Assassin's Creed Wiki:Apprentices/Piero.schiavone1994/PigeonCoop - Revision history

imported>Amnestyyy at 16:19, 13 February 2017

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	*I've just read about my assigned task and I'll soon start my work. :)--[[User:Piero.schiavone1994\|Piero.schiavone1994]] ([[User talk:Piero.schiavone1994\|talk]]) 20:34, February 5, 2017 (UTC)		*I've just read about my assigned task and I'll soon start my work. :)--[[User:Piero.schiavone1994\|Piero.schiavone1994]] ([[User talk:Piero.schiavone1994\|talk]]) 20:34, February 5, 2017 (UTC)
	*I've almost finished the unified "History" section, will just need to add info from ''Unity'' and ''Syndicate''. On this regard, I'm pretty sure the ''missing information'' from ''Syndicate'' probably just is about ''Fear bombs'' used by Evie and Jack in the ''Jack the Ripper'' campaign, but I'll still strive to flesh it out even more. I've added a couple of missing instances of bomb usage which had been either left out, or listed in the ''Trivia'' section, which I've decently trimmed. I'd like to finish what I've started, then I could possibly write a section about ''Types'' (of bombs, like, the most interesting kinds from each installment) and / or ''Tactics'' (mirroring the previous division between ''Smoke bombs'' and ''Explosive bombs''); and also add new quotes. I hope I'm doing well and am not being too slow. --[[User:Piero.schiavone1994\|Piero.schiavone1994]] ([[User talk:Piero.schiavone1994\|talk]]) 23:11, February 10, 2017 (UTC)		*I've almost finished the unified "History" section, will just need to add info from ''Unity'' and ''Syndicate''. On this regard, I'm pretty sure the ''missing information'' from ''Syndicate'' probably just is about ''Fear bombs'' used by Evie and Jack in the ''Jack the Ripper'' campaign, but I'll still strive to flesh it out even more. I've added a couple of missing instances of bomb usage which had been either left out, or listed in the ''Trivia'' section, which I've decently trimmed. I'd like to finish what I've started, then I could possibly write a section about ''Types'' (of bombs, like, the most interesting kinds from each installment) and / or ''Tactics'' (mirroring the previous division between ''Smoke bombs'' and ''Explosive bombs''); and also add new quotes. I hope I'm doing well and am not being too slow. --[[User:Piero.schiavone1994\|Piero.schiavone1994]] ([[User talk:Piero.schiavone1994\|talk]]) 23:11, February 10, 2017 (UTC)
			*The trivia section does look a lot better now, so good job on that. The general layout of the article has also been improved nicely, with a concise but accurate history section to boot. Don't worry about the time needed to complete the assignment: there's no time-limit, and doing a good job is more important than doing a quick one. One little thing: I noticed you making quite a few edits to the page in short succession - try to use the preview button to minimise cluttering of the activity feed from here on out. [[User:Amnestyyy\|Amnestyyy]] <small>[[User talk:Amnestyyy\|(Contact me!)]]</small> <helper /> 16:19, February 13, 2017 (UTC)

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	===Progress report + questions===		===Progress report + questions===
	*		*Alright, sounds good. A few tips to keep in mind: I agree that the events of the Carnevale in 1486 should be more elaborately described in the article. That being said, keep in mind that the article is about Carnevale, not about Ezio, or his attempt on Barbarigo's life. You're free to describe it, but don't go into too much detail. Also, the trivia has a mention of the Cristina memory from ''Brotherhood'' - try to work this into the main body of the article in an in-universe way. [[User:Amnestyyy\|Amnestyyy]] <small>[[User talk:Amnestyyy\|(Contact me!)]]</small> <helper /> 16:19, February 13, 2017 (UTC)
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	I'll also give you a minor task straight off the bat. Go to the articles featuring the revamp template. Pick one of these, go over the article and see what needs to be done to make it better. Leave a list here, in the same style as I've left for you above. After I've gone over your to-do list and approved it, you'll revamp this page as well. Good luck!		I'll also give you a minor task straight off the bat. Go to the articles featuring the revamp template. Pick one of these, go over the article and see what needs to be done to make it better. Leave a list here, in the same style as I've left for you above. After I've gone over your to-do list and approved it, you'll revamp this page as well. Good luck!

			I think the [[Carnevale]] article would be a nice playground. I personally think:
			*The article could be improved by adding a synopsis of the ''events'' of ''that'' particular ''Carnevale'' of 1486 (as it had already been suggested on the talk page), like Ezio partaking in the games etc. etc.;
			*Then, pictures taken from the Memories articles would be nice, detailing the events of the Carnevale;
			*Some general information about Carnevale (especially the Carnevale di Venezia) could be moved either in the lede or in the Trivia.

