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	Polishing and expansion of the article explicitly into featured status. I'd suggest in particular the addition of an introduction stating the difficulty and implications of infiltrating a Templar stronghold.		Polishing and expansion of the article explicitly into featured status. I'd suggest in particular the addition of an introduction stating the difficulty and implications of infiltrating a Templar stronghold.
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	*[[Giovanni's travels]]		*[[Giovanni's travels]]
	*Auditore execution		*Auditore execution
	*[[Birth of an Assassin]]		*Birth of an Assassin
	*[[Bonfire of the Vanities]]		*[[Bonfire of the Vanities]]
	*''[[Assassin's Creed: Embers]]''		*''[[Assassin's Creed: Embers]]''

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	*Well done (and quick) as usual. However, just one correction. The <nowiki>{{reflist}}</nowiki> only need be used if the article has multiple sources/references. For articles such as this, similarly to [[Fra Giocondo]] or [[Marcello Auditore]], instead of ''<nowiki>==References== {{reflist}}</nowiki>'', you can just use ''<nowiki>==Source== ''[[Assassin's Creed: Embers]]''</nowiki>''. Mostly saves effort and space. =[[User:GuardDog\|GuardDog]] 03:15, November 23, 2011 (UTC)		*Well done (and quick) as usual. However, just one correction. The <nowiki>{{reflist}}</nowiki> only need be used if the article has multiple sources/references. For articles such as this, similarly to [[Fra Giocondo]] or [[Marcello Auditore]], instead of ''<nowiki>==References== {{reflist}}</nowiki>'', you can just use ''<nowiki>==Source== ''[[Assassin's Creed: Embers]]''</nowiki>''. Mostly saves effort and space. =[[User:GuardDog\|GuardDog]] 03:15, November 23, 2011 (UTC)
	*Another thing: as for the Francesco article, I read it a little more thoroughly, and have some advice.		*Another thing: as for the Francesco article, I read it a little more thoroughly, and have some advice.
	**Early life - can be derived from his [[Database articles\|Database]] article, and gives better pre-game background.		**Early life - can be derived from his Database articles\|Database article, and gives better pre-game background.
	**Pazzi conspiracy - well worded and complete, though would suggest cutting paragraphs into smaller ones.		**Pazzi conspiracy - well worded and complete, though would suggest cutting paragraphs into smaller ones.
	**Characteristics and personality - could use a quote if you can find one.		**Characteristics and personality - could use a quote if you can find one.

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	:''Main article: [[Assassin's Creed Wiki:WikiProject/The Blood of a Templar\|WikiProject - The Blood of a Templar]]''		:''Main article: Assassin's Creed Wiki:WikiProject/The Blood of a Templar\|WikiProject - The Blood of a Templar''

	<center><small>As suggested by Apprentice [[User:TheSt0ryTeller\|Story]]</small></center>Format of some of the headers need fixing, and a few links need updating (particularly Savonarola's lieutenants).		<center><small>As suggested by Apprentice [[User:TheSt0ryTeller\|Story]]</small></center>Format of some of the headers need fixing, and a few links need updating (particularly Savonarola's lieutenants).

imported>VatsaAWB: Unlinking "Fall of the Palaiologi"

