Plucking the Quill - Revision history

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	*'''Aelwyn:''' ''Roly-poly mutton man, you can't catch me!''		*'''Aelwyn:''' ''Roly-poly mutton man, you can't catch me!''
	Aelwny ran away as one of the guards chased after her. Then, Wigbert ran away as the other guard sighed and went after him.		Aelwny ran away as one of the guards chased after her. Then, Wigbert ran away as the other guard sighed and went after him.
	*'''Anglo-Saxon Soldier 2:''' ''God help me, I'd rather be shoveling dung in {{Wiki\|Malvern, ~~Worchesterschire~~\|Malvern}} again.''		*'''Anglo-Saxon Soldier 2:''' ''God help me, I'd rather be shoveling dung in {{Wiki\|Malvern, Worcestershire\|Malvern}} again.''
	Eivor went after Aelwyn, who led Eivor to a house near a water mill and evaded the guard. Aelwyn stood tossing a ball up and down.		Eivor went after Aelwyn, who led Eivor to a house near a water mill and evaded the guard. Aelwyn stood tossing a ball up and down.
	*'''Aelwyn:''' ''You again. You should mind your own beeswax.''		*'''Aelwyn:''' ''You again. You should mind your own beeswax.''

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	*'''Eivor:''' ''What is so important that you risk his little neck for it?''		*'''Eivor:''' ''What is so important that you risk his little neck for it?''
	*'''Aelwyn:''' ''Keep your sticky beak out of our business.''		*'''Aelwyn:''' ''Keep your sticky beak out of our business.''
	*'''~~Aelwyn~~:''' ''Whose business? The Quill's?''		*'''Eivor:''' ''Whose business? The Quill's?''
	\|-\|I am looking for The Quill=		\|-\|I am looking for The Quill=
	*'''Eivor:''' ''I'm looking for The Quill. So I am asking you, his little worker bees.''		*'''Eivor:''' ''I'm looking for The Quill. So I am asking you, his little worker bees.''

imported>RShepard227: /* Dialogue */

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imported>RShepard227 at 08:28, 14 January 2025

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	\|-\|Fight - Something hog-ugly=		\|-\|Fight - Something hog-ugly=
	*'''Eivor:''' ''I'm not sure, looks like an old lady's been rolling in shit with all the other ugly [[Pig\|sows]]. A hog in a dress maybe?''		*'''Eivor:''' ''I'm not sure, looks like an old lady's been rolling in shit with all the other ugly [[Pig\|sows]]. A hog in a dress maybe?''
	Eivor fought and killed the two thugs.		The woman thug became incensed and they both drew their weapons. Eivor fought and killed the two thugs.
	\|-\|How about some coin? (230)=		\|-\|How about some coin? (230)=
	*'''Eivor:''' ''How about I pay you to scuttle off to the [[tavern]] and drink yourself senseless?''		*'''Eivor:''' ''How about I pay you to scuttle off to the [[tavern]] and drink yourself senseless?''
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	*'''Aelwyn:''' ''Us? Working for The Quill? Shows what you know.''		*'''Aelwyn:''' ''Us? Working for The Quill? Shows what you know.''
	*'''Eivor:''' ''Is that so?''		*'''Eivor:''' ''Is that so?''
	*'''Aelwyn:''' ''I am innocent as a [[Sheep\|lamb]]. ''
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	\|-\|~~If Eivor killed~~ the thugs=		\|-\|Killed the thugs=
	*'''Aelwyn:''' ''They were The Quill's thugs, and you killed them. Wouldn't want to be in your boots.''		*'''Aelwyn:''' ''I am innocent as a [[Sheep\|lamb]]. They were The Quill's thugs, and you killed them. Wouldn't want to be in your boots.''
	\|-\|~~If Eivor paid~~ off the thugs=		\|-\|Paid off the thugs=
	*'''Aelwyn:''' ''They were The Quill's ninnypops. Smart stuff to throw coin at them, they will be too squiffed to bother you now.		*'''Aelwyn:''' ''They were The Quill's ninnypops. Smart stuff to throw coin at them, they will be too squiffed to bother you now.
	\|-\|~~If Eivor scared~~ off the thugs=		\|-\|Scared off the thugs=
	*'''Aelwyn:''' ''Those were The Quill's meatmops, and you sent them scurrying off with their tails between their legs.''		*'''Aelwyn:''' ''Those were The Quill's meatmops, and you sent them scurrying off with their tails between their legs.''
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	{{Era\|ACV\|Memories}}		{{Era\|ACV\|Memories}}
	{{IncompleteMemory}}		{{IncompleteMemory\|Valhalla}}
	{{Memory Infobox		{{Memory Infobox
	\| name = Plucking the Quill		\| name = Plucking the Quill

imported>RShepard227: /* Dialogue */

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imported>RShepard227: Turns out it's three distinct girls who have dialogue in the sewer, all with the exact same actor.

