Talk:Parisian Rite of the Templar Order - Revision history

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imported>Francesco75: /* Germain's Exile */

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	==Germain's Exile==		==Germain's Exile==
	While we don't know when he was thrown out of the Parisian Rite it is suggested to be in 1779. The novel says that it was during that year that the most radical ideals was talked about and Julie De La Serre wasn't present at the time Germain was thrown out as we see in the final confession with Germain in The Temple. Where him being thrown out is presented for us to see. And rather than having an edit war I'd like to hear what anyone else think about it.--[[User:ACsenior\|ACsenior]] ([[User talk:ACsenior\|talk]]) 08:33, August 9, 2017 (UTC)		While we don't know when he was thrown out of the Parisian Rite it is suggested to be in 1779. The novel says that it was during that year that the most radical ideals was talked about and Julie De La Serre wasn't present at the time Germain was thrown out as we see in the final confession with Germain in The Temple. Where him being thrown out is presented for us to see. And rather than having an edit war I'd like to hear what anyone else think about it.--[[User:ACsenior\|ACsenior]] ([[User talk:ACsenior\|talk]]) 08:33, August 9, 2017 (UTC)

			But Julie De la Serre became the unofficially lieutenant of his husband after the exile of Germain, so it must be before 1778.

			What we know about his exile:

			*Elise was a young girl

			*Sivert, Lafrenière, Levesque and Peletier was in the Order. Peletier was born in 1760, so we can assume Germain exile was in mid-late 1770's

			*It's seems there already have radical members in 1774.

			[[User:Francesco75\|Francesco75]] ([[User talk:Francesco75\|talk]]) 10:37, August 9, 2017 (UTC)

imported>ACsenior at 08:33, 9 August 2017

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	:An hour or two ago, Crook told me that he was going to have a look at this article. I'm sure he'll fix it up just fine. If, afterwards, there are still concerns, we'll just have to have another look at it. --[[User:Amnestyyy\|Amnestyyy]] <small>[[User talk:Amnestyyy\|(Contact me!)]]</small> <helper /> 16:16, February 5, 2017 (UTC)		:An hour or two ago, Crook told me that he was going to have a look at this article. I'm sure he'll fix it up just fine. If, afterwards, there are still concerns, we'll just have to have another look at it. --[[User:Amnestyyy\|Amnestyyy]] <small>[[User talk:Amnestyyy\|(Contact me!)]]</small> <helper /> 16:16, February 5, 2017 (UTC)
	::By the way, sorry if my edit summary was a little harsh. >.< I had trouble comprehending why there were so many errors while I made what I had expected to be just a simple grammar/spelling check and was pressed for time, but I know I should be more open-minded about things like how some editors' first language isn't English, for example. [[User:Sol Pacificus\|<span style="color:#990000;font-family:Monotype Corsiva;font-size:17px">'''Sol Pacificus'''</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:Sol Pacificus\|<span style="color:#D4AF37;font-family:Californian FB;font-size:11px">(Cyfiero)</span>]]</sup> 16:42, February 5, 2017 (UTC)		::By the way, sorry if my edit summary was a little harsh. >.< I had trouble comprehending why there were so many errors while I made what I had expected to be just a simple grammar/spelling check and was pressed for time, but I know I should be more open-minded about things like how some editors' first language isn't English, for example. [[User:Sol Pacificus\|<span style="color:#990000;font-family:Monotype Corsiva;font-size:17px">'''Sol Pacificus'''</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:Sol Pacificus\|<span style="color:#D4AF37;font-family:Californian FB;font-size:11px">(Cyfiero)</span>]]</sup> 16:42, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