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	:Just be discerning in your choice in which to polish; more important articles should have more editors, and a greater chance of reaching the status ;) Good luck with that =[[User:GuardDog\|GuardDog]] 11:11, December 10, 2011 (UTC)		:Just be discerning in your choice in which to polish; more important articles should have more editors, and a greater chance of reaching the status ;) Good luck with that =[[User:GuardDog\|GuardDog]] 11:11, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
	*Alright, I added that section and I'm sorry I did not add it in my original work, I honestly didn't think of it when I was editing. Also, concerning the FA work, I was considering the article [[Infiltration of the Castel Sant'Angelo]] as I can see it does need a good amount of work from a cursory look at the article. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 15:55, December 10, 2011 (UTC)		*Alright, I added that section and I'm sorry I did not add it in my original work, I honestly didn't think of it when I was editing. Also, concerning the FA work, I was considering the article Infiltration of the Castel Sant'Angelo as I can see it does need a good amount of work from a cursory look at the article. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 15:55, December 10, 2011 (UTC)
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	*Ah okay, that's fine as well, it's really up to you. Here's the next then. =[[User:GuardDog\|GuardDog]] 00:28, December 8, 2011 (UTC)		*Ah okay, that's fine as well, it's really up to you. Here's the next then. =[[User:GuardDog\|GuardDog]] 00:28, December 8, 2011 (UTC)
	*No new updates on the Topkapi images, though I just finished a major revamp and reworking of the article [[Antonio Maffei]]. I've nominated it for GA as well, and would love your vote or any suggestions if you don't think it's worthy. Here's the [[Antonio Maffei\|article]], and here's the [[AC:GA\|GA nomination page]] for your convenience. Thanks, as always Guard. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 21:41, December 12, 2011 (UTC)		*No new updates on the Topkapi images, though I just finished a major revamp and reworking of the article [[Antonio Maffei]]. I've nominated it for GA as well, and would love your vote or any suggestions if you don't think it's worthy. Here's the [[Antonio Maffei\|article]], and here's the [[AC:GA\|GA nomination page]] for your convenience. Thanks, as always Guard. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 21:41, December 12, 2011 (UTC)
	*First off, thanks for your vote on Antonio's GA nomination :P. Secondly, I've chosen [[Infiltration of the Castel Sant'Angelo]] as the article that I will attempt to revamp up to an FA standard. I will begin some preliminary work this week when I have time, but the bulk of the editing will come over the break.		*First off, thanks for your vote on Antonio's GA nomination :P. Secondly, I've chosen Infiltration of the Castel Sant'Angelo as the article that I will attempt to revamp up to an FA standard. I will begin some preliminary work this week when I have time, but the bulk of the editing will come over the break.

	:If it's alright with you (It's fine if you say no too :P.), I was hoping this could be a large assignment for my Apprenticeship. If you felt comfortable with that, it would mainly be myself editing the article over a number of days, and then asking for your complete, honest thoughts on the article, and specific ways I could improve it, no matter how big or how small. After that, I would take a look over the article again, add in any and all of your suggestions, possibly confer with another member of Staff (Nothing personal, I just want multiple peoples' thoughts and inputs prior to nomination), and then nominate it for FA, if we believe it is worthy. Once again, if you feel this will take too long, or have another objection, then that is fine too, that's completely understandable as I'm merely suggesting this as a possible idea.		:If it's alright with you (It's fine if you say no too :P.), I was hoping this could be a large assignment for my Apprenticeship. If you felt comfortable with that, it would mainly be myself editing the article over a number of days, and then asking for your complete, honest thoughts on the article, and specific ways I could improve it, no matter how big or how small. After that, I would take a look over the article again, add in any and all of your suggestions, possibly confer with another member of Staff (Nothing personal, I just want multiple peoples' thoughts and inputs prior to nomination), and then nominate it for FA, if we believe it is worthy. Once again, if you feel this will take too long, or have another objection, then that is fine too, that's completely understandable as I'm merely suggesting this as a possible idea.
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	:That's it then, well done with this assignment. After these corrections, I'd fully support its nomination. Good luck for it, apprentice :D =[[User:GuardDog\|GuardDog]] 11:18, December 19, 2011 (UTC)		:That's it then, well done with this assignment. After these corrections, I'd fully support its nomination. Good luck for it, apprentice :D =[[User:GuardDog\|GuardDog]] 11:18, December 19, 2011 (UTC)
	*XD, these suggestions were very helpful, so thank you. I have done as you have suggested, and the article is now nominated for FA status. For easier access, here is a [[AC:FA\|link to the FA nomination page]], as well as a ~~[[Infiltration of the Castel Sant'Angelo\|~~link to the article itself]]. Thank you. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 14:32, December 19, 2011 (UTC)		*XD, these suggestions were very helpful, so thank you. I have done as you have suggested, and the article is now nominated for FA status. For easier access, here is a [[AC:FA\|link to the FA nomination page]], as well as a link to the article itself. Thank you. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 14:32, December 19, 2011 (UTC)
	*Well the article is currently in the nomination phase, and is doing fairly well, no one has objected to it becoming FA yet. On a more unrelated note Guard, your story for Teller's holiday blog is great. I read it earlier this morning, and the detail and wording is awesome and it seems as if it could be canon :P. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 19:40, December 22, 2011 (UTC)		*Well the article is currently in the nomination phase, and is doing fairly well, no one has objected to it becoming FA yet. On a more unrelated note Guard, your story for Teller's holiday blog is great. I read it earlier this morning, and the detail and wording is awesome and it seems as if it could be canon :P. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 19:40, December 22, 2011 (UTC)
	*Thanks Nos :p I'm awarding you your rank up, since the nomination has 5 istruttori votes already - may still be some comments to come, but that's more than enough for the assignment. Well done.		*Thanks Nos :p I'm awarding you your rank up, since the nomination has 5 istruttori votes already - may still be some comments to come, but that's more than enough for the assignment. Well done.