	===Progress report + questions===		===Progress report + questions===
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imported>Piero.schiavone1994: /* Progress report + questions */

2017-02-11T00:06:01Z

Progress report + questions

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	*Leave your comments and questions in this section :) --[[User:Amnestyyy\|Amnestyyy]] <small>[[User talk:Amnestyyy\|(Contact me!)]]</small> <helper /> 16:14, February 4, 2017 (UTC)		*Leave your comments and questions in this section :) --[[User:Amnestyyy\|Amnestyyy]] <small>[[User talk:Amnestyyy\|(Contact me!)]]</small> <helper /> 16:14, February 4, 2017 (UTC)
	*I've just read about my assigned task and I'll soon start my work. :)--[[User:Piero.schiavone1994\|Piero.schiavone1994]] ([[User talk:Piero.schiavone1994\|talk]]) 20:34, February 5, 2017 (UTC)		*I've just read about my assigned task and I'll soon start my work. :)--[[User:Piero.schiavone1994\|Piero.schiavone1994]] ([[User talk:Piero.schiavone1994\|talk]]) 20:34, February 5, 2017 (UTC)
	*I've almost finished the unified "History" section, will just need to add info from ''Unity'' and ''Syndicate''. On this regard, I'm pretty sure the ''missing information'' from ''Syndicate'' probably just is about ''Fear bombs'' used by Evie and Jack in the ''Jack the Ripper'' campaign, but I'll still strive to flesh it out even more. I've added a couple of missing instances of bomb usage which had been either left out, or listed in the ''Trivia'' section, which I've decently trimmed. I'd like to finish what I've started, then I could possibly write a section about ''Types'' (of bombs, like, the most interesting kinds from each installment) and / or ''Tactics'' (mirroring the previous division between (''Smoke bombs'' and ''Explosive bombs''); and also add new quotes. I hope I'm doing well and am not being too slow. --[[User:Piero.schiavone1994\|Piero.schiavone1994]] ([[User talk:Piero.schiavone1994\|talk]]) 23:11, February 10, 2017 (UTC)		*I've almost finished the unified "History" section, will just need to add info from ''Unity'' and ''Syndicate''. On this regard, I'm pretty sure the ''missing information'' from ''Syndicate'' probably just is about ''Fear bombs'' used by Evie and Jack in the ''Jack the Ripper'' campaign, but I'll still strive to flesh it out even more. I've added a couple of missing instances of bomb usage which had been either left out, or listed in the ''Trivia'' section, which I've decently trimmed. I'd like to finish what I've started, then I could possibly write a section about ''Types'' (of bombs, like, the most interesting kinds from each installment) and / or ''Tactics'' (mirroring the previous division between ''Smoke bombs'' and ''Explosive bombs''); and also add new quotes. I hope I'm doing well and am not being too slow. --[[User:Piero.schiavone1994\|Piero.schiavone1994]] ([[User talk:Piero.schiavone1994\|talk]]) 23:11, February 10, 2017 (UTC)

	==Minor task 1==		==Minor task 1==

imported>Piero.schiavone1994 at 23:11, 10 February 2017

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	*Also, see if there are any other important instances of bombs being used in games that are not yet in the article. If so, add these too.		*Also, see if there are any other important instances of bombs being used in games that are not yet in the article. If so, add these too.
	*The sourcing can do with a bit of touching up. I noticed that one of the references was broken, and some of others can probably be touched up as well.		*The sourcing can do with a bit of touching up. I noticed that one of the references was broken, and some of others can probably be touched up as well.
	*Perhaps most importantly, the sections need altering. Right now, it has 'smoke boms + history' and 'explosive bombs + history.' Try to make it just one history section, like most of our other articles, and use subheaders where you think necessary.		*Perhaps most importantly, the sections need altering. Right now, it has 'smoke boms + history' and 'explosive bombs + history.' Try to make it just one history section, like most of our other articles, and use subheaders where you think necessary.

	That should be a good start. If you have any questions, let me know here, on my talk page, or on the IRC. You can also keep my apprised of your progress here.		That should be a good start. If you have any questions, let me know here, on my talk page, or on the IRC. You can also keep my apprised of your progress here.
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	*Leave your comments and questions in this section :) --[[User:Amnestyyy\|Amnestyyy]] <small>[[User talk:Amnestyyy\|(Contact me!)]]</small> <helper /> 16:14, February 4, 2017 (UTC)		*Leave your comments and questions in this section :) --[[User:Amnestyyy\|Amnestyyy]] <small>[[User talk:Amnestyyy\|(Contact me!)]]</small> <helper /> 16:14, February 4, 2017 (UTC)
	*I've just read about my assigned task and I'll soon start my work. :)--[[User:Piero.schiavone1994\|Piero.schiavone1994]] ([[User talk:Piero.schiavone1994\|talk]]) 20:34, February 5, 2017 (UTC)		*I've just read about my assigned task and I'll soon start my work. :)--[[User:Piero.schiavone1994\|Piero.schiavone1994]] ([[User talk:Piero.schiavone1994\|talk]]) 20:34, February 5, 2017 (UTC)
			*I've almost finished the unified "History" section, will just need to add info from ''Unity'' and ''Syndicate''. On this regard, I'm pretty sure the ''missing information'' from ''Syndicate'' probably just is about ''Fear bombs'' used by Evie and Jack in the ''Jack the Ripper'' campaign, but I'll still strive to flesh it out even more. I've added a couple of missing instances of bomb usage which had been either left out, or listed in the ''Trivia'' section, which I've decently trimmed. I'd like to finish what I've started, then I could possibly write a section about ''Types'' (of bombs, like, the most interesting kinds from each installment) and / or ''Tactics'' (mirroring the previous division between (''Smoke bombs'' and ''Explosive bombs''); and also add new quotes. I hope I'm doing well and am not being too slow. --[[User:Piero.schiavone1994\|Piero.schiavone1994]] ([[User talk:Piero.schiavone1994\|talk]]) 23:11, February 10, 2017 (UTC)