			==Germain's Exile==
			While we don't know when he was thrown out of the Parisian Rite it is suggested to be in 1779. The novel says that it was during that year that the most radical ideals was talked about and Julie De La Serre wasn't present at the time Germain was thrown out as we see in the final confession with Germain in The Temple. Where him being thrown out is presented for us to see. And rather than having an edit war I'd like to hear what anyone else think about it.--[[User:ACsenior\|ACsenior]] ([[User talk:ACsenior\|talk]]) 08:33, August 9, 2017 (UTC)

imported>Sol Pacificus: /* Revamp */

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Revamp

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	After doing what was just a simple spelling/grammar check of the entire article, I have to say that it desperately needs an almost complete revamp. The content is almost entirely just a hazardous listing of events in ''Unity'' corresponding to these Templars. There's no flow to the article, a lot of lack of clarity here and there, and nothing to connect all this information to the larger topic: that of this organization and its motives and goals. Explanation of the schism should also be clearer... I would need to look at it again to be more clear about what needs to be done, but I hadn't meant to spend time on this article as I'm too busy at the moment, and in terms of ''Assassin's Creed'' work, this is aside from my current tasks. However, I was admittedly beyond stressed at the condition of this article and the sheer amount of grammar/spelling errors that took over an hour to correct. [[User:Sol Pacificus\|<span style="color:#990000;font-family:Monotype Corsiva;font-size:17px">'''Sol Pacificus'''</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:Sol Pacificus\|<span style="color:#D4AF37;font-family:Californian FB;font-size:11px">(Cyfiero)</span>]]</sup> 15:45, February 5, 2017 (UTC)		After doing what was just a simple spelling/grammar check of the entire article, I have to say that it desperately needs an almost complete revamp. The content is almost entirely just a hazardous listing of events in ''Unity'' corresponding to these Templars. There's no flow to the article, a lot of lack of clarity here and there, and nothing to connect all this information to the larger topic: that of this organization and its motives and goals. Explanation of the schism should also be clearer... I would need to look at it again to be more clear about what needs to be done, but I hadn't meant to spend time on this article as I'm too busy at the moment, and in terms of ''Assassin's Creed'' work, this is aside from my current tasks. However, I was admittedly beyond stressed at the condition of this article and the sheer amount of grammar/spelling errors that took over an hour to correct. [[User:Sol Pacificus\|<span style="color:#990000;font-family:Monotype Corsiva;font-size:17px">'''Sol Pacificus'''</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:Sol Pacificus\|<span style="color:#D4AF37;font-family:Californian FB;font-size:11px">(Cyfiero)</span>]]</sup> 15:45, February 5, 2017 (UTC)
	:An hour or two ago, Crook told me that he was going to have a look at this article. I'm sure he'll fix it up just fine. If, afterwards, there are still concerns, we'll just have to have another look at it. --[[User:Amnestyyy\|Amnestyyy]] <small>[[User talk:Amnestyyy\|(Contact me!)]]</small> <helper /> 16:16, February 5, 2017 (UTC)		:An hour or two ago, Crook told me that he was going to have a look at this article. I'm sure he'll fix it up just fine. If, afterwards, there are still concerns, we'll just have to have another look at it. --[[User:Amnestyyy\|Amnestyyy]] <small>[[User talk:Amnestyyy\|(Contact me!)]]</small> <helper /> 16:16, February 5, 2017 (UTC)
			::By the way, sorry if my edit summary was a little harsh. >.< I had trouble comprehending why there were so many errors while I made what I had expected to be just a simple grammar/spelling check and was pressed for time, but I know I should be more open-minded about things like how some editors' first language isn't English, for example. [[User:Sol Pacificus\|<span style="color:#990000;font-family:Monotype Corsiva;font-size:17px">'''Sol Pacificus'''</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:Sol Pacificus\|<span style="color:#D4AF37;font-family:Californian FB;font-size:11px">(Cyfiero)</span>]]</sup> 16:42, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