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	*[[Auditore execution]]		*Auditore execution
	*[[Birth of an Assassin]]		*[[Birth of an Assassin]]
	*[[Bonfire of the Vanities]]		*[[Bonfire of the Vanities]]

imported>Nostalgia AC: Collapsing final assignment.

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	:''Main articles: [[Skirmish in the Campagna District]] - [[Infiltration of the Janissary Camp]] - [[Destruction of the Great Chain]] - [[Colosseum Passion Play]] - [[Fall of the Palaiologi]]''		:''Main articles: [[Skirmish in the Campagna District]] - [[Infiltration of the Janissary Camp]] - [[Destruction of the Great Chain]] - [[Colosseum Passion Play]] - [[Fall of the Palaiologi]]''
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	:Anyway, I'm currently writing out your nomination - I wish the best of luck to you Nos, and hope to count you amongst the Istruttore ranks soon. Whatever the results of the nomination though, I fully support you, and look forward on continuing to work alongside you. Hope you have a good evening too :) =[[User:GuardDog\|GuardDog]] 23:39, February 8, 2012 (UTC)		:Anyway, I'm currently writing out your nomination - I wish the best of luck to you Nos, and hope to count you amongst the Istruttore ranks soon. Whatever the results of the nomination though, I fully support you, and look forward on continuing to work alongside you. Hope you have a good evening too :) =[[User:GuardDog\|GuardDog]] 23:39, February 8, 2012 (UTC)
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	:*''Wording'' - "assaulted to death" can be "beaten to death" or "tortured to death"		:*''Wording'' - "assaulted to death" can be "beaten to death" or "tortured to death"
	:That's about all. Thanks for the updates as usual, Nos. =[[User:GuardDog\|GuardDog]] 13:06, January 25, 2012 (UTC)		:That's about all. Thanks for the updates as usual, Nos. =[[User:GuardDog\|GuardDog]] 13:06, January 25, 2012 (UTC)
	*Alright, sorry about those extra "Machiavelli"s, it was just a basic error on my part. I've updated the Fall article according to your comments, and have nominated it for FA. I'll leave a comment again here when Vatsa's images come in for the Colosseum article, and then I'd just like to say a brief bit before my Istruttore application is submitted if that's alright. Thanks. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[~~Message_Wall~~:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 03:09, January 26, 2012 (UTC)		*Alright, sorry about those extra "Machiavelli"s, it was just a basic error on my part. I've updated the Fall article according to your comments, and have nominated it for FA. I'll leave a comment again here when Vatsa's images come in for the Colosseum article, and then I'd just like to say a brief bit before my Istruttore application is submitted if that's alright. Thanks. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[User talk:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 03:09, January 26, 2012 (UTC)
	*Don't worry about it, it's a very minor issue. As for the Fall, I'll go vote on it after this, and will also wait for your final update on the Colosseum. Just remember that all will have to clear voting before your last rank.		*Don't worry about it, it's a very minor issue. As for the Fall, I'll go vote on it after this, and will also wait for your final update on the Colosseum. Just remember that all will have to clear voting before your last rank.
	:Regarding the brief bit you have to say before the Istruttore nomination, not to worry, I won't submit the application until you feel you're ready. It's up to you almost more than up to me, so say as you will when the time comes. :) =[[User:GuardDog\|GuardDog]] 14:15, January 26, 2012 (UTC)		:Regarding the brief bit you have to say before the Istruttore nomination, not to worry, I won't submit the application until you feel you're ready. It's up to you almost more than up to me, so say as you will when the time comes. :) =[[User:GuardDog\|GuardDog]] 14:15, January 26, 2012 (UTC)