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Turns out it's three distinct girls who have dialogue in the sewer, all with the exact same actor.

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	*'''Female Anglo-Saxon Thug 1:''' ''What you looking at?''		*'''Female Anglo-Saxon Thug 1:''' ''What you looking at?''
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	\|-\|Something hog-ugly=		\|-\|Fight - Something hog-ugly.=
	*'''Eivor:''' ''I'm not sure, looks like an old lady's been rolling in shit with all the other ugly [[Pig\|sows]]. A hog in a dress maybe?''		*'''Eivor:''' ''I'm not sure, looks like an old lady's been rolling in shit with all the other ugly [[Pig\|sows]]. A hog in a dress maybe?''
	Eivor fought and killed the two thugs.		Eivor fought and killed the two thugs.
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	Along the entrance of this passage, Eivor found a bunch of children loitering in the sewers. One of the girls spoke aloud.		Along the entrance of this passage, Eivor found a bunch of children loitering in the sewers. One of the girls spoke aloud.
	*'''Anglo-Saxon Girl 3:''' ''I like the pretty things, but Magister Bata says stealing is wrong.''		*'''Anglo-Saxon Girl 3:''' ''I like the pretty things, but Magister Bata says stealing is wrong.''
	Eivor spoke to ~~the~~ girl.		Eivor spoke to another girl.
	*'''Anglo-Saxon Girl 3:''' ''I'm going to marry King Aelfred, and he's going to whisk me away from this toil.''		*'''Anglo-Saxon Girl 4:''' ''I'm going to marry King Aelfred, and he's going to whisk me away from this toil.''
	Eivor talked to a ~~child~~ sitting on the ground.		Eivor talked to a girl sitting on the ground.
	*'''Anglo-Saxon Girl 4:''' ''Everyone died and left me alone on the streets.''		*'''Anglo-Saxon Girl 5:''' ''Everyone died and left me alone on the streets.''
	Eivor spoke with a ~~child~~ with his knees to his chest.		Eivor spoke with a boy sitting with his knees to his chest.
	*'''Anglo-Saxon Boy 4:''' ''I didn't get nothin' today.''		*'''Anglo-Saxon Boy 4:''' ''I didn't get nothin' today.''
	Eivor found and spoke with a ~~child~~ a distance away from the rest.		Eivor found and spoke with a boy a distance away from the rest.
	*'''Anglo-Saxon Boy 5:''' ''There's never enough food. I'm always starving.''		*'''Anglo-Saxon Boy 5:''' ''There's never enough food. I'm always starving.''
	[[File:ACV Plucking the Quill 10.png\|thumb\|250px\|Eivor in the inner cellar]]		[[File:ACV Plucking the Quill 10.png\|thumb\|250px\|Eivor in the inner cellar]]