imported>Amnestyyy: /* Revamp */

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	After doing what was just a simple spelling/grammar check of the entire article, I have to say that it desperately needs an almost complete revamp. The content is almost entirely just a hazardous listing of events in ''Unity'' corresponding to these Templars. There's no flow to the article, a lot of lack of clarity here and there, and nothing to connect all this information to the larger topic: that of this organization and its motives and goals. Explanation of the schism should also be clearer... I would need to look at it again to be more clear about what needs to be done, but I hadn't meant to spend time on this article as I'm too busy at the moment, and in terms of ''Assassin's Creed'' work, this is aside from my current tasks. However, I was admittedly beyond stressed at the condition of this article and the sheer amount of grammar/spelling errors that took over an hour to correct. [[User:Sol Pacificus\|<span style="color:#990000;font-family:Monotype Corsiva;font-size:17px">'''Sol Pacificus'''</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:Sol Pacificus\|<span style="color:#D4AF37;font-family:Californian FB;font-size:11px">(Cyfiero)</span>]]</sup> 15:45, February 5, 2017 (UTC)		After doing what was just a simple spelling/grammar check of the entire article, I have to say that it desperately needs an almost complete revamp. The content is almost entirely just a hazardous listing of events in ''Unity'' corresponding to these Templars. There's no flow to the article, a lot of lack of clarity here and there, and nothing to connect all this information to the larger topic: that of this organization and its motives and goals. Explanation of the schism should also be clearer... I would need to look at it again to be more clear about what needs to be done, but I hadn't meant to spend time on this article as I'm too busy at the moment, and in terms of ''Assassin's Creed'' work, this is aside from my current tasks. However, I was admittedly beyond stressed at the condition of this article and the sheer amount of grammar/spelling errors that took over an hour to correct. [[User:Sol Pacificus\|<span style="color:#990000;font-family:Monotype Corsiva;font-size:17px">'''Sol Pacificus'''</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:Sol Pacificus\|<span style="color:#D4AF37;font-family:Californian FB;font-size:11px">(Cyfiero)</span>]]</sup> 15:45, February 5, 2017 (UTC)
			:An hour or two ago, Crook told me that he was going to have a look at this article. I'm sure he'll fix it up just fine. If, afterwards, there are still concerns, we'll just have to have another look at it. --[[User:Amnestyyy\|Amnestyyy]] <small>[[User talk:Amnestyyy\|(Contact me!)]]</small> <helper /> 16:16, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

imported>Sol Pacificus: /* Revamp */ new section

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	<span style= "color: darkred">Linkpogo</span><span style= "color: dimgray">, Pater Intellectus</span> 19:50, October 21, 2015 (UTC)		<span style= "color: darkred">Linkpogo</span><span style= "color: dimgray">, Pater Intellectus</span> 19:50, October 21, 2015 (UTC)
	:They're called, in-game, the "Paris Rite"; it's quite hard to misinterpret that. The article doesn't touch upon whether or not the Templars have other Rites in the country, because we don't know if they do or not. --'''''[[User:Jasca Ducato\|Jasca Ducato]]''''' <small>([[User talk:Jasca Ducato\|talk]] \| [[Special:Contributions/Jasca Ducato\|contributions]])</small> 07:39, October 22, 2015 (UTC)		:They're called, in-game, the "Paris Rite"; it's quite hard to misinterpret that. The article doesn't touch upon whether or not the Templars have other Rites in the country, because we don't know if they do or not. --'''''[[User:Jasca Ducato\|Jasca Ducato]]''''' <small>([[User talk:Jasca Ducato\|talk]] \| [[Special:Contributions/Jasca Ducato\|contributions]])</small> 07:39, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

			== Revamp ==

			After doing what was just a simple spelling/grammar check of the entire article, I have to say that it desperately needs an almost complete revamp. The content is almost entirely just a hazardous listing of events in ''Unity'' corresponding to these Templars. There's no flow to the article, a lot of lack of clarity here and there, and nothing to connect all this information to the larger topic: that of this organization and its motives and goals. Explanation of the schism should also be clearer... I would need to look at it again to be more clear about what needs to be done, but I hadn't meant to spend time on this article as I'm too busy at the moment, and in terms of ''Assassin's Creed'' work, this is aside from my current tasks. However, I was admittedly beyond stressed at the condition of this article and the sheer amount of grammar/spelling errors that took over an hour to correct. [[User:Sol Pacificus\|<span style="color:#990000;font-family:Monotype Corsiva;font-size:17px">'''Sol Pacificus'''</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:Sol Pacificus\|<span style="color:#D4AF37;font-family:Californian FB;font-size:11px">(Cyfiero)</span>]]</sup> 15:45, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

imported>Jasca Ducato: /* Misinterpretation of the name */

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Misinterpretation of the name

