Assassin's Creed Wiki:Apprentices/IlMualim/PigeonCoop - Revision history

imported>Stormbeast at 16:52, 1 May 2013

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	====Masters Notes====		====Masters Notes====
	*Good luck! --[[User:TheSt0ryTeller\|<span style="font-family:Century Schoolbook;font-size:19px;color:green;">'''Teller'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:TheSt0ryTeller\|<sup><span style="font-family:Gill Sans MS;color:yellow;">Words, On my Screen :O</span></sup>]] 06:59, October 6, 2012 (UTC)		*Good luck! --[[User:TheSt0ryTeller\|<span style="font-family:Century Schoolbook;font-size:19px;color:green;">'''Teller'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:TheSt0ryTeller\|<sup><span style="font-family:Gill Sans MS;color:yellow;">Words, On my Screen :O</span></sup>]] 06:59, October 6, 2012 (UTC)
			*You have 30 seconds to complete this assignment. Ready. Set. GO! {{User:Stormbeast/sig}} 16:52, May 1, 2013 (UTC)

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	*Good luck! --[[User:TheSt0ryTeller\|<span style="font-family:Century Schoolbook;font-size:19px;color:green;">'''Teller'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:TheSt0ryTeller\|<sup><span style="font-family:Gill Sans MS;color:yellow;">Words, On my Screen :O</span></sup>]] 06:59, October 6, 2012 (UTC)		*Good luck! --[[User:TheSt0ryTeller\|<span style="font-family:Century Schoolbook;font-size:19px;color:green;">'''Teller'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:TheSt0ryTeller\|<sup><span style="font-family:Gill Sans MS;color:yellow;">Words, On my Screen :O</span></sup>]] 06:59, October 6, 2012 (UTC)
			*I'll give you an extended two minutes on this one. You're welcome. {{User:Stormbeast/sig}} 16:52, May 1, 2013 (UTC)

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imported>Amnestyyy at 15:45, 1 May 2013

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	[[File:Pigeoncoopapp.png\|center\|300px]] '''The following page is an apprentice assignment page, which acts as a connection between the Apprentice, [[User:IlMualim\|IlMualim]] , and their Mentor, [[User:~~TheSt0ryTeller~~\|~~TheSt0ryTeller~~]] . It exists as an external talk page, aimed at dealing with all aspects of the apprenticeship. Only the above mentioned users and the [[Assassin's_Creed_Wiki:Staff\|staff]] have permission to converse here. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the wiki.'''		[[File:Pigeoncoopapp.png\|center\|300px]] '''The following page is an apprentice assignment page, which acts as a connection between the Apprentice, [[User:IlMualim\|IlMualim]] , and their Mentor, [[User:Stormbeast\|Stormbeast]]. It exists as an external talk page, aimed at dealing with all aspects of the apprenticeship. Only the above mentioned users and the [[Assassin's_Creed_Wiki:Staff\|staff]] have permission to converse here. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the wiki.'''

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imported>TheSt0ryTeller: Woops!

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	===Revamp Task 5 - [[Auguste Oberlin]]===		===Revamp Task 2 - [[Auguste Oberlin]]===
	This page is good, it's writing is well but there are some issues, the picture is squishing the text between itself and the infobox, lacks quotes and could be expanded partially. You wanted an MP task, this is where you start.		This page is good, it's writing is well but there are some issues, the picture is squishing the text between itself and the infobox, lacks quotes and could be expanded partially. You wanted an MP task, this is where you start.

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imported>TheSt0ryTeller at 06:59, 6 October 2012