	*Well, this is just a brief message to say that [[Destruction of the Great Chain]] has passed as FA, which now means 3 of the 5 articles have passed. Fall of the Palaiologi is currently voting, and Colosseum Passion Play just needs the final Vatsa images. Thanks. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[~~Message_Wall~~:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 03:00, January 30, 2012 (UTC)		*Well, this is just a brief message to say that [[Destruction of the Great Chain]] has passed as FA, which now means 3 of the 5 articles have passed. Fall of the Palaiologi is currently voting, and Colosseum Passion Play just needs the final Vatsa images. Thanks. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[User talk:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 03:00, January 30, 2012 (UTC)
	*Thanks for the update. Sorry for a slight miscount I had with your rank (should have been 13 after your first, then 14 after your next two), thus I'll just give you 14 now, a bit late. 15 will be awarded upon nomination of the last two, then we can have our final discussion here. =[[User:GuardDog\|GuardDog]] 10:59, January 30, 2012 (UTC)		*Thanks for the update. Sorry for a slight miscount I had with your rank (should have been 13 after your first, then 14 after your next two), thus I'll just give you 14 now, a bit late. 15 will be awarded upon nomination of the last two, then we can have our final discussion here. =[[User:GuardDog\|GuardDog]] 10:59, January 30, 2012 (UTC)
	*Well, Fall of the Palaiologi has passed as FA, leaving only Colosseum Passion Play. The article's basically done, except that it does need those final Vatsa images. I'm not sure when he'll have them, though I hope soon. I would consider asking him again, but I don't want to come off as a badgerer. Possible if I nominated the article, it would catalyze him to get those final images? I'm not sure at this point, but I would like for the article to be nominated soon. Thanks. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[~~Message_Wall~~:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 01:24, February 2, 2012 (UTC)		*Well, Fall of the Palaiologi has passed as FA, leaving only Colosseum Passion Play. The article's basically done, except that it does need those final Vatsa images. I'm not sure when he'll have them, though I hope soon. I would consider asking him again, but I don't want to come off as a badgerer. Possible if I nominated the article, it would catalyze him to get those final images? I'm not sure at this point, but I would like for the article to be nominated soon. Thanks. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[User talk:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 01:24, February 2, 2012 (UTC)
	*Sure, I agree, go ahead and nominate it. I just recommend you mention that it might still need images, and that you'll be adding them as soon as they're available. It might even be acceptable to some as is, and if not, at least people can begin reading/assessing it. =[[User:GuardDog\|GuardDog]] 10:32, February 2, 2012 (UTC)		*Sure, I agree, go ahead and nominate it. I just recommend you mention that it might still need images, and that you'll be adding them as soon as they're available. It might even be acceptable to some as is, and if not, at least people can begin reading/assessing it. =[[User:GuardDog\|GuardDog]] 10:32, February 2, 2012 (UTC)
	*Alright, well I've nominated Fall, so a final vote from you there would be great. I'll monitor the FA nomination page, and hopefully this can pass relatively easily and then I can just conclude my apprenticeship with that last final bit I was talking with you about. Thanks :P. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[~~Message_Wall~~:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 03:02, February 3, 2012 (UTC)		*Alright, well I've nominated Fall, so a final vote from you there would be great. I'll monitor the FA nomination page, and hopefully this can pass relatively easily and then I can just conclude my apprenticeship with that last final bit I was talking with you about. Thanks :P. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[User talk:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 03:02, February 3, 2012 (UTC)
	*Okay, so Colosseum Passion Play has passed as FA, which concludes my apprenticeship I guess (feels so weird to say that :P). Here's just what I'd like to say before you give you submit my application with your evaluation to the Istruttorium.		*Okay, so Colosseum Passion Play has passed as FA, which concludes my apprenticeship I guess (feels so weird to say that :P). Here's just what I'd like to say before you give you submit my application with your evaluation to the Istruttorium.