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	<span style= "color: darkred">Linkpogo</span><span style= "color: dimgray">, Pater Intellectus</span> 19:50, October 21, 2015 (UTC)		<span style= "color: darkred">Linkpogo</span><span style= "color: dimgray">, Pater Intellectus</span> 19:50, October 21, 2015 (UTC)
			:They're called, in-game, the "Paris Rite"; it's quite hard to misinterpret that. The article doesn't touch upon whether or not the Templars have other Rites in the country, because we don't know if they do or not. --'''''[[User:Jasca Ducato\|Jasca Ducato]]''''' <small>([[User talk:Jasca Ducato\|talk]] \| [[Special:Contributions/Jasca Ducato\|contributions]])</small> 07:39, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

imported>Linkpogo at 19:50, 21 October 2015

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	[[User:Spanish assassin\|<span style="color:red;">'''Spanish assassin'''</span>]] ([[User Talk:Spanish assassin\|<span style="color:no;">Talk</span>]]) 18:50, October 21, 2015 (UTC)		[[User:Spanish assassin\|<span style="color:red;">'''Spanish assassin'''</span>]] ([[User Talk:Spanish assassin\|<span style="color:no;">Talk</span>]]) 18:50, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

			In the french version ther is no "Parisian Rite", or just "Rite", there are called "Templars" or "Templar Order".

			<span style= "color: darkred">Linkpogo</span><span style= "color: dimgray">, Pater Intellectus</span> 19:50, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

imported>Spanish assassin at 18:50, 21 October 2015

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	Isn't it the "French Rite"? It has to be bigger than just Paris and Versailles.--[[User:Bovkaffe\|Bovkaffe]] ([[User talk:Bovkaffe\|talk]]) 17:52, December 12, 2014 (UTC)		Isn't it the "French Rite"? It has to be bigger than just Paris and Versailles.--[[User:Bovkaffe\|Bovkaffe]] ([[User talk:Bovkaffe\|talk]]) 17:52, December 12, 2014 (UTC)
	:Nope. It's explicitly called the "Parisian Rite" in the Database. There's no mention of this Rite's actions, or those of other Templars throughout the rest of France. --'''''[[User:Jasca Ducato\|Jasca Ducato]]''''' <small>([[User talk:Jasca Ducato\|talk]] \| [[Special:Contributions/Jasca Ducato\|contributions]])</small> 17:56, December 12, 2014 (UTC)		:Nope. It's explicitly called the "Parisian Rite" in the Database. There's no mention of this Rite's actions, or those of other Templars throughout the rest of France. --'''''[[User:Jasca Ducato\|Jasca Ducato]]''''' <small>([[User talk:Jasca Ducato\|talk]] \| [[Special:Contributions/Jasca Ducato\|contributions]])</small> 17:56, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

			==Misinterpretation of the name==
			I think the "Parisian Rite of the Templar Order" is the name with the French Templars of the country and not just in the capital. No evidence of other templars rites in France. Also in the novel it shows that the Parisian rite is a state power.

			[[User:Spanish assassin\|<span style="color:red;">'''Spanish assassin'''</span>]] ([[User Talk:Spanish assassin\|<span style="color:no;">Talk</span>]]) 18:50, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

imported>Jasca Ducato: Oops, rushing.

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Oops, rushing.

