Assassin's Creed Wiki:Apprentices/Gabriel Auditore - Revision history

imported>Soranin: /* Previous Assignment(s) (Major) */

2022-01-25T12:34:34Z

Previous Assignment(s) (Major)

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	* Revamp on Bugs/Assassin's Creed II		* Revamp on Bugs/Assassin's Creed II
	* Sourcing on [[Francisco Randez]]		* Sourcing on [[Francisco Randez]]
	* Revamp on [[Assassin's Creed Achievement Guide/List of Templar Locations\|Templar Locations]]		* Revamp on [Assassin's Creed Achievement Guide/List of Templar Locations\|Templar Locations]
	* Revamp on [[Crafting]]		* Revamp on [[Crafting]]
	* Creation of [[Assassin's Creed III (mobile game)]]		* Creation of [[Assassin's Creed III (mobile game)]]

imported>Soranin: /* Revamp on Templar Locations */

2022-01-24T13:54:00Z

Revamp on Templar Locations

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	-- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 07:19, October 19, 2012 (UTC)		-- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 07:19, October 19, 2012 (UTC)
	==== Revamp on [[Assassin's Creed Achievement Guide/List of Templar Locations\|Templar Locations]] ====		==== Revamp on Assassin's Creed Achievement Guide/List of Templar Locations\|Templar Locations ====
	All-round good job, the page was certainly a mess. Not really a complaint, more just something I want to comment on, otherwise I'll have nothing to comment on: the use of ''"There was"'' and ''"Another"'' got a bit repetitive, but because the page only serves as a guide, that's not anything worth fixing. -- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 12:41, November 18, 2012 (UTC)		All-round good job, the page was certainly a mess. Not really a complaint, more just something I want to comment on, otherwise I'll have nothing to comment on: the use of ''"There was"'' and ''"Another"'' got a bit repetitive, but because the page only serves as a guide, that's not anything worth fixing. -- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 12:41, November 18, 2012 (UTC)

	==== Revamp on [[Crafting]] ====		==== Revamp on [[Crafting]] ====
	I imagine you spent most of the night pressing the backspace/delete button and the enter key. Been there, albeit on a much smaller scale, so I know the pain. Here, have a rank 4.<br />		I imagine you spent most of the night pressing the backspace/delete button and the enter key. Been there, albeit on a much smaller scale, so I know the pain. Here, have a rank 4.<br />

imported>Soranin at 02:03, 19 March 2021

2021-03-19T02:03:04Z

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	== Previous Assignment(s) (Major) ==		== Previous Assignment(s) (Major) ==
	* Revamp on [[Bugs/Assassin's Creed II]]		* Revamp on Bugs/Assassin's Creed II
	* Sourcing on [[Francisco Randez]]		* Sourcing on [[Francisco Randez]]
	* Revamp on [[Assassin's Creed Achievement Guide/List of Templar Locations\|Templar Locations]]		* Revamp on [[Assassin's Creed Achievement Guide/List of Templar Locations\|Templar Locations]]
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	== Evaluation ==		== Evaluation ==
	==== Revamp on [[Bugs/Assassin's Creed II]] ====		==== Revamp on Bugs/Assassin's Creed II ====
	I read the first quarter or so of the page and skimmed the rest, and it all looked mostly good. Only thing was that in academic/encyclopaedic writing, contraction's aren't used, so when one is spotted it should be fixed - "didn't" --> "did not". -- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 06:20, October 4, 2012 (UTC)		I read the first quarter or so of the page and skimmed the rest, and it all looked mostly good. Only thing was that in academic/encyclopaedic writing, contraction's aren't used, so when one is spotted it should be fixed - "didn't" --> "did not". -- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 06:20, October 4, 2012 (UTC)
	==== Sourcing on [[Francisco Randez]] ====		==== Sourcing on [[Francisco Randez]] ====

imported>VatsaAWB: Replacing duplicate image.; cosmetic changes

2013-04-21T05:51:52Z

Replacing duplicate image.; cosmetic changes

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	<p style="text-align: center;">'''The following text is a continuous log of [[User:Gabriel Auditore\|Gabriel Auditore]]'s apprenticeship. It exists for [[Assassin'~~s_Creed_Wiki~~:Staff\|staff]] eyes only. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the wiki.'''<br /></p>		<p style="text-align: center;">'''The following text is a continuous log of [[User:Gabriel Auditore\|Gabriel Auditore]]'s apprenticeship. It exists for [[Assassin's Creed Wiki:Staff\|staff]] eyes only. Any outside interference will result in an immediate ban from the wiki.'''<br /></p>