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	:Well, that's pretty much it, GuardDog. I've had an awesome apprenticeship, and you've been a great mentor and instructor to me. You've taught me a lot, and I won't forget it. Your kindess and selflessness is pretty awesome too; I know that I wasn't the easier student to work with, but I hope that you enjoyed at least some of my apprenticeship. I can't thank you enough for taking me under your wing, and I wish I could make you an awesome avatar like Sixteen or Teller, but I lack basic art skill XD.		:Well, that's pretty much it, GuardDog. I've had an awesome apprenticeship, and you've been a great mentor and instructor to me. You've taught me a lot, and I won't forget it. Your kindess and selflessness is pretty awesome too; I know that I wasn't the easier student to work with, but I hope that you enjoyed at least some of my apprenticeship. I can't thank you enough for taking me under your wing, and I wish I could make you an awesome avatar like Sixteen or Teller, but I lack basic art skill XD.

	:Thank you so much, Master GuardDog, and have a wonderful evening. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[~~Message_Wall~~:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 22:56, February 8, 2012 (UTC)		:Thank you so much, Master GuardDog, and have a wonderful evening. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[User talk:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 22:56, February 8, 2012 (UTC)
	*Rest assured, I've seen plenty of your good qualities, and will make sure to mention them. Don't worry about any flaws too, I still have a healthy helping of those, even after almost a couple of years :p		*Rest assured, I've seen plenty of your good qualities, and will make sure to mention them. Don't worry about any flaws too, I still have a healthy helping of those, even after almost a couple of years :p

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	:Also, for my next assignment, what do you think about [[Colosseum Passion Play]]? I've discovered that I fair well with these event articles, and I see a lot of work that could be done there in terms of wording, sections and section titles, and the overall amount of information, which could be reduced in my opinion as currently, from a cursory look that is, it feels like a walkthrough rather than an actual article. Thanks GD.		:Also, for my next assignment, what do you think about [[Colosseum Passion Play]]? I've discovered that I fair well with these event articles, and I see a lot of work that could be done there in terms of wording, sections and section titles, and the overall amount of information, which could be reduced in my opinion as currently, from a cursory look that is, it feels like a walkthrough rather than an actual article. Thanks GD.