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-[[File:Pigeoncoopapp.png|center|300px]] '''The following page is an apprentice assignment page, which acts as a connection between the Apprentice, [[User:IlMualim|IlMualim]] , and their Mentor, [[User:Subject 12|Subject 12]] . It exists as an external talk page, aimed at dealing with all aspects of the apprenticeship. Only the above mentioned users and the [[Assassin's_Creed_Wiki:Staff|staff]] have permission to converse here. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the wiki.'''
+[[File:Pigeoncoopapp.png|center|300px]] '''The following page is an apprentice assignment page, which acts as a connection between the Apprentice, [[User:IlMualim|IlMualim]] , and their Mentor, [[User:TheSt0ryTeller|TheSt0ryTeller]] . It exists as an external talk page, aimed at dealing with all aspects of the apprenticeship. Only the above mentioned users and the [[Assassin's_Creed_Wiki:Staff|staff]] have permission to converse here. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the wiki.'''
 ==Project 1: [[Crusaders]]==
 So, a fairly straightforward assignment, what's mainly to be done is source it, revamp it, and basically tidy it up. Any additional info you can add is also welcome. Good luck --''[[User:Subject 12|<span style="font-family:copperplate gothic light;font-size:17px;color:#C11B17;">'''Twelve'''</span>]]'' [[User Talk:Subject 12|<sup><font color="silver">Talk to me</font></sup>]] 13:13, April 20, 2012 (UTC)
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 *K, it's done. Tell me whether or not it is ready to be published 12. [[User:IlMualim|<span style="font-family:Brush Script MT;font-size:20px;color:#008000;">'''IlMualim'''</span>]] [[User Talk:IlMualim|<sup><span style="font-family:Forte;font-size:10px;color:#8B0000">Wanna Chat</span></sup>]] 16:31, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
 *Hey 12. The assignment's [[Crusaders|done]], let me know when you have a new one for me, or if I'm supposed to choose one like last time. [[User:IlMualim|<span style="font-family:Brush Script MT;font-size:20px;color:#008000;">'''IlMualim'''</span>]] [[User Talk:IlMualim|<sup><span style="font-family:Forte;font-size:10px;color:#8B0000">Wanna Chat</span></sup>]] 06:08, May 4, 2012 (UTC)
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imported>IlMualim at 06:08, 4 May 2012

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	*Right, nice touch, you could just maybe add a different caption to his image, like "Robert with his Templar crusaders." Also, there are still a few double links: Assassins, Altair and Robert de sable. Also, the AC1 in the trivia can be changed to ''[[Assassin's Creed]]''. Other than that, it looks good. --''[[User:Subject 12\|<span style="font-family:copperplate gothic light;font-size:17px;color:#C11B17;">'''Twelve'''</span>]]'' [[User Talk:Subject 12\|<sup><font color="silver">Talk to me</font></sup>]] 13:51, April 23, 2012 (UTC)		*Right, nice touch, you could just maybe add a different caption to his image, like "Robert with his Templar crusaders." Also, there are still a few double links: Assassins, Altair and Robert de sable. Also, the AC1 in the trivia can be changed to ''[[Assassin's Creed]]''. Other than that, it looks good. --''[[User:Subject 12\|<span style="font-family:copperplate gothic light;font-size:17px;color:#C11B17;">'''Twelve'''</span>]]'' [[User Talk:Subject 12\|<sup><font color="silver">Talk to me</font></sup>]] 13:51, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
	*K, it's done. Tell me whether or not it is ready to be published 12. [[User:IlMualim\|<span style="font-family:Brush Script MT;font-size:20px;color:#008000;">'''IlMualim'''</span>]] [[User Talk:IlMualim\|<sup><span style="font-family:Forte;font-size:10px;color:#8B0000">Wanna Chat</span></sup>]] 16:31, April 23, 2012 (UTC)		*K, it's done. Tell me whether or not it is ready to be published 12. [[User:IlMualim\|<span style="font-family:Brush Script MT;font-size:20px;color:#008000;">'''IlMualim'''</span>]] [[User Talk:IlMualim\|<sup><span style="font-family:Forte;font-size:10px;color:#8B0000">Wanna Chat</span></sup>]] 16:31, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
			*Hey 12. The assignment's [[Crusaders\|done]], let me know when you have a new one for me, or if I'm supposed to choose one like last time. [[User:IlMualim\|<span style="font-family:Brush Script MT;font-size:20px;color:#008000;">'''IlMualim'''</span>]] [[User Talk:IlMualim\|<sup><span style="font-family:Forte;font-size:10px;color:#8B0000">Wanna Chat</span></sup>]] 06:08, May 4, 2012 (UTC)
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imported>IlMualim at 16:31, 23 April 2012