	==Current Assignment(s) (Major)==		== Current Assignment(s) (Major) ==
	*		*

	==Current Assignment(s) (Minor)==		== Current Assignment(s) (Minor) ==
	*		*

	==Previous Assignment(s) (Major)==		== Previous Assignment(s) (Major) ==
	*Revamp on [[Bugs/Assassin's Creed II]]		* Revamp on [[Bugs/Assassin's Creed II]]
	*Sourcing on [[Francisco Randez]]		* Sourcing on [[Francisco Randez]]
	*Revamp on [[Assassin's Creed Achievement Guide/List of Templar Locations\|Templar Locations]]		* Revamp on [[Assassin's Creed Achievement Guide/List of Templar Locations\|Templar Locations]]
	*Revamp on [[Crafting]]		* Revamp on [[Crafting]]
	*Creation of [[Assassin's Creed III (mobile game)]]		* Creation of [[Assassin's Creed III (mobile game)]]

	==Previous Assignment(s) (Minor)==		== Previous Assignment(s) (Minor) ==
	*		*

	==Evaluation==		== Evaluation ==
	====Revamp on [[Bugs/Assassin's Creed II]]====		==== Revamp on [[Bugs/Assassin's Creed II]] ====
	I read the first quarter or so of the page and skimmed the rest, and it all looked mostly good. Only thing was that in academic/encyclopaedic writing, contraction's aren't used, so when one is spotted it should be fixed - "didn't" --> "did not". -- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 06:20, October 4, 2012 (UTC)		I read the first quarter or so of the page and skimmed the rest, and it all looked mostly good. Only thing was that in academic/encyclopaedic writing, contraction's aren't used, so when one is spotted it should be fixed - "didn't" --> "did not". -- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 06:20, October 4, 2012 (UTC)
	====Sourcing on [[Francisco Randez]]====		==== Sourcing on [[Francisco Randez]] ====
	Kinda hard to screw up sourcing assuming you know the coding, so no problems here. Solid effort in locating these; I checked them out to make sure they were accurate, only to find that they were scribed in some kind of long lost ancient language from the inhabitants of Earth prior to humans. Simply amazing that you were able to decipher it all, so top marks! Take a promotion out of petty cash.<br>		Kinda hard to screw up sourcing assuming you know the coding, so no problems here. Solid effort in locating these; I checked them out to make sure they were accurate, only to find that they were scribed in some kind of long lost ancient language from the inhabitants of Earth prior to humans. Simply amazing that you were able to decipher it all, so top marks! Take a promotion out of petty cash.<br />
	<nowiki><Code removed.></nowiki>		<nowiki><Code removed.></nowiki>
	-- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 07:19, October 19, 2012 (UTC)		-- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 07:19, October 19, 2012 (UTC)
	====Revamp on [[Assassin's Creed Achievement Guide/List of Templar Locations\|Templar Locations]]====		==== Revamp on [[Assassin's Creed Achievement Guide/List of Templar Locations\|Templar Locations]] ====
	All-round good job, the page was certainly a mess. Not really a complaint, more just something I want to comment on, otherwise I'll have nothing to comment on: the use of ''"There was"'' and ''"Another"'' got a bit repetitive, but because the page only serves as a guide, that's not anything worth fixing. -- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 12:41, November 18, 2012 (UTC)		All-round good job, the page was certainly a mess. Not really a complaint, more just something I want to comment on, otherwise I'll have nothing to comment on: the use of ''"There was"'' and ''"Another"'' got a bit repetitive, but because the page only serves as a guide, that's not anything worth fixing. -- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 12:41, November 18, 2012 (UTC)
	====Revamp on [[Crafting]]====		==== Revamp on [[Crafting]] ====
	I imagine you spent most of the night pressing the backspace/delete button and the enter key. Been there, albeit on a much smaller scale, so I know the pain. Here, have a rank 4.<br>		I imagine you spent most of the night pressing the backspace/delete button and the enter key. Been there, albeit on a much smaller scale, so I know the pain. Here, have a rank 4.<br />
	<nowiki><Code removed.></nowiki>		<nowiki><Code removed.></nowiki>
	-- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 12:41, November 18, 2012 (UTC)		-- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 12:41, November 18, 2012 (UTC)
	====Creation of [[Assassin's Creed III (mobile game)]]====		==== Creation of [[Assassin's Creed III (mobile game)]] ====
	Well written article, but I checked some of the other mobile game pages to see how they're laid out, and noticed they also had a plot/storyline section. Might be worth adding one, unless it's incredibly similar to the main game. Other than that, top marks. -- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 00:58, December 18, 2012 (UTC)		Well written article, but I checked some of the other mobile game pages to see how they're laid out, and noticed they also had a plot/storyline section. Might be worth adding one, unless it's incredibly similar to the main game. Other than that, top marks. -- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 00:58, December 18, 2012 (UTC)