	:Update - I did some work with the Colosseum article in terms of formatting, infobox, the opening section, and a few main sections which I've reworded up until "Assassination and skirmish." From here, once I receive your approval for this article, I'll just edit this one as I've done the past few: expansion and rewording of the introduction and aftermath, and rewording of the main paragraphs, with image replacement in there too. However, Sima has informed me that Vatsa is working on acquiring new images for ''Brotherhood'' memories, beginning with [[Patching The Leak]]. If this is the case, I would reword the entire article, leave the apprentice revamp tag on there, and then work on [[Fall of the Palaiologi]] (assuming you approve :P) while I wait for the images. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 21:49, January 20, 2012 (UTC)		:Update - I did some work with the Colosseum article in terms of formatting, infobox, the opening section, and a few main sections which I've reworded up until "Assassination and skirmish." From here, once I receive your approval for this article, I'll just edit this one as I've done the past few: expansion and rewording of the introduction and aftermath, and rewording of the main paragraphs, with image replacement in there too. However, Sima has informed me that Vatsa is working on acquiring new images for ''Brotherhood'' memories, beginning with [[Patching The Leak]]. If this is the case, I would reword the entire article, leave the apprentice revamp tag on there, and then work on Fall of the Palaiologi (assuming you approve :P) while I wait for the images. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 21:49, January 20, 2012 (UTC)
	*Hm sorry for the delay in my reply, Nos. Anyway, Destruction reads well enough, good opening section. Read through it, and you're right, it's slightly short, though on no fault of yours - I can't really think of anything else that can be added. Maybe mention that Yusuf and his Assassins helped by clearing the docks, and add into the aftermath how the Ottoman Navy was crippled? (which I assume since they weren't able to chase after Ezio :p) Otherwise, I approve of the nomination.		*Hm sorry for the delay in my reply, Nos. Anyway, Destruction reads well enough, good opening section. Read through it, and you're right, it's slightly short, though on no fault of yours - I can't really think of anything else that can be added. Maybe mention that Yusuf and his Assassins helped by clearing the docks, and add into the aftermath how the Ottoman Navy was crippled? (which I assume since they weren't able to chase after Ezio :p) Otherwise, I approve of the nomination.
	:As for the Passion and the Fall articles, sure both of those should be fine. And you're right, the Passion could use a couple more images, but waiting for Vatsa's high quality ones should be worth it. Your plan to work them in tandem should work for the last rank.		:As for the Passion and the Fall articles, sure both of those should be fine. And you're right, the Passion could use a couple more images, but waiting for Vatsa's high quality ones should be worth it. Your plan to work them in tandem should work for the last rank.
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	:''[[Destruction of the Great Chain]]'' - At FA voting, I'd love a vote if you have a minute, thanks in advance.		:''[[Destruction of the Great Chain]]'' - At FA voting, I'd love a vote if you have a minute, thanks in advance.
	:''[[Colosseum Passion Play]]'' - Waiting on final images from Vatsa for accompanying memories.		:''[[Colosseum Passion Play]]'' - Waiting on final images from Vatsa for accompanying memories.
	:''[[Fall of the Palaiologi]]'' - Waiting on final revisions from both you and myself.		:''Fall of the Palaiologi'' - Waiting on final revisions from both you and myself.