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	*Ok done that, just one thing though, I added another pic in the gallery, check if it is worth being there. Nothing else other than what you told. [[User:IlMualim\|<span style="font-family:Brush Script MT;font-size:20px;color:#008000;">'''IlMualim'''</span>]] [[User Talk:IlMualim\|<sup><span style="font-family:Forte;font-size:10px;color:#8B0000">Wanna Chat</span></sup>]] 13:19, April 23, 2012 (UTC)		*Ok done that, just one thing though, I added another pic in the gallery, check if it is worth being there. Nothing else other than what you told. [[User:IlMualim\|<span style="font-family:Brush Script MT;font-size:20px;color:#008000;">'''IlMualim'''</span>]] [[User Talk:IlMualim\|<sup><span style="font-family:Forte;font-size:10px;color:#8B0000">Wanna Chat</span></sup>]] 13:19, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
	*Right, nice touch, you could just maybe add a different caption to his image, like "Robert with his Templar crusaders." Also, there are still a few double links: Assassins, Altair and Robert de sable. Also, the AC1 in the trivia can be changed to ''[[Assassin's Creed]]''. Other than that, it looks good. --''[[User:Subject 12\|<span style="font-family:copperplate gothic light;font-size:17px;color:#C11B17;">'''Twelve'''</span>]]'' [[User Talk:Subject 12\|<sup><font color="silver">Talk to me</font></sup>]] 13:51, April 23, 2012 (UTC)		*Right, nice touch, you could just maybe add a different caption to his image, like "Robert with his Templar crusaders." Also, there are still a few double links: Assassins, Altair and Robert de sable. Also, the AC1 in the trivia can be changed to ''[[Assassin's Creed]]''. Other than that, it looks good. --''[[User:Subject 12\|<span style="font-family:copperplate gothic light;font-size:17px;color:#C11B17;">'''Twelve'''</span>]]'' [[User Talk:Subject 12\|<sup><font color="silver">Talk to me</font></sup>]] 13:51, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
			*K, it's done. Tell me whether or not it is ready to be published 12. [[User:IlMualim\|<span style="font-family:Brush Script MT;font-size:20px;color:#008000;">'''IlMualim'''</span>]] [[User Talk:IlMualim\|<sup><span style="font-family:Forte;font-size:10px;color:#8B0000">Wanna Chat</span></sup>]] 16:31, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
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imported>Subject 12: /* Comments: */

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	*A few things. First just remove the table from the trivia. Change it into a few lines. Also, remove the Teutonic, Templar and Hospitalier crosses from the gallery, they don't really pertain to the subject. Um, The second image of Haras during the seige can be removed, better suited on his own page, the image of the Hospitalier knight can be resized and put in the gallery, it looks a bit odd just standing out there. Double links are still present through the page, Assassins, Haras, King Richard, Robert de Sable and Assault on Masyaf for example. You can remove the links in the image description of the gallery to eliminate most of the double links. Other than that, it looks good. --''[[User:Subject 12\|<span style="font-family:copperplate gothic light;font-size:17px;color:#C11B17;">'''Twelve'''</span>]]'' [[User Talk:Subject 12\|<sup><font color="silver">Talk to me</font></sup>]] 12:08, April 23, 2012 (UTC)		*A few things. First just remove the table from the trivia. Change it into a few lines. Also, remove the Teutonic, Templar and Hospitalier crosses from the gallery, they don't really pertain to the subject. Um, The second image of Haras during the seige can be removed, better suited on his own page, the image of the Hospitalier knight can be resized and put in the gallery, it looks a bit odd just standing out there. Double links are still present through the page, Assassins, Haras, King Richard, Robert de Sable and Assault on Masyaf for example. You can remove the links in the image description of the gallery to eliminate most of the double links. Other than that, it looks good. --''[[User:Subject 12\|<span style="font-family:copperplate gothic light;font-size:17px;color:#C11B17;">'''Twelve'''</span>]]'' [[User Talk:Subject 12\|<sup><font color="silver">Talk to me</font></sup>]] 12:08, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
	*Ok done that, just one thing though, I added another pic in the gallery, check if it is worth being there. Nothing else other than what you told. [[User:IlMualim\|<span style="font-family:Brush Script MT;font-size:20px;color:#008000;">'''IlMualim'''</span>]] [[User Talk:IlMualim\|<sup><span style="font-family:Forte;font-size:10px;color:#8B0000">Wanna Chat</span></sup>]] 13:19, April 23, 2012 (UTC)		*Ok done that, just one thing though, I added another pic in the gallery, check if it is worth being there. Nothing else other than what you told. [[User:IlMualim\|<span style="font-family:Brush Script MT;font-size:20px;color:#008000;">'''IlMualim'''</span>]] [[User Talk:IlMualim\|<sup><span style="font-family:Forte;font-size:10px;color:#8B0000">Wanna Chat</span></sup>]] 13:19, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
			*Right, nice touch, you could just maybe add a different caption to his image, like "Robert with his Templar crusaders." Also, there are still a few double links: Assassins, Altair and Robert de sable. Also, the AC1 in the trivia can be changed to ''[[Assassin's Creed]]''. Other than that, it looks good. --''[[User:Subject 12\|<span style="font-family:copperplate gothic light;font-size:17px;color:#C11B17;">'''Twelve'''</span>]]'' [[User Talk:Subject 12\|<sup><font color="silver">Talk to me</font></sup>]] 13:51, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