	==Staff Comments==		== Staff Comments ==
	*Just a quick note - GI deserves some compliments. Besides his work as an apprentice, he volunteered to help with a large project Sima wanted done (interactive conversation listing for ACIII) and is always willing to help others out when something needs to be done. Just felt like bringing it to your attention. [[User:Amnestyyy\|<span style="font-family:Blackadder ITC;font-size:19px;color:#FF033E;">'''Nesty'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:Amnestyyy\|<sup><span style="font-family:FlamencoD;color:#9966CC;">Contact me!</span></sup>]] 15:50, January 5, 2013 (UTC)		*Just a quick note - GI deserves some compliments. Besides his work as an apprentice, he volunteered to help with a large project Sima wanted done (interactive conversation listing for ACIII) and is always willing to help others out when something needs to be done. Just felt like bringing it to your attention. [[User:Amnestyyy\|<span style="font-family:Blackadder ITC;font-size:19px;color:#FF033E;">'''Nesty'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:Amnestyyy\|<sup><span style="font-family:FlamencoD;color:#9966CC;">Contact me!</span></sup>]] 15:50, January 5, 2013 (UTC)
	*As Nesty stated earlier, GI is doing well as an apprentice. I haven't read all of his assignments, though the ones I've seen have been thorough and finished in a timely manner. In addition, he is active on the IRC and throughout the wiki, and often volunteers to help others with avatars and other graphics. He's proven himself to be a good community member and editor, and is headed in the right direction. --[[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:futura;font-size:19px;color:#566D7E;">'''NOSTALGIA'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:futura;color:#FFFFFF;">TALK</span></sup>]] 01:32, January 31, 2013 (UTC)		*As Nesty stated earlier, GI is doing well as an apprentice. I haven't read all of his assignments, though the ones I've seen have been thorough and finished in a timely manner. In addition, he is active on the IRC and throughout the wiki, and often volunteers to help others with avatars and other graphics. He's proven himself to be a good community member and editor, and is headed in the right direction. --[[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:futura;font-size:19px;color:#566D7E;">'''NOSTALGIA'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:futura;color:#FFFFFF;">TALK</span></sup>]] 01:32, January 31, 2013 (UTC)

imported>Nostalgia AC: /* Staff Comments */

2013-01-31T01:32:34Z

Staff Comments

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	==Staff Comments==		==Staff Comments==
	*Just a quick note - GI deserves some compliments. Besides his work as an apprentice, he volunteered to help with a large project Sima wanted done (interactive conversation listing for ACIII) and is always willing to help others out when something needs to be done. Just felt like bringing it to your attention. [[User:Amnestyyy\|<span style="font-family:Blackadder ITC;font-size:19px;color:#FF033E;">'''Nesty'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:Amnestyyy\|<sup><span style="font-family:FlamencoD;color:#9966CC;">Contact me!</span></sup>]] 15:50, January 5, 2013 (UTC)		*Just a quick note - GI deserves some compliments. Besides his work as an apprentice, he volunteered to help with a large project Sima wanted done (interactive conversation listing for ACIII) and is always willing to help others out when something needs to be done. Just felt like bringing it to your attention. [[User:Amnestyyy\|<span style="font-family:Blackadder ITC;font-size:19px;color:#FF033E;">'''Nesty'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:Amnestyyy\|<sup><span style="font-family:FlamencoD;color:#9966CC;">Contact me!</span></sup>]] 15:50, January 5, 2013 (UTC)
			*As Nesty stated earlier, GI is doing well as an apprentice. I haven't read all of his assignments, though the ones I've seen have been thorough and finished in a timely manner. In addition, he is active on the IRC and throughout the wiki, and often volunteers to help others with avatars and other graphics. He's proven himself to be a good community member and editor, and is headed in the right direction. --[[User:Nostalgia AC\|<span style="font-family:futura;font-size:19px;color:#566D7E;">'''NOSTALGIA'''</span>]] [[User_Talk:Nostalgia AC\|<sup><span style="font-family:futura;color:#FFFFFF;">TALK</span></sup>]] 01:32, January 31, 2013 (UTC)

	{{Interviewhide}}		{{Interviewhide}}

imported>Amnestyyy: /* Staff Comments */

2013-01-05T15:50:46Z

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imported>'R BlaiddDdraig: Update

2012-12-18T00:58:41Z

Update

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	==Current Assignment(s) (Major)==		==Current Assignment(s) (Major)==
	*~~Creation of [[Assassin's Creed III (mobile game)]].~~		*