	==Minor task 1==		==Minor task 1==

imported>Piero.schiavone1994: /* Progress report + questions */

2017-02-05T20:36:28Z

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	*Leave your comments and questions in this section :) --[[User:Amnestyyy\|Amnestyyy]] <small>[[User talk:Amnestyyy\|(Contact me!)]]</small> <helper /> 16:14, February 4, 2017 (UTC)		*Leave your comments and questions in this section :) --[[User:Amnestyyy\|Amnestyyy]] <small>[[User talk:Amnestyyy\|(Contact me!)]]</small> <helper /> 16:14, February 4, 2017 (UTC)
	:I've just read about my assigned task and I'll soon start my work. --[[User:Piero.schiavone1994\|Piero.schiavone1994]] ([[User talk:Piero.schiavone1994\|talk]]) 20:34, February 5, 2017 (UTC)		*I've just read about my assigned task and I'll soon start my work. :)--[[User:Piero.schiavone1994\|Piero.schiavone1994]] ([[User talk:Piero.schiavone1994\|talk]]) 20:34, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

	==Minor task 1==		==Minor task 1==

imported>Piero.schiavone1994: /* Progress report + questions */

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	*Leave your comments and questions in this section :) --[[User:Amnestyyy\|Amnestyyy]] <small>[[User talk:Amnestyyy\|(Contact me!)]]</small> <helper /> 16:14, February 4, 2017 (UTC)		*Leave your comments and questions in this section :) --[[User:Amnestyyy\|Amnestyyy]] <small>[[User talk:Amnestyyy\|(Contact me!)]]</small> <helper /> 16:14, February 4, 2017 (UTC)
			:I've just read about my assigned task and I'll soon start my work. --[[User:Piero.schiavone1994\|Piero.schiavone1994]] ([[User talk:Piero.schiavone1994\|talk]]) 20:34, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

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imported>Amnestyyy at 16:14, 4 February 2017

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 Well, there we are: the pigeon coop. This is where all the apprenticeship-stuff will be discussed and where you will find your assignments and evaluations. I think it should all be quite self-evident. One little note: I often make distinctions between major and minor assignments - major being your main task, minor assignments being projects "on the side."
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imported>Piero.schiavone1994: Piero.schiavone1994 moved page Assassin's Creed Wiki:Apprentices/Pierro.schiavone1994/PigeonCoop to Assassin's Creed Wiki:Apprentices/Piero.schiavone1994/PigeonCoop

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Piero.schiavone1994 moved page Assassin's Creed Wiki:Apprentices/Pierro.schiavone1994/PigeonCoop to Assassin's Creed Wiki:Apprentices/Piero.schiavone1994/PigeonCoop

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imported>Amnestyyy at 23:02, 3 February 2017

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	[[File:Pigeoncoopapp.png\|center\|300px]] '''The following page is an apprentice assignment page, which acts as a connection between the Apprentice, [[User:Piero.schiavone1994\|Piero.schiavone1994]] , and their Mentor, [[User:Amnestyyy\|Amnestyyy]] . It exists as an external talk page, aimed at dealing with all aspects of the apprenticeship. Only the above mentioned users and the [[Assassin's_Creed_Wiki:Staff\|staff]] have permission to converse here. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the wiki.'''		[[File:Pigeoncoopapp.png\|center\|300px]] '''The following page is an apprentice assignment page, which acts as a connection between the Apprentice, [[User:Piero.schiavone1994\|Piero.schiavone1994]], and their Mentor, [[User:Amnestyyy\|Amnestyyy]] . It exists as an external talk page, aimed at dealing with all aspects of the apprenticeship. Only the above mentioned users and the [[Assassin's_Creed_Wiki:Staff\|staff]] have permission to converse here. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the wiki.'''

	==My little introduction speech==		==My little introduction speech==

imported>Amnestyyy at 22:54, 3 February 2017

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	==Project 1: TBA==		==Project 1: TBA==
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