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imported>IlMualim at 13:19, 23 April 2012

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	*Yep, if you want, you can mention it in the trivia though. --''[[User:Subject 12\|<span style="font-family:copperplate gothic light;font-size:17px;color:#C11B17;">'''Twelve'''</span>]]'' [[User Talk:Subject 12\|<sup><font color="silver">Talk to me</font></sup>]] 10:20, April 23, 2012 (UTC)		*Yep, if you want, you can mention it in the trivia though. --''[[User:Subject 12\|<span style="font-family:copperplate gothic light;font-size:17px;color:#C11B17;">'''Twelve'''</span>]]'' [[User Talk:Subject 12\|<sup><font color="silver">Talk to me</font></sup>]] 10:20, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
	*[[User:IlMualim/sandbox\|There]]. Removed all OOU references, double links, added and tidied info, and put the flags under the trivia section. Anything else Twelve? [[User:IlMualim\|<span style="font-family:Brush Script MT;font-size:20px;color:#008000;">'''IlMualim'''</span>]] [[User Talk:IlMualim\|<sup><span style="font-family:Forte;font-size:10px;color:#8B0000">Wanna Chat</span></sup>]] 11:34, April 23, 2012 (UTC)		*[[User:IlMualim/sandbox\|There]]. Removed all OOU references, double links, added and tidied info, and put the flags under the trivia section. Anything else Twelve? [[User:IlMualim\|<span style="font-family:Brush Script MT;font-size:20px;color:#008000;">'''IlMualim'''</span>]] [[User Talk:IlMualim\|<sup><span style="font-family:Forte;font-size:10px;color:#8B0000">Wanna Chat</span></sup>]] 11:34, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
	*A few things. First just remove the table from the trivia. Change it into a few lines. Also, remove the Teutonic, Templar and Hospitalier crosses from the gallery, they don't really pertain to the subject. Um, The second image of Haras during the seige can be removed, better suited on his own page, the image of the Hospitalier knight can be resized and put in the gallery, it looks a bit odd just standing out there. Double links are still present through the page, Assassins, Haras, King Richard, Robert de Sable and Assault on Masyaf for example. You can remove the links in the image description of the gallery to eliminate most of the double links. Other than that, it looks good. --''[[User:Subject 12\|<span style="font-family:copperplate gothic light;font-size:17px;color:#C11B17;">'''Twelve'''</span>]]'' [[User Talk:Subject 12\|<sup><font color="silver">Talk to me</font></sup>]] 12:08, April 23, 2012 (UTC)		*A few things. First just remove the table from the trivia. Change it into a few lines. Also, remove the Teutonic, Templar and Hospitalier crosses from the gallery, they don't really pertain to the subject. Um, The second image of Haras during the seige can be removed, better suited on his own page, the image of the Hospitalier knight can be resized and put in the gallery, it looks a bit odd just standing out there. Double links are still present through the page, Assassins, Haras, King Richard, Robert de Sable and Assault on Masyaf for example. You can remove the links in the image description of the gallery to eliminate most of the double links. Other than that, it looks good. --''[[User:Subject 12\|<span style="font-family:copperplate gothic light;font-size:17px;color:#C11B17;">'''Twelve'''</span>]]'' [[User Talk:Subject 12\|<sup><font color="silver">Talk to me</font></sup>]] 12:08, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
			*Ok done that, just one thing though, I added another pic in the gallery, check if it is worth being there. Nothing else other than what you told. [[User:IlMualim\|<span style="font-family:Brush Script MT;font-size:20px;color:#008000;">'''IlMualim'''</span>]] [[User Talk:IlMualim\|<sup><span style="font-family:Forte;font-size:10px;color:#8B0000">Wanna Chat</span></sup>]] 13:19, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