	:Well, that's pretty much it. I hope this clarifies this whole last bit, as I was rather confused myself. Thanks GD. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 02:00, January 25, 2012 (UTC)		:Well, that's pretty much it. I hope this clarifies this whole last bit, as I was rather confused myself. Thanks GD. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 02:00, January 25, 2012 (UTC)
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	*Don't worry about it, it's a very minor issue. As for the Fall, I'll go vote on it after this, and will also wait for your final update on the Colosseum. Just remember that all will have to clear voting before your last rank.		*Don't worry about it, it's a very minor issue. As for the Fall, I'll go vote on it after this, and will also wait for your final update on the Colosseum. Just remember that all will have to clear voting before your last rank.
	:Regarding the brief bit you have to say before the Istruttore nomination, not to worry, I won't submit the application until you feel you're ready. It's up to you almost more than up to me, so say as you will when the time comes. :) =[[User:GuardDog\|GuardDog]] 14:15, January 26, 2012 (UTC)		:Regarding the brief bit you have to say before the Istruttore nomination, not to worry, I won't submit the application until you feel you're ready. It's up to you almost more than up to me, so say as you will when the time comes. :) =[[User:GuardDog\|GuardDog]] 14:15, January 26, 2012 (UTC)
	*Well, this is just a brief message to say that [[Destruction of the Great Chain]] has passed as FA, which now means 3 of the 5 articles have passed. [[Fall of the Palaiologi]] is currently voting, and [[Colosseum Passion Play]] just needs the final Vatsa images. Thanks. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[Message_Wall:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 03:00, January 30, 2012 (UTC)		*Well, this is just a brief message to say that [[Destruction of the Great Chain]] has passed as FA, which now means 3 of the 5 articles have passed. Fall of the Palaiologi is currently voting, and [[Colosseum Passion Play]] just needs the final Vatsa images. Thanks. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[Message_Wall:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 03:00, January 30, 2012 (UTC)
	*Thanks for the update. Sorry for a slight miscount I had with your rank (should have been 13 after your first, then 14 after your next two), thus I'll just give you 14 now, a bit late. 15 will be awarded upon nomination of the last two, then we can have our final discussion here. =[[User:GuardDog\|GuardDog]] 10:59, January 30, 2012 (UTC)		*Thanks for the update. Sorry for a slight miscount I had with your rank (should have been 13 after your first, then 14 after your next two), thus I'll just give you 14 now, a bit late. 15 will be awarded upon nomination of the last two, then we can have our final discussion here. =[[User:GuardDog\|GuardDog]] 10:59, January 30, 2012 (UTC)
	*Well, [[Fall of the Palaiologi]] has passed as FA, leaving only [[Colosseum Passion Play]]. The article's basically done, except that it does need those final Vatsa images. I'm not sure when he'll have them, though I hope soon. I would consider asking him again, but I don't want to come off as a badgerer. Possible if I nominated the article, it would catalyze him to get those final images? I'm not sure at this point, but I would like for the article to be nominated soon. Thanks. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[Message_Wall:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 01:24, February 2, 2012 (UTC)		*Well, Fall of the Palaiologi has passed as FA, leaving only [[Colosseum Passion Play]]. The article's basically done, except that it does need those final Vatsa images. I'm not sure when he'll have them, though I hope soon. I would consider asking him again, but I don't want to come off as a badgerer. Possible if I nominated the article, it would catalyze him to get those final images? I'm not sure at this point, but I would like for the article to be nominated soon. Thanks. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[Message_Wall:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 01:24, February 2, 2012 (UTC)
	*Sure, I agree, go ahead and nominate it. I just recommend you mention that it might still need images, and that you'll be adding them as soon as they're available. It might even be acceptable to some as is, and if not, at least people can begin reading/assessing it. =[[User:GuardDog\|GuardDog]] 10:32, February 2, 2012 (UTC)		*Sure, I agree, go ahead and nominate it. I just recommend you mention that it might still need images, and that you'll be adding them as soon as they're available. It might even be acceptable to some as is, and if not, at least people can begin reading/assessing it. =[[User:GuardDog\|GuardDog]] 10:32, February 2, 2012 (UTC)
	*Alright, well I've nominated Fall, so a final vote from you there would be great. I'll monitor the FA nomination page, and hopefully this can pass relatively easily and then I can just conclude my apprenticeship with that last final bit I was talking with you about. Thanks :P. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[Message_Wall:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 03:02, February 3, 2012 (UTC)		*Alright, well I've nominated Fall, so a final vote from you there would be great. I'll monitor the FA nomination page, and hopefully this can pass relatively easily and then I can just conclude my apprenticeship with that last final bit I was talking with you about. Thanks :P. [[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:Eurostile;font-size:18px;color:#6698FF;">'''Nostalgia AC'''</span>]] [[Message_Wall:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:Eurostile;color:#150517;">Let's talk.</span></sup>]] 03:02, February 3, 2012 (UTC)