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	*'''King Aelfred:''' ''The decay of learning has been gentle in [[Wessex]]. We enjoy the office of wise men, but we have neglected the study of wisdom.''		*'''King Aelfred:''' ''The decay of learning has been gentle in [[Wessex]]. We enjoy the office of wise men, but we have neglected the study of wisdom.''
	*'''Goodwin:''' ''The Quill preys on this lapse.''		*'''Goodwin:''' ''The Quill preys on this lapse.''
	~~[[File:ACV Plucking the Quill 2.jpg\|thumb\|250px\|Eivor, King Aelfred and Goodwin discuss The Quill]]~~
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	\|-\|Presented ~~the~~ Quill's manifesto to Goodwin=		\|-\|Presented The Quill's manifesto to Goodwin=
	*'''Eivor:''' ''Did you discover more from the writings I found?''		*'''Eivor:''' ''Did you discover more from the writings I found?''
	*'''Goodwin:''' ''I did. The Quill is calling the children of [[Winchester\|Wincestre]] to arms.		*'''Goodwin:''' ''I did. The Quill is calling the children of [[Winchester\|Wincestre]] to arms.
	\|-\|Found ~~the~~ manifesto ~~later~~=		\|-\|Found manifesto afterwards=
	Eivor pulled a copy of The Quill's manifesto, titled 'A Disputation of Tutelage,' having discovered it somewhere in Wincestre after her discussion with Goodwin. She presented it to the reeve.		Eivor pulled a copy of The Quill's manifesto, titled 'A Disputation of Tutelage,' having discovered it somewhere in Wincestre after her discussion with Goodwin. She presented it to the reeve.
	*'''Eivor:''' ''Read this. The Quill wields cutting words that call all the children of Wincestre to arms.''		*'''Eivor:''' ''Read this. The Quill wields cutting words that call all the children of Wincestre to arms.''
	\|-\|Did not find ~~the~~ manifesto=		\|-\|Did not find manifesto=
	Goodwin presented a copy of The Quill's manifesto, titled 'A Disputation of Tutelage,' having discovered it somewhere in Wincestre. He handed it to Eivor and she read it.		Goodwin presented a copy of The Quill's manifesto, titled 'A Disputation of Tutelage,' having discovered it somewhere in Wincestre. He handed it to Eivor and she read it.
	*'''Eivor:''' ''Someone disagrees with your reforms, Aelfred. And he's calling the children to arms.''		*'''Eivor:''' ''Someone disagrees with your reforms, Aelfred. And he's calling the children to arms.''
	</tabber>		</tabber>
			[[File:ACV Plucking the Quill 2.jpg\|thumb\|250px\|Eivor, King Aelfred and Goodwin discuss The Quill]]
	*'''Goodwin:''' ''Now we know why so many children scurry through the streets. Feral and untutored.''		*'''Goodwin:''' ''Now we know why so many children scurry through the streets. Feral and untutored.''
	*'''Eivor:''' ''I can talk to some, see where they lead me.''		*'''Eivor:''' ''I can talk to some, see where they lead me.''

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	\|-\|I did only what you asked=		\|-\|I did only what you asked=
	*'''Eivor:''' ''I did only what I agreed to, Aelfred. If your crown now weighs heavy, I would gladly take it from you.''		*'''Eivor:''' ''I did only what I agreed to, Aelfred. If your crown now weighs heavy, I would gladly take it from you.''

	\|-\|Do this yourself, then=		\|-\|Do this yourself, then=
	*'''Eivor:''' ''Sweep your own hearth, Aelfred, if you do not like my broom.''		*'''Eivor:''' ''Sweep your own hearth, Aelfred, if you do not like my broom.''

	\|-\|I will take my reward and go=		\|-\|I will take my reward and go=
	*'''Eivor:''' ''It may be I should take my {{Wiki\|Danegeld}} now. Leave you to the [[snake]]s that remain?''		*'''Eivor:''' ''It may be I should take my {{Wiki\|Danegeld}} now. Leave you to the [[snake]]s that remain?''