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imported>Subject 12: /* Comments: */

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	*Yep, if you want, you can mention it in the trivia though. --''[[User:Subject 12\|<span style="font-family:copperplate gothic light;font-size:17px;color:#C11B17;">'''Twelve'''</span>]]'' [[User Talk:Subject 12\|<sup><font color="silver">Talk to me</font></sup>]] 10:20, April 23, 2012 (UTC)		*Yep, if you want, you can mention it in the trivia though. --''[[User:Subject 12\|<span style="font-family:copperplate gothic light;font-size:17px;color:#C11B17;">'''Twelve'''</span>]]'' [[User Talk:Subject 12\|<sup><font color="silver">Talk to me</font></sup>]] 10:20, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
	*[[User:IlMualim/sandbox\|There]]. Removed all OOU references, double links, added and tidied info, and put the flags under the trivia section. Anything else Twelve? [[User:IlMualim\|<span style="font-family:Brush Script MT;font-size:20px;color:#008000;">'''IlMualim'''</span>]] [[User Talk:IlMualim\|<sup><span style="font-family:Forte;font-size:10px;color:#8B0000">Wanna Chat</span></sup>]] 11:34, April 23, 2012 (UTC)		*[[User:IlMualim/sandbox\|There]]. Removed all OOU references, double links, added and tidied info, and put the flags under the trivia section. Anything else Twelve? [[User:IlMualim\|<span style="font-family:Brush Script MT;font-size:20px;color:#008000;">'''IlMualim'''</span>]] [[User Talk:IlMualim\|<sup><span style="font-family:Forte;font-size:10px;color:#8B0000">Wanna Chat</span></sup>]] 11:34, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
			*A few things. First just remove the table from the trivia. Change it into a few lines. Also, remove the Teutonic, Templar and Hospitalier crosses from the gallery, they don't really pertain to the subject. Um, The second image of Haras during the seige can be removed, better suited on his own page, the image of the Hospitalier knight can be resized and put in the gallery, it looks a bit odd just standing out there. Double links are still present through the page, Assassins, Haras, King Richard, Robert de Sable and Assault on Masyaf for example. You can remove the links in the image description of the gallery to eliminate most of the double links. Other than that, it looks good. --''[[User:Subject 12\|<span style="font-family:copperplate gothic light;font-size:17px;color:#C11B17;">'''Twelve'''</span>]]'' [[User Talk:Subject 12\|<sup><font color="silver">Talk to me</font></sup>]] 12:08, April 23, 2012 (UTC)


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imported>IlMualim at 11:34, 23 April 2012

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	*Hey Twelve should I include a section mentioning all the flags related to the Crusaders? 'Cause if I doo it will be OOU references won't it? [[User:IlMualim\|<span style="font-family:Brush Script MT;font-size:20px;color:#008000;">'''IlMualim'''</span>]] [[User Talk:IlMualim\|<sup><span style="font-family:Forte;font-size:10px;color:#8B0000">Wanna Chat</span></sup>]] 10:17, April 23, 2012 (UTC)		*Hey Twelve should I include a section mentioning all the flags related to the Crusaders? 'Cause if I doo it will be OOU references won't it? [[User:IlMualim\|<span style="font-family:Brush Script MT;font-size:20px;color:#008000;">'''IlMualim'''</span>]] [[User Talk:IlMualim\|<sup><span style="font-family:Forte;font-size:10px;color:#8B0000">Wanna Chat</span></sup>]] 10:17, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
	*Yep, if you want, you can mention it in the trivia though. --''[[User:Subject 12\|<span style="font-family:copperplate gothic light;font-size:17px;color:#C11B17;">'''Twelve'''</span>]]'' [[User Talk:Subject 12\|<sup><font color="silver">Talk to me</font></sup>]] 10:20, April 23, 2012 (UTC)		*Yep, if you want, you can mention it in the trivia though. --''[[User:Subject 12\|<span style="font-family:copperplate gothic light;font-size:17px;color:#C11B17;">'''Twelve'''</span>]]'' [[User Talk:Subject 12\|<sup><font color="silver">Talk to me</font></sup>]] 10:20, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
			*[[User:IlMualim/sandbox\|There]]. Removed all OOU references, double links, added and tidied info, and put the flags under the trivia section. Anything else Twelve? [[User:IlMualim\|<span style="font-family:Brush Script MT;font-size:20px;color:#008000;">'''IlMualim'''</span>]] [[User Talk:IlMualim\|<sup><span style="font-family:Forte;font-size:10px;color:#8B0000">Wanna Chat</span></sup>]] 11:34, April 23, 2012 (UTC)


