual and learns from another more experienced editors which i guarantee you, It will take some times.

imported>Carazon1944: /* Writing */

2022-12-16T13:17:00Z

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	I acknowledge that my writing skill could not live up to standard of this wiki and it make me regret that i should have focus more when i was in english class back in my school's days, But i will try to improve it by reading a manual and learns from another more experienced editors which i guarantee you, It will take some times. ~~[[User:Carazon1944\|talk]])~~		I acknowledge that my writing skill could not live up to standard of this wiki and it make me regret that i should have focus more when i was in english class back in my school's days, But i will try to improve it by reading a manual and learns from another more experienced editors which i guarantee you, It will take some times.

imported>Carazon1944: /* Writing */

2022-12-16T13:16:39Z

Writing

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	I acknowledge that my writing skill could not live up to standard of this wiki and it make me regret that i should have focus more when i was in english class back in my school's days, But i will try to improve it by reading a manual and learns from another more experienced editors which i guarantee you, It will take some times. [[User:Carazon1944]]		I acknowledge that my writing skill could not live up to standard of this wiki and it make me regret that i should have focus more when i was in english class back in my school's days, But i will try to improve it by reading a manual and learns from another more experienced editors which i guarantee you, It will take some times. [[User:Carazon1944\|talk]])

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2022-12-16T13:15:30Z

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	I acknowledge that my writing skill could not live up to standard of this wiki and it make me regret that i should have focus more when i was in english class back in my school's days, But i will try to improve it by reading a manual and learns from another more experienced editors which i guarantee you, It will take some times.		I acknowledge that my writing skill could not live up to standard of this wiki and it make me regret that i should have focus more when i was in english class back in my school's days, But i will try to improve it by reading a manual and learns from another more experienced editors which i guarantee you, It will take some times. [[User:Carazon1944]]

imported>Carazon1944: /* Writing */

2022-12-16T13:14:43Z

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	I acknowledge that my writing skill could not live up to standard of this ~~fandom~~ and it make me regret that i should have focus more when i was in english class back in my school's days, But i will try to improve it by reading a manual and learns from another more experienced editors which i guarantee you, It will take some times.		I acknowledge that my writing skill could not live up to standard of this wiki and it make me regret that i should have focus more when i was in english class back in my school's days, But i will try to improve it by reading a manual and learns from another more experienced editors which i guarantee you, It will take some times.

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	While the wiki appreciates your efforts thus far on the page about Bayek and Aya's hunt for the Egyptian Order of the Ancients, I ''strongly'' recommend that you please read the Manual of Style linked in the above Welcome template's "Policies" section before you continue with additions to the page. From our talks so far and what I've seen of your work, I'm not sure if English and its rules are your first language, or if it is, how familiar you are with the site's standards of writing.<br><br>You keep using the present tense without appropriate grammar and tend to describe almost everything characters do in a scene when a brief summary is sufficient. Other formatting issues, like images, captions, and sources are still a must here but are a bit less critical at the moment and can be fixed later since my focus is on text. I know the page is still ''very much'' a work in progress, as it was only just created, but all the standards in the Manual will make it easier for readers to understand what is written as well as minimize the amount of future cleaning other editors have to do. Thank you. – [[User:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Old English Text MT;font-size:15px;color:#">Darman</span>]] ([[User talk:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Viner Hand ITC;color:#">talk</span>]]) 20:45, 14 December 2022 (UTC)		While the wiki appreciates your efforts thus far on the page about Bayek and Aya's hunt for the Egyptian Order of the Ancients, I ''strongly'' recommend that you please read the Manual of Style linked in the above Welcome template's "Policies" section before you continue with additions to the page. From our talks so far and what I've seen of your work, I'm not sure if English and its rules are your first language, or if it is, how familiar you are with the site's standards of writing.<br><br>You keep using the present tense without appropriate grammar and tend to describe almost everything characters do in a scene when a brief summary is sufficient. Other formatting issues, like images, captions, and sources are still a must here but are a bit less critical at the moment and can be fixed later since my focus is on text. I know the page is still ''very much'' a work in progress, as it was only just created, but all the standards in the Manual will make it easier for readers to understand what is written as well as minimize the amount of future cleaning other editors have to do. Thank you. – [[User:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Old English Text MT;font-size:15px;color:#">Darman</span>]] ([[User talk:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Viner Hand ITC;color:#">talk</span>]]) 20:45, 14 December 2022 (UTC)
	:I acknowledge that my writing skill could not live up to standard of this wiki and it make me regret that I should have focus more when I was in English class back in my school's days. But I will try to improve it by reading a manual and learns from another more experienced editors which I guarantee you, it will take some times. {{Unsigned\|Carazon1944}} 13:06, 16 December 2022 (UTC)		:I acknowledge that my writing skill could not live up to standard of this wiki and it make me regret that I should have focus more when I was in English class back in my school's days. But I will try to improve it by reading a manual and learns from another more experienced editors which I guarantee you, it will take some times. {{Unsigned\|Carazon1944}} 13:06, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
	::Thank you. I know there can be a learning curve for how wikis operate, as every one has its own format. Take your time, there's no rush to get it right immediately. Since wikis are also community efforts, editors can cover others' weak spots, play to our own strengths, and sometimes learn how to do other things and expand our skillset. For example, you can sign talk pages by typing "<nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>" :) – [[User:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Old English Text MT;font-size:15px;color:#">Darman</span>]] ([[User talk:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Viner Hand ITC;color:#">talk</span>]]) 15:20, 16 December 2022 (UTC)		::Thank you. I know there can be a learning curve for how wikis operate, as every one has its own format. Take your time, there's no rush to get it right immediately. Since wikis are also community efforts, editors can cover others' weak spots, play to our own strengths, and sometimes learn how to do other things and expand our skillset. For example, you can sign talk pages by typing "<nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>" :) – [[User:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Old English Text MT;font-size:15px;color:#">Darman</span>]] ([[User talk:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Viner Hand ITC;color:#">talk</span>]]) 15:20, 16 December 2022 (UTC)<br><br>Just quick tips for future reference, it's strongly suggested to have as concise an edit as possible in one session to avoid having to constantly change things upon proofreading. Some of your recent edits to the Hunt for the Snake were also minor tweaks (punctuation, a few words added/removed, etc) and they can be tagged as such by making sure you check the "This is a minor edit" box on the lower left side of the editor view panel. Great additions thus far, though! – [[User:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Old English Text MT;font-size:15px;color:#">Darman</span>]] ([[User talk:Darman36\|<span style="font-family:Viner Hand ITC;color:#">talk</span>]]) 00:50, 18 December 2022 (UTC)

User talk:Carazon1944 - Revision history

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imported>Darman36: /Uploaded images/ Just a quick note