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	Isn't it the "French Rite"? It has to be bigger than just Paris and Versailles.--[[User:Bovkaffe\|Bovkaffe]] ([[User talk:Bovkaffe\|talk]]) 17:52, December 12, 2014 (UTC)		Isn't it the "French Rite"? It has to be bigger than just Paris and Versailles.--[[User:Bovkaffe\|Bovkaffe]] ([[User talk:Bovkaffe\|talk]]) 17:52, December 12, 2014 (UTC)
	:Nope. It's explicitly called the "Parisian Rite" in the Database. There's no mention of this Rite's actions, or those of other Templars throughout the rest of France.		:Nope. It's explicitly called the "Parisian Rite" in the Database. There's no mention of this Rite's actions, or those of other Templars throughout the rest of France. --'''''[[User:Jasca Ducato\|Jasca Ducato]]''''' <small>([[User talk:Jasca Ducato\|talk]] \| [[Special:Contributions/Jasca Ducato\|contributions]])</small> 17:56, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

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	After doing what was just a simple spelling/grammar check of the entire article, I have to say that it desperately needs an almost complete revamp. The content is almost entirely just a hazardous listing of events in ''Unity'' corresponding to these Templars. There's no flow to the article, a lot of lack of clarity here and there, and nothing to connect all this information to the larger topic: that of this organization and its motives and goals. Explanation of the schism should also be clearer... I would need to look at it again to be more clear about what needs to be done, but I hadn't meant to spend time on this article as I'm too busy at the moment, and in terms of ''Assassin's Creed'' work, this is aside from my current tasks. However, I was admittedly beyond stressed at the condition of this article and the sheer amount of grammar/spelling errors that took over an hour to correct. [[User:Sol Pacificus\|<span style="color:#990000;font-family:Monotype Corsiva;font-size:17px">'''Sol Pacificus'''</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:Sol Pacificus\|<span style="color:#D4AF37;font-family:Californian FB;font-size:11px">(Cyfiero)</span>]]</sup> 15:45, February 5, 2017 (UTC)		After doing what was just a simple spelling/grammar check of the entire article, I have to say that it desperately needs an almost complete revamp. The content is almost entirely just a hazardous listing of events in ''Unity'' corresponding to these Templars. There's no flow to the article, a lot of lack of clarity here and there, and nothing to connect all this information to the larger topic: that of this organization and its motives and goals. Explanation of the schism should also be clearer... I would need to look at it again to be more clear about what needs to be done, but I hadn't meant to spend time on this article as I'm too busy at the moment, and in terms of ''Assassin's Creed'' work, this is aside from my current tasks. However, I was admittedly beyond stressed at the condition of this article and the sheer amount of grammar/spelling errors that took over an hour to correct. [[User:Sol Pacificus\|<span style="color:#990000;font-family:Monotype Corsiva;font-size:17px">'''Sol Pacificus'''</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:Sol Pacificus\|<span style="color:#D4AF37;font-family:Californian FB;font-size:11px">(Cyfiero)</span>]]</sup> 15:45, February 5, 2017 (UTC)
	:An hour or two ago, Crook told me that he was going to have a look at this article. I'm sure he'll fix it up just fine. If, afterwards, there are still concerns, we'll just have to have another look at it. --[[User:Amnestyyy\|Amnestyyy]] <small>[[User talk:Amnestyyy\|(Contact me!)]]</small> <helper /> 16:16, February 5, 2017 (UTC)		:An hour or two ago, Crook told me that he was going to have a look at this article. I'm sure he'll fix it up just fine. If, afterwards, there are still concerns, we'll just have to have another look at it. --[[User:Amnestyyy\|Amnestyyy]] <small>[[User talk:Amnestyyy\|(Contact me!)]]</small> <helper /> 16:16, February 5, 2017 (UTC)
			::By the way, sorry if my edit summary was a little harsh. >.< I had trouble comprehending why there were so many errors while I made what I had expected to be just a simple grammar/spelling check and was pressed for time, but I know I should be more open-minded about things like how some editors' first language isn't English, for example. [[User:Sol Pacificus\|<span style="color:#990000;font-family:Monotype Corsiva;font-size:17px">'''Sol Pacificus'''</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:Sol Pacificus\|<span style="color:#D4AF37;font-family:Californian FB;font-size:11px">(Cyfiero)</span>]]</sup> 16:42, February 5, 2017 (UTC)