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	*Yep, if you want, you can mention it in the trivia though. --''[[User:Subject 12\|<span style="font-family:copperplate gothic light;font-size:17px;color:#C11B17;">'''Twelve'''</span>]]'' [[User Talk:Subject 12\|<sup><font color="silver">Talk to me</font></sup>]] 10:20, April 23, 2012 (UTC)		*Yep, if you want, you can mention it in the trivia though. --''[[User:Subject 12\|<span style="font-family:copperplate gothic light;font-size:17px;color:#C11B17;">'''Twelve'''</span>]]'' [[User Talk:Subject 12\|<sup><font color="silver">Talk to me</font></sup>]] 10:20, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
	*[[User:IlMualim/sandbox\|There]]. Removed all OOU references, double links, added and tidied info, and put the flags under the trivia section. Anything else Twelve? [[User:IlMualim\|<span style="font-family:Brush Script MT;font-size:20px;color:#008000;">'''IlMualim'''</span>]] [[User Talk:IlMualim\|<sup><span style="font-family:Forte;font-size:10px;color:#8B0000">Wanna Chat</span></sup>]] 11:34, April 23, 2012 (UTC)		*[[User:IlMualim/sandbox\|There]]. Removed all OOU references, double links, added and tidied info, and put the flags under the trivia section. Anything else Twelve? [[User:IlMualim\|<span style="font-family:Brush Script MT;font-size:20px;color:#008000;">'''IlMualim'''</span>]] [[User Talk:IlMualim\|<sup><span style="font-family:Forte;font-size:10px;color:#8B0000">Wanna Chat</span></sup>]] 11:34, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
	*A few things. First just remove the table from the trivia. Change it into a few lines. Also, remove the Teutonic, Templar and Hospitalier crosses from the gallery, they don't really pertain to the subject. Um, The second image of Haras during the seige can be removed, better suited on his own page, the image of the Hospitalier knight can be resized and put in the gallery, it looks a bit odd just standing out there. Double links are still present through the page, Assassins, Haras, King Richard, Robert de Sable and Assault on Masyaf for example. You can remove the links in the image description of the gallery to eliminate most of the double links. Other than that, it looks good. --''[[User:Subject 12\|<span style="font-family:copperplate gothic light;font-size:17px;color:#C11B17;">'''Twelve'''</span>]]'' [[User Talk:Subject 12\|<sup><font color="silver">Talk to me</font></sup>]] 12:08, April 23, 2012 (UTC)		*A few things. First just remove the table from the trivia. Change it into a few lines. Also, remove the Teutonic, Templar and Hospitalier crosses from the gallery, they don't really pertain to the subject. Um, The second image of Haras during the seige can be removed, better suited on his own page, the image of the Hospitalier knight can be resized and put in the gallery, it looks a bit odd just standing out there. Double links are still present through the page, Assassins, Haras, King Richard, Robert de Sable and Assault on Masyaf for example. You can remove the links in the image description of the gallery to eliminate most of the double links. Other than that, it looks good. --''[[User:Subject 12\|<span style="font-family:copperplate gothic light;font-size:17px;color:#C11B17;">'''Twelve'''</span>]]'' [[User Talk:Subject 12\|<sup><font color="silver">Talk to me</font></sup>]] 12:08, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
			*Ok done that, just one thing though, I added another pic in the gallery, check if it is worth being there. Nothing else other than what you told. [[User:IlMualim\|<span style="font-family:Brush Script MT;font-size:20px;color:#008000;">'''IlMualim'''</span>]] [[User Talk:IlMualim\|<sup><span style="font-family:Forte;font-size:10px;color:#8B0000">Wanna Chat</span></sup>]] 13:19, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

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