	</tabber>		</tabber>
	King Aelfred sighed as he walked off to kneel and pray.		King Aelfred sighed as he walked off to kneel and pray.
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	*'''King Aelfred:''' ''The decay of learning has been gentle in [[Wessex]]. We enjoy the office of wise men, but we have neglected the study of wisdom.''		*'''King Aelfred:''' ''The decay of learning has been gentle in [[Wessex]]. We enjoy the office of wise men, but we have neglected the study of wisdom.''
	*'''Goodwin:''' ''The Quill preys on this lapse.''		*'''Goodwin:''' ''The Quill preys on this lapse.''
			[[File:ACV Plucking the Quill 2.jpg\|thumb\|250px\|Eivor, King Aelfred and Goodwin discuss The Quill]]
			<tabber>
			\|-\|Found the Quill's manifesto earlier=
	*'''Eivor:''' ''Did you discover more from the writings I found?''		*'''Eivor:''' ''Did you discover more from the writings I found?''
	~~[[File:ACV Plucking the Quill 2.jpg\|thumb\|250px\|Eivor, King Aelfred and Goodwin discuss The Quill]]~~		*'''Goodwin:''' ''I did. The Quill is calling the children of [[Winchester\|Wincestre]] to arms.
	*'''Goodwin:''' ''I did. The Quill is calling the children of [[Winchester\|Wincestre]] to arms. Now we know why so many children scurry through the streets. Feral and untutored.''		\|-\|Did not find the manifesto=
			Goodwin presented a copy of The Quill's manifesto, titled 'A Disputation of Tutelage,' having discovered it somewhere in Wincestre. He handed it to Eivor and she read it.
			*'''Eivor:''' ''Someone disagrees with your reforms, Aelfred. And he's calling the children to arms.''
			</tabber>
			*'''Goodwin:''' ''Now we know why so many children scurry through the streets. Feral and untutored.''
	*'''Eivor:''' ''I can talk to some, see where they lead me.''		*'''Eivor:''' ''I can talk to some, see where they lead me.''
	*'''Goodwin:''' ''Good. Find me at the ale-house when you're done. And try not to scare the piss from any of them.''		*'''Goodwin:''' ''Good. Find me at the ale-house when you're done. And try not to scare the piss from any of them.''
	Eivor ~~looked~~ at ~~Alfred~~.		Eivor simply smirked at Aelfred in response.
	*'''Eivor:''' ''We [[Norse people\|Norse]] are the monsters of your {{Wiki\|Osburh\|Saxon mother}}'s bedtime tales. I promise nothing.''		*'''Eivor:''' ''We [[Norse people\|Norse]] are the monsters of your {{Wiki\|Osburh\|Saxon mother}}'s bedtime tales. I promise nothing.''
	[[File:ACV Plucking the Quill 3.png\|thumb\|250px\|Eivor approaching the little girl who was hiding in a corner]]		[[File:ACV Plucking the Quill 3.png\|thumb\|250px\|Eivor approaching the little girl who was hiding in a corner]]
	As ~~Aelfred~~ and Goodwin left the minster, Eivor noticed the little girl from ~~before, hiding~~.		Aelfred grimaced at her indignantly. As he and Goodwin left the minster, Eivor noticed the presence of the little girl from earlier.
	*'''Eivor:''' ''I see you, child. Come.''		*'''Eivor:''' ''I see you, child. Come.''
	*'''Anglo-Saxon Girl 1:''' ''The bad reeve, Selwyn. I saw you punish him in the square.''		*'''Anglo-Saxon Girl 1:''' ''The bad reeve, Selwyn. I saw you punish him in the square.''
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	Eivor fought Hilda's guards and killed them before assassinating Hilda. In the [[Memory Corridor]], Hilda, standing around shadows of her "saved" children, spoke aloud and sat down.		Eivor fought Hilda's guards and killed them before assassinating Hilda. In the [[Memory Corridor]], Hilda, standing around shadows of her "saved" children, spoke aloud and sat down.
	*'''Hilda:''' ''Come child. Whisper what you've learned, and Mother will give you a treat.''		*'''Hilda:''' ''Come child. Whisper what you've learned, and Mother will give you a treat.''
	Eivor and a ghostly [[Odin]] walked towards her		Eivor and a ghostly [[Odin]] walked towards her.
	*'''Eivor:''' ''Coward. Using children to spy and steal for your Order.''		*'''Eivor:''' ''Coward. Using children to spy and steal for your Order.''
	Hilda, holding a [[feather]] to her face, responded as she walked toward one running child and smiled.		Hilda, holding a [[feather]] to her face, responded as she walked toward one running child and smiled.

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	Elsewhere, Eivor overhead another woman.		Elsewhere, Eivor overhead another woman.
	*'''Anglo-Saxon Woman 2:''' ''Do you believe in souls? A part of us that lives on with God after we die? Bishop Ealhferth's passing has made me wonder.''		*'''Anglo-Saxon Woman 2:''' ''Do you believe in souls? A part of us that lives on with God after we die? Bishop Ealhferth's passing has made me wonder.''
	At the minster, Eivor caught sight of King [[Alfred the Great\|~~Alfred~~]] talking with the young [[Anglo-Saxons\|Anglo-Saxon]] girl who appeared at the town square execution eariler.		At the minster, Eivor caught sight of King [[Alfred the Great\|Aelfred]] talking with the young [[Anglo-Saxons\|Anglo-Saxon]] girl who appeared at the town square execution eariler.
	*'''King Aelfred:''' ''A cheerful heart is good medicine, but a crushed spirit dries up the bones. Does Magister Bata not teach you the scriptures?''		*'''King Aelfred:''' ''A cheerful heart is good medicine, but a crushed spirit dries up the bones. Does Magister Bata not teach you the scriptures?''
	*'''Anglo-Saxon Girl 1:''' ''Magister Bata is a [[horse]]'s dangles.''		*'''Anglo-Saxon Girl 1:''' ''Magister Bata is a [[horse]]'s dangles.''
	The young girl ran off as Eivor walked towards ~~Alfred~~ and Goodwin.		The young girl ran off as Eivor walked towards Aelfred and Goodwin.
	*'''King Aelfred:''' ''And here is the axe I used to swat a fly.''		*'''King Aelfred:''' ''And here is the axe I used to swat a fly.''
	*'''Eivor:''' ''You have ventured from your burrow.''		*'''Eivor:''' ''You have ventured from your burrow.''
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	*'''King Aelfred:''' ''Forgive my outburst. [[Christianity\|God]] sowed in me a passion, but English prose is an instrument long out of tune.''		*'''King Aelfred:''' ''Forgive my outburst. [[Christianity\|God]] sowed in me a passion, but English prose is an instrument long out of tune.''
	*'''Goodwin:''' ''We all want better for our people, don't we, Eivor? Yours and ours?''		*'''Goodwin:''' ''We all want better for our people, don't we, Eivor? Yours and ours?''
	Eivor nodded and looked to ~~Alfred~~.		Eivor nodded and looked to Aelfred.
	*'''Eivor:''' ''The Quill remains. What do we know?''		*'''Eivor:''' ''The Quill remains. What do we know?''
	*'''King Aelfred:''' ''The decay of learning has been gentle in [[Wessex]]. We enjoy the office of wise men, but we have neglected the study of wisdom.''		*'''King Aelfred:''' ''The decay of learning has been gentle in [[Wessex]]. We enjoy the office of wise men, but we have neglected the study of wisdom.''

