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Needed improvements to writing

It's difficult to understand this plot as someone who hasn't played Dawn of Ragnarok. The writing should provide better context as opposed to listing action after action. When summarizing, there needs to be proper explanations for readers tying together these actions and events. It mentions Tyra asking Fritjof to forgive Einar, but it does not tell us what is in need of forgiving. What is significant about the group finding Ivaldi alive in the vault and the relic disassembled? Why they did they leave right after? Who is Sinmara? Right after that, it says Havi killed someone named Glod? But then what happened to Sinmara? It's important to remember that readers don't necessarily have all the background knowledge to understand summaries like this, and when an editor mentions an individual or a situation, they should give proper context to make it clear what they are about. Sol Pacificus^(Cyfiero) 23:46, 20 February 2023 (UTC)