	==Current Assignment(s) (Minor)==		==Current Assignment(s) (Minor)==
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	==Previous Assignment(s) (Major)==		==Previous Assignment(s) (Major)==
	*Revamp on [[Bugs/Assassin's Creed II]].		*Revamp on [[Bugs/Assassin's Creed II]]
	*Sourcing on [[Francisco Randez]].		*Sourcing on [[Francisco Randez]]
	*Revamp on [[Assassin's Creed Achievement Guide/List of Templar Locations\|Templar Locations]].		*Revamp on [[Assassin's Creed Achievement Guide/List of Templar Locations\|Templar Locations]]
	*Revamp on [[Crafting]].		*Revamp on [[Crafting]]
			*Creation of [[Assassin's Creed III (mobile game)]]

	==Previous Assignment(s) (Minor)==		==Previous Assignment(s) (Minor)==
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	-- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 12:41, November 18, 2012 (UTC)		-- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 12:41, November 18, 2012 (UTC)
			====Creation of [[Assassin's Creed III (mobile game)]]====
			Well written article, but I checked some of the other mobile game pages to see how they're laid out, and noticed they also had a plot/storyline section. Might be worth adding one, unless it's incredibly similar to the main game. Other than that, top marks. -- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 00:58, December 18, 2012 (UTC)

	==Staff Comments==		==Staff Comments==

imported>Gabriel Auditore at 19:41, 18 November 2012

2012-11-18T19:41:47Z

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	====Revamp on [[Crafting]]====		====Revamp on [[Crafting]]====
	I imagine you spent most of the night pressing the backspace/delete button and the enter key. Been there, albeit on a much smaller scale, so I know the pain. Here, have a rank 4.<br>		I imagine you spent most of the night pressing the backspace/delete button and the enter key. Been there, albeit on a much smaller scale, so I know the pain. Here, have a rank 4.<br>
	<nowiki>~~{{AppRank\|4\|Discepolo}}~~</nowiki>		<nowiki><Code removed.></nowiki>
	-- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 12:41, November 18, 2012 (UTC)		-- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 12:41, November 18, 2012 (UTC)

imported>'R BlaiddDdraig: Update

2012-11-18T12:41:48Z

Update

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	==Current Assignment(s) (Major)==		==Current Assignment(s) (Major)==
	*		*Creation of [[Assassin's Creed III (mobile game)]].

	==Current Assignment(s) (Minor)==		==Current Assignment(s) (Minor)==
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	*Revamp on [[Bugs/Assassin's Creed II]].		*Revamp on [[Bugs/Assassin's Creed II]].
	*Sourcing on [[Francisco Randez]].		*Sourcing on [[Francisco Randez]].
			*Revamp on [[Assassin's Creed Achievement Guide/List of Templar Locations\|Templar Locations]].
			*Revamp on [[Crafting]].

	==Previous Assignment(s) (Minor)==		==Previous Assignment(s) (Minor)==
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	-- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 07:19, October 19, 2012 (UTC)		-- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 07:19, October 19, 2012 (UTC)
			====Revamp on [[Assassin's Creed Achievement Guide/List of Templar Locations\|Templar Locations]]====
			All-round good job, the page was certainly a mess. Not really a complaint, more just something I want to comment on, otherwise I'll have nothing to comment on: the use of ''"There was"'' and ''"Another"'' got a bit repetitive, but because the page only serves as a guide, that's not anything worth fixing. -- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 12:41, November 18, 2012 (UTC)
			====Revamp on [[Crafting]]====
			I imagine you spent most of the night pressing the backspace/delete button and the enter key. Been there, albeit on a much smaller scale, so I know the pain. Here, have a rank 4.<br>
			<nowiki>{{AppRank\|4\|Discepolo}}</nowiki>
			-- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 12:41, November 18, 2012 (UTC)

	==Staff Comments==		==Staff Comments==

imported>Gabriel Auditore: Removing code.

2012-10-19T07:31:15Z

Removing code.

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	====Sourcing on [[Francisco Randez]]====		====Sourcing on [[Francisco Randez]]====
	Kinda hard to screw up sourcing assuming you know the coding, so no problems here. Solid effort in locating these; I checked them out to make sure they were accurate, only to find that they were scribed in some kind of long lost ancient language from the inhabitants of Earth prior to humans. Simply amazing that you were able to decipher it all, so top marks! Take a promotion out of petty cash.<br>		Kinda hard to screw up sourcing assuming you know the coding, so no problems here. Solid effort in locating these; I checked them out to make sure they were accurate, only to find that they were scribed in some kind of long lost ancient language from the inhabitants of Earth prior to humans. Simply amazing that you were able to decipher it all, so top marks! Take a promotion out of petty cash.<br>
	<nowiki>~~{{AppRank\|3\|Milite}}~~</nowiki>		<nowiki><Code removed.></nowiki>
	-- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 07:19, October 19, 2012 (UTC)		-- {{Signature/'R BlaiddDdraig}} 07:19, October 19, 2012 (UTC)