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	*'''Aelwyn:''' ''Oi! Wigbert, you great moon-calf!''		*'''Aelwyn:''' ''Oi! Wigbert, you great moon-calf!''
	[[File:ACV Plucking the Quill 6.png\|thumb\|250px\|Two thugs confronting the children]]		[[File:ACV Plucking the Quill 6.png\|thumb\|250px\|Two thugs confronting the children]]
	~~Aelwyn saw~~ two thugs ~~walking towards her and Wigbert~~.		Before they could talk, two thugs drew near. The female thug accosted Aelwyn by name.
	*'''~~Female~~ Anglo-Saxon ~~Thug 1~~:''' ''Hand it over, Aelwyn! We saw your little shadow take it.''		*'''Anglo-Saxon Soldier 3:''' ''Hand it over, Aelwyn! We saw your little shadow take it.''
	Eivor walked in ~~front of~~ the children and the ~~thug~~.		Eivor walked in between the children and the thugs, staring them down.
	*'''~~Female~~ Anglo-Saxon ~~Thug 1~~:''' ''What you looking at?''		*'''Anglo-Saxon Soldier 3:''' ''What you looking at?''
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	\|-\|Fight - Something hog-ugly.=		\|-\|Fight - Something hog-ugly=
	*'''Eivor:''' ''I'm not sure, looks like an old lady's been rolling in shit with all the other ugly [[Pig\|sows]]. A hog in a dress maybe?''		*'''Eivor:''' ''I'm not sure, looks like an old lady's been rolling in shit with all the other ugly [[Pig\|sows]]. A hog in a dress maybe?''
	Eivor fought and killed the two thugs.		Eivor fought and killed the two thugs.
	\|-\|How about some coin? (230)=		\|-\|How about some coin? (230)=
	*'''Eivor:''' ''How about I pay you to scuttle off to the [[tavern]] and drink yourself senseless?''		*'''Eivor:''' ''How about I pay you to scuttle off to the [[tavern]] and drink yourself senseless?''
	*'''Female Anglo-Saxon ~~Thug~~:''' ''Deal. Better than running around after you grubby urchins.''		*'''Female Anglo-Saxon Soldier 3:''' ''Deal. Better than running around after you grubby urchins.''
	Aelwyn and Wigbert smiled smugly at the thugs.		Aelwyn and Wigbert smiled smugly at the thugs.
	\|-\|You want to die today? (Level 4 Charisma)=		\|-\|You want to die today? (Level 4 Charisma)=
	*'''Eivor:''' ''Turn around, walk away, and you keep your insides, inside.''		*'''Eivor:''' ''Turn around, walk away, and you keep your insides, inside.''
	*'''Female Anglo-Saxon ~~Thug~~:''' ''Alright, alright. No harm meant. Stay out of trouble you grubmite.''		*'''Female Anglo-Saxon Soldier 3:''' ''Alright, alright. No harm meant. Stay out of trouble you grubmite.''
	Aelwyn bowed sarcastically at the woman's warning.		Aelwyn bowed sarcastically at the woman's warning.
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